
Unite the Lords, Bring Order to the World!
九合诸侯,一匡天下!
- Status
- Ongoing
- Length
- 88k Words
- Genre
- Historical
- Subgenre
- Pre-Qin Antiquity
- Updated
- 1y ago
- Source
- Qidian
Synopsis
44Chapters
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Reader comments 16
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The book is good, but I am a bit confused. The protagonist is an ordinary person. Even though he has the ability to look forward, he does not have the ability to govern a party or command an army. Why can he suddenly become a prime minister or a general in ancient times? Some places are taken for granted, and the plot is a bit fluid.
Since you have made the protagonist very talented, don't make the protagonist look stupid after the other new wise men have arrived. In the latest two chapters. I read this book to see the performance of the protagonist. The previous chapter is very good. It's that every time a new character appears, the protagonist looks like a baby.
The general is correct, but the details are lacking!
1. Drink fragrant tea. During the Spring and Autumn Period, tea was served as a dish, usually as a soup. "Yanzi Chunqiu" records, "Yanzi met King Jinggong, and ate rice with millet removed, and roasted three-yi-five-egg tea." In "Erya", the word "kutu" was explained as "the leaves can be roasted to make a soup." In ancient books such as "Tongjun Lu", there are records of tea being boiled with cinnamon, ginger and some spices. 2. Riding alone on a horse. Before Hufu riding and shooting, although nobles already had single-horse walking horses, they were generally used as tools for short-distance riding or hunting. They did not exist as a unit to fight against the enemy. War was still dominated by chariots.
Nowadays, there are very few books about this period. I once wrote about Qi State, but the results were not satisfactory. I don't know when the original version of the Spring and Autumn Period will be revived.
It was too abstract. In the early Spring and Autumn Period, the statutory law was formulated, and the content of the statutory law was still the version after the Tang Dynasty. Really funny.
Why does it feel like a running account? I really like this subject matter, but I feel that the author's writing skills are not strong enough.
I finished reading it in one go and it felt pretty good. The dialogues between the characters felt like translations of classical Chinese that I saw in high school. It was very touching. I hope the author can continue writing.
Opinions about this book
In terms of content, the first few chapters are relatively detailed before the protagonist becomes the Prime Minister, but the subsequent plot is a bit sketchy, not enough details, and written somewhat like a fable. However, it is quite good for a new author, and you can read it. The author can accumulate experience in this book first. If he opens a new book to add some details and historical materials at that time, and the plot setting is more subtle, there is definitely hope that it will become a high-quality book. Take your time first. The plot is a little too smooth. In fact, it still suffers from the problem of simple writing. Many places seem to be taken for granted because of insufficient details. The span of change in some places is too large and does not conform to the reality at that time. It would be more attractive to improve the content of this issue. Come on, hope it gets better and better
I translated another chapter today, and I have to continue translating it tomorrow, right? Then I'll watch the short video and watch the explanation. Either I'll forget about the translation in one go, or you can add one more chapter.
There is no objectivity, everything is subjective
First of all, the author has some background in history, but his writing style is extremely poor. It looks like a running account. Moreover, each character does not have some particularly outstanding personality traits, and many events are mentioned in one stroke. He will not focus on describing some details. Those authors who have nothing else to say should practice more and read more about how some excellent books are written?