My Panel Adds Proficiency Randomly

I saw in your introduction that there is a better way to play, practice magic skills plus righteous skills. Magic skills are not faster than righteous skills.

The idea is good, but the plot is too poisonous

I was quite interested in reading the introduction, and it was written based on this setting: working hard to practice the top skills of the righteous way, but the proficiency is added to the small cloud and rain technique, and constantly refining elixirs, but the proficiency is added to the formations. After the protagonist realized this, he tried hard to find various formulas, and discovered that a certain quick magic skill can actually greatly improve the righteous skills, and the lowest level of painting talismans can give great proficiency to high-level elixirs. But after taking a second look, I found that the author had not developed this idea at all. I thought the magic skills that added wrong proficiency were very strong. But the protagonist has completely become a proficiency plug-in with many side effects. This kind of thing is more fun by taking shortcuts, just like Terraria's random synthesis module And there are many classical plots, which can only be said to be tasteless.

I can barely watch it. Firstly: the plot is blunt. Secondly, I haven't even left the novice village yet. It's just this world or that world. Your power is too much and the world is 100% overturned. Thirdly, Goldfinger can't understand. Even if a righteous exercise is a righteous magic way, it adds 1 or only the magic way.

In particular, it describes the high-qualified sex demon on the ship. Later, it describes the girlfriend getting on the ship accidentally. It also describes the "girlfriend" who is average-qualified and has no support. The main character doesn't even know where the boat is headed, and the follow-up is the incompetent husband, right? 😄It's so poisonous! I like to write about being a tauren and going to porn sites, okay? Don't let this poison you

The map, the forces, etc. Were not explained clearly and they were immediately exterminated and the map was changed. The causes and consequences of the war and the characters were not clear. I was confused. After staying in the Taoist temple for a short time, I wrote about becoming a disciple, making alchemy and finding a girlfriend. Nothing else was explained. I wrote it in a hurry.

The plot is old-fashioned, and the protagonist's aura is still flowing. Without the protagonist's aura, he would have died countless times.

There are too many books to search for, so I can only mark them. Not my type.

Novel Golden Finger➕Classical Cultivation of Immortality

When you go to a place and mess it up, won't you be able to write if it's not messy? A third-level Qi practitioner, running around,

Everyone's life is hard enough, so they read online articles for fun, but in the end, ordinary people are just consumables in this plot. . . . The author is really not short of money

Although, can you please update it? Although there are only 3 votes, they are all given to you I don't want a eunuch.

The plot is okay, and I can see that the author has great ideas. However, the writing style is not good. Many places should have been filled with more ink, but due to the author's own ability level, it is basically just a brushstroke. It can be seen that there is a bit of the style of Emperor Pei Xian, but the rhythm is not good enough, and it is far from him. This book can be regarded as a trial work, and it will be better to rewrite it in the future when the author's writing style becomes more mature.

It's a good idea, but as other book friends said, the magic panel didn't work, and I was a little confused after seeing it. There wasn't much introduction to the background of the map, and the current distribution of forces was unclear. The appearance of the Nascent Soul Demon King was a bit abrupt, as was the Dragon Palace. There was no line connecting them, and the reader didn't know anything.

The design is actually okay, but your first chapter is still the second chapter. The San Gong is too confusing, and then it is not looking for you, but it is also looking for you. What is the logic of this plot? Are you the second one?

The hang-up is too small, which makes the front part more frustrating. The upgrade is too slow. This is the biggest failure. The author's level is good.

I thought it was the proficiency of practicing A plus B, but it turned out that C suddenly appeared after practicing A.

I don't know where you learned flashbacks. It's a very smooth plot. Write the results first, and then what happened two hours ago. You keep doing this. Are you crazy?

Even if the female protagonist is left to die alone, there will be no green ones. No, no, wow!

I don't like tragedies, but I quite like the plot of Mo Xian. Write your monthly vote well.

This kind of intro ending makes me pick my toes every time I see it.

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The plot has its own ideas, which is fine, and the innovation is good. Pay attention to the ups and downs of the plot, the tension and slowness. After the big incident in the Taoist temple, the subsequent plot is unhurried, and a sense of urgency is needed. Moreover, the suppression of big events needs to be relaxed, and the subsequent plot is a bit unexecuted and has no emotional catharsis. I want to see a killing spree against the Demon Sect.

The ending of "Spreading Flowers", although it was finished in a hurry, at least it has a beginning and an end. Looking back at the entire novel, it can be seen from the content and title of the introduction that this novel is an expansion of a meme. Whether this meme is exciting or not determines the performance of this novel. From the assessment pressure at the beginning that led to the system failure to the destruction of Nanhu Taoist Temple, it can be seen that the protagonist's system failure is very good in the long run, but the restricted environment has not been developed. Although some of the plot processing is a bit blunt, watching the protagonist upgrade and solve the difficulties encountered step by step is a regular routine of the system upgrade flow, and overall it is a good chapter. After coming out of the Taoist Temple and before building the foundation, I started to hang up, but it was obvious that the super model was too comfortable to upgrade, and there was no strong pressure to survive. This led to the inability to resolve conflicts and the plot. From the foundation building to the end, the plot took off. It was like riding a rocket to upgrade, and it was also like riding a rocket to rush to the end. There was clearly room for digging deeper and expansion, but it ended in the end, which was a pity. Finally, I would like to add my thoughts on the later plot: When the foundation is about to be established, I expect to change the map, limit the functions of the system, and then continue to find people from the Taoist Academy. To be honest, the plot from when the system hangs up in the Taoist temple to when the foundation is established has somewhat affected the progress of the plot. It can be used as a transition to allow the protagonist to quickly integrate into the casual cultivator society and retain enough strength to move between different forces. However, after foundation building, you should pass on the inheritance of Ka Foundation Building Techniques and Ka Dan Talisman to suppress the rapid increase in strength, and you can also force the protagonist to infiltrate the forces to obtain corresponding things. Even returning to the title of the novel, the proficiency level is randomly increased, and the progress of practicing the righteous exercises is extremely slow, but the proficiency level is added to some useless and countermeasure magic cultivation methods. While maintaining the pressure of survival, using countermeasures to defeat the strong with the weak in life-and-death situations will make the plot more exciting.