The Great Fox in Uncle Jiu's World

After reading the introduction, why are all the disciples female?

It doesn't matter whether there is a single heroine, multiple heroines, or no heroine, as long as the writing is good, it doesn't matter. I am afraid that the writing will fail regardless of whether there is a heroine or not. So what do you think?

If you're writing about cultivation, you shouldn't write so much about Ren Tingting's "sexual" interest in the protagonist. I almost wanted to abandon the book. The protagonist is a fox who hasn't even transformed. Why write so much love? Humans and demons have different paths. If they really write about two people together, the entire righteous path, including Uncle Jiu, will take action against the protagonist.

I just read a novel. The male protagonist is a black law mage. Ren Tingting's Tianling Cap was smashed in one fell swoop, and she died miserably.

At present, 39 chapters are temporarily non-toxic. If the author maintains stable quality and the setting does not collapse, it will be considered a good idea. But when I read the introduction, there was a foreign plot, which I felt was particularly inconsistent. I hope the author can handle this part of the plot well.

Adapting to the changes of the times, I will first go to the mainland, then go to Hong Kong and Taiwan, and finally go abroad. I will write a lot about Japan, Korea, Thailand and the United States. Come on.

The writing is quite interesting, but there is too little. When will the protagonist become stronger and not have to be humble to others, although I also know that this is the only way to go.

The Buddha in the South, the Immortal in the North, Hu Huang, but Shanhaiguan don't understand this? The immortals cannot pass through Shanhaiguan, and the Tao cannot spread to the three eastern provinces... The immortal family on the disciples who have passed Shanhaiguan will not follow them. First, the magic power is greatly reduced. Secondly, the souls of Shanhaiguan conflict with the immortal family and may force them to stay. So it's not good for you to write this

Everything else is fine. It's just the interaction with Hua Rong that really detracts from it. It's okay not to be with Hua Rong. As soon as he is with Hua Rong, the protagonist feels that he has become brainless and has become a licking dog who cannot lick well.

Author: Why don't you want tiger meat? Eating the meat won't improve your health. If you can't eat all of it, you can just take part of it. Just don't want it.

Looks good, supports it. Author, hold on.

On the fantasy side, I went to someone else's comic book, are you a traveling frog? Running around? Can't A Chinese Ghost Story work? Wouldn't Journey to the West work? The list of gods, Liaozhai, Oriental Xianxia, ​​monsters, monsters, monsters, so many monsters are not enough for you to fight monsters and upgrade?

It's well written, and what makes it interesting is that it doesn't follow the original plot. When I look at other Jiu Shu fics, they all go through the plot in order. The writing is quite good, but I get tired of it after reading too much.

Your line is very clear. Worth the wait.

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The author writes well, is non-toxic, and the plot is smooth. It's just that the hook is a bit small. It's going to be the Year of the Monkey and the Moon of the Horse to become a big demon.

Never give a girl as a gift. It is best if the female disciple can be bound to the fox fairy. If the fox fairy does not die, the female disciple will not die.

I'm going to fatten up, so I'm going to be a eunuch.

It doesn't matter if it's a mess, but the protagonist is like a licking dog and can be easily persuaded to quit. For example, 1 can't learn the skills on his own, but Partridge Gu is proficient in it all of a sudden, and after going round and round, he finally gets in with his merits. This clown's role is quite unique. The second rice Gu, the protagonist practices it by himself, and saves Ren Tingting. He wins first favor and second fate, killing two birds with one stone. The protagonist does not directly teach the rice Gu method and begs others to help save her. The third thing is to involve Shanhaiguan. When Aixinjueluo was there, he didn't enter the customs. Now everyone goes to the protagonist. It seems that the protagonist will lick his face and join the circle of the Northeast Immortal. In summary, the protagonist himself has no backbone, and he has skills in holding his thighs, but the protagonist is basically weak to everyone, and he is still trying to cultivate Taoism even though he has no way to do it. He can learn the basic method as soon as he learns it. I am afraid the protagonist is not a big fool.

I think the overall plot of the book is okay, but the behavior of the protagonist is a bit lacking.

If the protagonist's cultivation level increases, will he become bigger?

The comments all say good grass, let me take a look first 🙂

I thought it was going the horror movie route.