Tokyo: Start by Saving the Girl

I used to see why I couldn't find so many high-quality works in Japan.

Shennongs, is the protagonist cold-blooded enough? I really can't stand the Asasi male protagonist in a supernatural novel.

Come on, big brother who writes Riqing

? Just subscribe and become a eunuch, cheating 😅

Rt, I am a timid person. I listened to a book at night and was about to go to bed, but I was so frightened that I didn't even dare to lift my hands out of the quilt ps. The author's writing is really good. I haven't seen such a normal male protagonist in a long time. He has an independent character and a pure heart that is cold on the outside and warm on the inside. He is much better than those CS, licking dogs, studs and Brother B in the same industry. Author, please update it soon. As long as you update it, I will keep getting gold coins from Ou Negai😭😭😭😭

? Resigned? I just stayed at school for two weeks and didn't come back. Why did I resign? The author should consider this carefully.

111111 Is it really a gift? 😫

Have you ever saved a girl? Some things are scribbled and taken for granted.

Come on, author, the writing is beautiful😆😆😆

It's cool to read, but there are only 26 chapters.

Thousands of deposits! Where did the old monster reincarnate?

The book is a good book, but the sudden transition from copy to daily life is a bit abrupt. I look forward to the author's subsequent adjustments and I will continue to read it. Keep writing carefully, and there will be excellent works.

The author's writing is good, and the character design is also okay, but I feel that the plot arrangement is too scattered, with a hammer here and a stick here and there.

Does the author have any other books? I would like to read them.

From personal viewing experience, around 5 people are most suitable, and it is best to limit it to 10 or less. And if some good-looking female characters are described who like the male protagonist, but there is no emotional line in the end, it will be a surprise to some readers. This is different from Riqing. The way to avoid it is to reduce the description of the appearance of these female characters and reduce their appearance.

Open a dungeon, just open a dungeon. Couldn't you just briefly explain the story of the previous generation in one chapter? Is it necessary to go into so many chapters detailing everything? Paid chapters, brother, readers' money is not money, right? Even if everyone really comes to see love and not to see you slaying demons, then what everyone wants to see is the protagonist falling in love. What the hell are you writing? Write a love triangle involving several characters who have never appeared before (except maybe the heroine and her mother), and it is still a love triangle that is destined to be tragic. Who the hell wants to spend so much money to see this?

26 days without updates is too long

Are you a eunuch? The group has also been logged out.

Come on, big brother who writes light novels!

I feel that there are too few details, and there is no buffer at all. From the beginning, the poor ghosts and supernatural beings have become the rich demon slayers. At the beginning, there are three gods and dragons with high combat power.