
Ordinary World: the Three Children of the Sun Family Become a Brother Every Day
平凡世界:孙家三娃一天一个兄弟
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- Completed
- Length
- 735k Words
- Genre
- Urban
- Audience
- Male
- Subgenre
- Urban Life
- Updated
- 9mo ago
- Source
- Qidian
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345Chapters
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Thousand years of parallel imports. Chapter 28, not even a day has passed. I don't even dare to think about how long it will take for a year to pass. Che Zhulun talks back and forth, which makes people bored. Farewell
After reading it, I found a question, is there so many things in one day? More than thirty chapters have not passed a day yet, and it looks like I can still write ten chapters.
Until why the rating is not high? It's so long-winded and full of nonsense. It only takes a day to complete dozens of chapters. Why don't you start writing one by one from the moment you get up? That way you can write hundreds of thousands of words in one day.
The original owner was not that filial to his parents back then, but the protagonist traveled back in time and was as filial as anyone else. In reality, he just needs to be that filial. It feels a bit despicable to be like a human father.
A day has passed after more than thirty chapters, and the ink is not stained
It's so long-winded, about 30 chapters, and the plot only lasts a day There's no plot, it's all character dialogue, and everything can be said in the previous chapter
Too watery
Tian Runye would have to write five or six chapters to show his hand with a target.
The characters in this book are basically stereotyped. I can't see any real life in them, I only see stupid, dull, and mechanical characters. The whole text is filled with words such as "prosperous" and "well-connected". Passers-by usually praise the protagonist as "too well-connected" and "too strong." Tian Fujun, a deputy director of the county, was suspended. The protagonist's brother Sun Shaoping actually said to the protagonist, who is a buyer, "Second brother, can you help Uncle Fujun solve the problem?" Is this a question that normal people would ask? Could it be that the author gave Sun Shaoping a dream and told him that the protagonist was in trouble and had a brother from the provincial department?
Some people may ask, author, have you ever farmed? Sown, sown. Potatoes, corn, peppers, various vegetables, and rice have all been grown. Experienced, not a noob.
How long do you have to live if you have one brother per day and one hundred thousand brothers?
It's not the kind of 'magic' book that takes 100 chapters to finish in three days, right?
Writing fan fiction without respecting the original work and inserting random plots is very blunt. There is also some common sense from the era, which is very confusing. Who told you that in the late 1970s, three wild boars and two yellow sheep could only be sold for 450, and wild boars weighed more than 600 kilograms. Can you have some common sense? There are so many wild boars in abundance now. Go and take a look at what kind of pigs they are and what tonnage they are.
You really are number one in Qidian Hydrology Class, who can beat you?
Plot summary of the first three chapters
The content reduction of the first three chapters means that the system has one tool person per day! On the first day, I gave it to a commune director. The system gift package had ten times the physical fitness and fighting skills, but he could only beat dozens of ordinary people! 100 Yuan, one hundred taels of votes. Then I came home and found that something had happened at home. My elder brother-in-law was caught selling rat poison, and the house was in chaos! The plot is over! This stuff is written in a sloppy, messy way, and in a roundabout way.
It's so tedious, I could write more than ten chapters at the beginning about my brother-in-law
Li Dengyun is too mentally retarded to watch this part. Are the three of them children?
If you continue writing at this pace, this book will collapse. This system is too powerful. In the future, you will have friends all over the world and not even a stranger around you. The sun will revolve around you. If you don't become the center of the universe, you will be sorry for the protagonist!
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God, there are 100,000 brothers, one a day, 365 in a year, 3650 in ten years,
Why are there only 2 updates? More updates.
Why, there are always 2 pictures, not 3 Not enough
The chapters can't be more watery. The timeline is too short and the writing is too dense. I didn't finish three or four chapters in a day or two.
I was ready to give up. To be honest, I wanted to keep following it, but the timeline is too tight. I guess a year has passed in the book, and it should be almost a year in reality. Please cast your last monthly vote. Once you vote, you will withdraw.
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