Start Traveling at the Same Time, I Am the Thigh

The writing of Dragon World is very bad. I don't understand why the protagonist has to go to your Gouba Kassel Academy? Assuming the perspective of the protagonist, let's say that a normal person travels into the Dragon Clan, awakens a C-level bloodline, and then knows the original plot. There is no golden finger yet. That's it. Will you go to Kassel College? You are a modern bastard, you have no golden fingers, you are a C-level person, you can't even be a bit player in a fight, and the scripts you know are all handwritten by others, do you have to go to Kassel to be cannon fodder? This is from the perspective of the protagonist, but from the reader's perspective, it's even more disgusting! A protagonist in the same universe has to enter Kassel Academy. Originally, there wasn't much plot in the original Kassel Academy. Once you enter, you will be disgusted by the board of directors and be subjected to all kinds of suspicions. Moreover, what you learn is really useless. Do you want to use the swordsmanship of the dragon clan to compare with the swordsmanship in One Piece? Or do you want to compare the diversity of ninjutsu with just one awakened Kotorei? Shouldn't I have said that the protagonist had already joined Kassel before Goldfinger. Whether you can enter Kassel or not is still a matter of your setting. And what you wrote is too disgusting. When Goldfinger wakes up, a bunch of people find something abnormal. Will there be another disgusting person on the board of directors later? The biggest poisonous point of the dragon clan is that while they want hybrids to slay dragons, they also want to 'research' hybrids with high bloodlines. Are you still going to touch this poisonous point even though you are writing this? Even if you originally thought of using this to cause conflicts to advance the plot and make it more fun to kill the board of directors later, no one would buy it. Tongchuanliu, everyone comes here for the pleasure, why do you insist on suppressing it first and then promoting it?

To be honest, Dragon Clan is really a bit abstract. The protagonist is too jumping, especially when he knows that the commandments don't work. He is not Lu Mingfei. Why is he jumping like this? It would be best to wait until graduation or learn more about alchemy, and then leave school directly. After all, time is controllable. It was ten years before Fengou repeated his grade until Lu Mingfei went to school, Chu Zihang should be around his sophomore year, Dawn of Fire was Chu Zihang's sophomore year and Lu Mingfei was his freshman year, and then the strongest second generation was in his junior year. Black Moon Tide is Chu Zihang's senior year, and Lu Mingfei inherits Caesar's position as the student council president in the fourth part. This time point is completely operable, and many of his actions feel like the protagonist is like a clown. Compared with the other ones mentioned by chance, the Dragon Clan has an abstract clown feel.

Although it avoids the common poisonous point of the same story, the word count is ten chapters and one world. But the protagonist in Dragon Clan is too weak, jumpy and soft, and anyone in the plot can take a stab at it. It's okay if you were bullied before the golden finger arrived, but it will continue to be like this after the golden finger arrived. Then it's not for nothing that readers see you as the protagonist.

The first point of the same cross flow. A weak world must be fast. Cut the mess with a sharp knife. Don't delay. Once you get the benefits you can get, you can directly upgrade your combat power. I mainly write long stories with high combat power, and write the worlds with low combat power directly after the rise of the world. It can also be used as an overuse after a short novel.

Why do dragons have to stay at Kassel College? ? , Can you join the country, take public exams, join the army, or become a doctor? So much knowledge about modern science is not enough to improve the protagonist? Can't find dragon knowledge in the outside world? I have been staying in the academy, and I am always worried and afraid of being tested every day. Are you writing gay novels that abuse the mainstream? You're such a loser in the academy and you're still addicted to being a slave there? Does the author have masochistic tendencies? ? What do you think? Or is it mass-produced by a studio and AI?

It's boring. I feel like the main character is silly and dances too happily.

The biggest shortcoming of the same story is that it cuts back and forth between worlds. It was interesting when I read it, but then suddenly the world changed, and I lost interest. I hope this book is better.

The world switching is too fast and the results are not good. After all, if you subscribe to the world you like, there are too few chapters about the world you like. You should at least have fifty to eighty chapters, otherwise you will skip the world you don't like after subscribing.

After sharing the beginning of the novel, the plots are several times inferior to others. It is estimated that many readers will not continue to read the following ones after reading the previous one!

The protagonist is so weak and can be bullied. In the chapter, so and so is bullying the protagonist. I don't understand. Is it so easy and funny 🤔? It has no strength and no ability. It is still adding new patches all the time, just like an outline.

Time travel novels are really good, but unfortunately there are too few, so I have to write them myself.

I still don't understand that the same thing is to switch the world? Achieving short-term goals in one world and enhancing strength will change the world. For those with low combat power, finish it quickly and introduce it later. For those with high combat power, you can write more And there are always people who say that world cutting is the poisonous point of Dou Chuan Liu. Except for some people who cut it too fast If you want to see a world and then cut it, then Dou Wen Mao It is better to go directly to watch Wanjie Flow.

The entire Kassel has been released by the Night Watch, and the word spirit commandments are released. Others can't use the word spirit, right (눈_눈)

This comic is not suitable for any form of fandom, the logic is perfectly closed

Isn't it true that there is no need for words in Kassel?

The previous part is a bit boring but I can still read it, but the spy play house is starting to get a bit interesting.

The writing is a bit bad, but everything else is average. I can see that the author has written seriously, so he should practice it first.

Everyone is collecting it. Do you have any suggestions? The first world of dragons, plus a little bit of One Piece. I actually really want to write about the same mistakes of the sun and the moon, but I am afraid that not many people will read it.

Let Shen Nong evaluate this copy of Dragon Clan.

The sun shines, one meter lifts the building, and everything returns to nothing

It's a new work, it seems barely adequate, and the writing style needs to be improved.