A Big Fight Among the Practice Systems

It's written like a game and can refresh people and monsters. It's outrageous that the author still wants to tell readers a complete world after just a few words.

Endless Shennong, come out!

The writing is indeed good, and my IQ is online, but I always feel like I am a eunuch 😒

Author, do you want to write about the collision and integration of core concepts between different cultivation systems, or do you want to write about the advantages, disadvantages, and power conflicts of different cultivation systems? If it is a collision of ideas, it is necessary to deepen the underlying logic of various practice systems, and it will inevitably trigger a discussion. I don't know if the author's writing power can control it. If we take the collision of forces as the core, we basically just need to highlight the advantages and disadvantages of each practice system, and then have a few violent conflicts with obvious comparisons between the practice systems to deepen the readers' memory I think the later ones are generally easier to write and more attractive to readers. It is best to intersperse some collisions of ideas between the conflicts of forces, such as learning from each other's strengths, learning from innovation, etc.

In your family, different behavior patterns are called different practice systems 🤔

The title and the introduction of this book don't seem to match. The different systems should be due to the different underlying application methods of spiritual energy, but the introduction is about different orders of magnitude of collective power. The underlying system is still the ancient system of cultivating immortals.

Evaluation [As of Chapter 39] Advantages: 1. The protagonist and supporting characters have basically online IQs, and there is no villain or a garbage plot that provokes the protagonist without brains. 2. The protagonist has a clear goal and decisive killing. 3. The plot is compact and not too poisonous. Disadvantages: 1. Typos appear from time to time, which affects the perception. 2. Too few updates🙂 Summary: The flaws do not hide the flaws, typos are innocuous, the plot and character creation are acceptable, and it is worth watching. Advice to the author: Look back after coding and make corrections to typos in unpublished chapters. At the same time, typos in published chapters will be corrected.

Let's add Kunxu civilization to it too.

What kind of entertainment industry is so ugly?

Seeing so many complaints, if the author didn't have the strength and a good attitude, it would probably be a waste of less than 300,000 words.

The title and introduction of the book are not good, it is a bit vulgar and I almost missed it. It is recommended to write Become the Leader and Establish the Mountain Gate in the introduction to attract readers' curiosity. This is just a suggestion! 🙂

This book should be called Huaxia Arena

The barrister finally issued ━Σ(ﾟДﾟ|||)━

Vote for a monthly vote to encourage it. The article is good, but there are a lot of typos. The author, I read it all the way and corrected some typos for you. If you can, I'd better correct it. The plot is okay, some small plots are well controlled in terms of length, and the IQs of the supporting characters are not low. In the plot, the author can add some exercises, organizational divisions of the sect, and interactions with other people.

Recently, many readers want to increase the number of road numbers. So is it necessary to increase the number and which number numbers should be added? I hope everyone will leave a message. The people who currently need to be recruited are: Li Shangjun Kong Zi Bu Bing Yin Ranran Lu Fangzhou If there are others, you can also suggest it. If you think it is good, I can add the corresponding plot.

If we don't implement the policy of dividing family and property, it will still fail.

I found out that I have read the author's last book about Zerg😰

No, this is the development idea of ​​your Game Lord article. It is very different from your introduction. The expansion of Game Lord is that numerical value is justice, and all decisions are simplified into optimization operation problems. It doesn't matter what you believe in. What matters is how strongly policies and ideological trends are revised.

Since it is a big battle of cultivation systems, will it involve magic, martial arts and other systems in the future, or will it just be different small systems within the big system of cultivating immortals?

After reading it, I was a little confused. Did the protagonist travel through time and enter a game? There is no description of the background of the time travel, so it feels like a foreshadowing. The protagonist also undergoes special training before entering this world. Is this a foreshadowing of the original world?