Family Wizard: from a Run-Down Town to an Empire of Order

The advantage of a wizard family over a cultivator family is that their lifespan is limited. The best family novel currently, of course in the field of online literature, is "Xuanjian Xianzu". As the plot develops, the question of "protagonist" inevitably arises. The "protagonist" is not the real protagonist, but a powerful character who occupies a lot of space and text in the entire article. If he is written to death or is deflated, readers may abandon the book and stop reading it. However, this problem is easy to predict, so there is a strong person of the same level in "Xuanjian Immortal Clan" who slightly shares the strong light of the "protagonist". In addition, the setting of "Xuanjian Immortal Clan" reflects the author's concerns about this situation. He greatly reduced the life span of immortal cultivators - 500 years. However, although 500 years old is rare in the field of immortality, 500 years can be like an arrow of light and shadow, or it can also be a time of vicissitudes of life. Although the setting is like this, there is still the problem of "protagonist". The limited lifespan can perfectly make the "protagonist" exit. Of course, Xihuan also has a way to live longer--by blessing him from the gods and becoming an undead lich. But it's not inevitable, it all depends on the author's arrangement. After all, cultivating immortality means that the higher your cultivation level, the longer your life span will naturally increase. This is not the case in fantasy. It can also be that the higher the cultivation level, the shorter the life span.

Are you, the ancestor, fusing the heart of the ancient god to prepare to become a god?

The structure is too small. The family that has existed for thousands of years must have never produced a high-level wizard. Thousands of miles of land are not worthy of a wizard's territory.

What a great name it turns out. Our family has declined and this one has been changed to Pure Roadside.

Why do I feel that the wizards in the book are like arrogant people, and they get angry at every turn, and kill people when they are angry? It doesn't look like the image a scholar should have at all.

Did the ancestor send a knight and a robber to pick you up to learn witchcraft?

Why does it feel a bit like Dark Dungeon?

It took me a long time to find out where my sense of familiarity came from. In the small town where heroes gather at the beginning, there is a protagonist who has risen rapidly. He is smarter than the talented and has a rough strategy. It doesn't take long for the three-person jungle team to have a think tank to pitch in. He is kind-hearted and can fight well. The goal is to revive the family and stabilize the world. Gaozu: Children, this is not me. Xuande: Children, this is me.

It's only this far and I can't see much, but I think the wizarding world is really suitable for writing family stories. If it's written well, there's a lot to be done.

I thought I was going to Stardew Valley, but I was told to go to the old road.

Is this "good guy's" mouth habit a foreshadowing? Your writing is a little scattered, but your plot makes up for it. It would be better if the title of the book was better.

I really like to read family stories, but most family stories now have the same routine.

How does this book make every tag my favorite genre?

Aboriginal protagonist, direct -1,000,000 points, extremely poisonous

You must pay attention to the introduction. Readers usually read the introduction first, and then skip the comments if they are not interesting or to their taste (it may be the other way around). This newly revised introduction is really hard to stand. 😅 Choice 1 Write a little more lively, don't write too much seriously Choice 2 Be serious, but don't tell a story with an introduction or let the characters speak too long, leaving some suspense 🔨 The ideal is to write something that has the characteristics of the character and highlights the character. For example, if you lament the decline of your family every day, it seems very unreliable, and then forget about it the next day, you will open your mouth and ask for the ancestral badge of the child, xx, and then accidentally connect to the family members from hundreds of years ago through it in your sleep, and actually see the family's revival plan or other things from their perspective. Your book has a lot of attractive and unique things, but the introduction doesn't show anything. It's too common for the talking old man to be a cheat. 😵 Choose three The one with a B on the hour. Although the main plot is to revive the wizard family, and you can also see various oppressions, your introduction is not very attractive, and it has a very old feel 😥 In other wizard novels, wizards have that status. , You have no characteristics of your own at all. You write about the pincer time offensive with family members hundreds of years ago to save the destroyed family, about the twisted territory under the control of wizards and the conspiracy hidden in it. It is more attractive to write about my ancestor being the leader of the Order territory than to write about me suddenly becoming the wizard master. 😁 Most of the books you read that are awesome have a good introduction (just writing one line means that the author has a reader base). You can list more adventures of the protagonist, such as the twisted wizard, and write something with a sense of oppression, such as the shrinking territory of order, for example, among all the wizard families, only our family is normal. All I can say about the title of the book is that I came here for Dark Dungeon 🙂 There was a previous book with the same title: The Decline of the Family, but it had nothing to do with Dark Dungeon, but it is in your book. I really feel sorry for not doing this. I am not sure if the author has an outline, but I can tell that he cares about this book, and it is the only one he has written. However, it is obvious that the popularity is not enough, and I am afraid that such an author will become a eunuch 😭 So I wrote this long review, author, you must continue to update 🥺

I'm not a time travelerI don't like watching

Personally, I think the content of this book is a bit obscure, but if you have the patience to read it, it is a good book.

To be honest, the protagonist and the ring ancestor had a lot of dialogue. After reading 10 chapters, they were all dialogues. The main dialogue is also often out of tune. . .

The book is good, but it takes a lot of time to read.

The previous plot writing is very detailed, but after the second level wizard, it becomes a little rough. The disadvantage is that the scene transitions are not obvious enough (I don't know if it is intentional by the author), but this kind of reading is easy to blur, and the characterization is a bit templated, but that's okay. Another thing I personally don't like is that the world view and power setting are too vague. Although the author wants to expand the description through the characters and the plot of the story, it still gives people a very confusing feeling. The title of the book delays the development of the book a bit, but it is still a novel worth reading.

First of all, the title of the book. The title at the beginning was quite good, but the current title is just a bit off-putting, making people have no desire to click on it. The plot is well polished, and the characters of each family member are also quite fleshed out. It makes people feel that the author has carefully polished the plot and created the characters. I don't really understand the plot of Yuna. I spent a lot of words describing Yuna, especially her childhood, and her identity as a young girl who fell from the sky. However, later on, I even had to write about a blood curse just to set the tone for the single female protagonist. It felt a bit abstract.

It's a bit messy, but the setting is interesting. It's a pity that the family's decline reversed the doomsday. The main reason is that the description of the sense of urgency is very weak. It's more like a battle report of a running team. You can try playing Trail Blazers' Wrath of Justice. It has the same crisis start, the same orders in case of danger, and even the same recovery of the lost land.