Frost Morning Moonset

Coming from the media, did you send the book to the blogger? In fact, he is right. After reading the previous chapters, let's talk about the shortcomings first. 1. I can see that the author wants to compete with "Nirvana in Fire" and "Book of Cangbi". There was a saying back then, called "Nangya Bang and Bei Cangbi". These two giants have almost received all the glory of China's modern fictional historical conspiracy novels. They are well-deserved marvelous works. No one could surpass them in the fictional world at that time. Conventional book-opening learning and reverse engineering cannot imitate them. Under this, the number of fictional histories that can break out of the circle is only single digits. The reason why it is successful is that it is both a novel and a script, specifically for the monetization of film and television publishing. The top-level design is a set of standardized published reading materials, but it starts with an online genre. 2. From the title of the book, we can't tell what the author wants to write. Why are the four words just pictures and have nothing to do with each other? 3. What about the "tragedy", "test" and "planning" in the introduction? Twenty thousand words have not been seen at all. I don't know what the protagonist is going to do at the beginning. It is really discouraging. If you mention how miserable the protagonist was before, how determined he is to cause trouble, and how special his identity is, the readers will take a few more glances. If I hadn't seen it in the media, I wouldn't have read it at all. You were confused and confused. 4. I didn't see the main line, and I don't know what the main line is. The protagonist enters the city from outside the city, hitting the east with a hammer and the west with a stick. The top story is the wine at the bar, which can make readers drunk; the high-end story is a feast, which can make readers eat well; the middle-end story is the running table, which can make readers full; the low-end story is home-cooked food, which can make readers eat well. This is dried yam in bulk. Only people who like dried yam will read it. Without the main plot from the beginning, it will be difficult to find readers. If you can't see the main plot, just give all the shots to the protagonist Otherwise, why would you write about him? 5. The paragraphs are not well divided, the impression is not good, the words are difficult to pronounce, and it is difficult to read. In fact, there are many advantages. It has a good sense of historical atmosphere, good writing style, good description, and strong writing skills. If you stick to it, it may become popular. Come on.

The first sixteen chapters are quite confusing, but the plot behind it is still okay. If you are interested, you can read it.

All I can say is that I became more dyslexic after reading the second chapter. I think most readers are not particularly clear about the history of the Song Dynasty. What the emperor and Jia Sidao said about the eldest son and the younger son and the prince, I don't know who is who, and I don't know why he was angry. I still don't understand what the protagonist is doing. He walks around the city, chats with people, and goes to have a meal when he is hungry. The dialogue is incomprehensible. I don't know when the author learned about political intrigue. I read Romance of the Three Kingdoms, in which Dong Yun used a beauty chain to kill Dong Zhuo. I was only a teenager at that time, and I could already understand it. But your novel makes me a little confused. I think the author's idea is completely wrong. It's not that he can't write about conspiracy, but he should think of a good entry point. He can't let a group of people have an inexplicable conversation, and then this is a conspiracy.

Alas, after reading Chapter 1, I was still persuaded to give up. . I feel that the author's ambition is too great and he has crammed too many things into it, making it difficult for people to feel immersed in it. Planning here, planning there, people from several parties sang one after another. But it still feels like it creates a huge mystery for people, just like a novel about cultivating immortals. How could the Golden Immortal Ancestor appear on the stage at the beginning? I suggest the author take a look at Jin Yong's work The Legend of the Condor Heroes. Although there are many characters, it basically focuses on two or three people, which will not cause reading difficulties.

If you can keep updating steadily, maybe there is still a little bit of hope for this book.

Is the author a eunuch? Don't write anymore?