Douluo: the Sun Rises in the Sky, Reflecting All Things

The character of this protagonist is really irritating 😆. If you have talent, it is wasted. With this BYD useless protagonist, you can be good even if the book is good.

I'm here to renovate the book, not to Akaishi. I'm not "Huo Yuhao's universe observer" and I'm not an expert in Akaishi.

If the protagonist doesn't practice in the early stage, there is no need to read this novel.

The author's writing is not good, I feel like no one reads it, 🤓

How should I put it, although I have only watched most of it and haven't finished it yet, I really feel that it is a pity. We can accept the protagonist's bad behavior, but we cannot accept the protagonist's unreasonable bad behavior. This author is also a stubborn ass, and many readers have pointed out this problem. He still said that the protagonist is just lazy, and said that he will change it later. But you need to know, author, if you do this, no one will see your so-called changes later, and most of them will just give up. 😅😅 I saw a reader saying that if he doesn't want to practice, he can go play and go fishing, so that we can watch fishing, but no, we just sleep. Who wants to watch the protagonist just sleep every day? ! 🤔🤔This book is a pity, and the author's arrogance can also be seen from the names of the people. What is passerby A, what is Zhang San, what is Li Si, I really don't want to read it. Therefore, apart from ideas, everything else is useless, especially when the author is still a stubborn person. He does not change his bad temper, but just says that the protagonist will change in the future. The future is really dark 😰😰 It can only be said to be a pity😅😅

As long as you write about antecedents, I won't look at it so hard. You can write about it. The protagonist was originally a failure in life or something. Disappointed with life. Leading to decadence. Or simply antisocial personality. Or like the character of Wang Daochang under one person. The characters written in this way are not so human-like. You are completely decadent without any reason. Even people who are completely disappointed in life can at least play games or something. Even if there are no games, you can still go fishing or something, and you have to go to sleep. Sleep every day. Nothing but sleep is sleep. The soul power will be increased every year. It looks like a human-machine that automatically performs tasks. It really makes it difficult for me to have the desire to watch it.

In fact, I would like to ask, do schools now not teach descriptions of appearance, environment, and psychology when writing essays? Most novels don't have these basic descriptions, but they can be found in any writing style of the Three Young Masters of the Tang Family.

I just read two books by the author. Your book has no future. Cut it out and read it again.

Cut it and reopen it. Or you can write like Jiang Mingzi. Because I saw the evil deeds of the evil soul master. It gave him a hatred of the evil soul master. One last thing, if you become an evil soul master in the future, then your relatives and friends will kill your relatives and friends.

Ideas: 85 Writing: 65 Expression: 50 (first 17 chapters) 60 (later chapters) Logic: 65 Summary: A tasteless chocolate, although it is called chocolate, has no other purpose than making people fat.

Author: I feel that your book, The Big Sun Lingkong, is not as good as the previous one.

I recommend a novel, "The Peerless Tang Sect: Dai Luoli's Road to Godhood". It's super good. You can click on my profile picture to read it directly. If it doesn't look good, feel free to comment.

I thought it was okay after watching it. I have finished reading it and hope to follow up on it. Don't stop downloading, author. 😎😎😎😎

Forget it, I gave it up, I turned around and the author changed it and kicked me again. I'll come back and take a look. It's a pity (I really deserved that this book wasn't popular!!)

This book is almost dead. Leave it alone hahahaha

Pursuing reading is very important for new books, it determines the life or death of the book, so I hope you don't keep books🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏 Thank you very much🙏

Not bad! Just like Turtle Senryu! Have a good rest! Have a good workout! Have a good meal!

It is recommended to skip the first 20 chapters, but Chapter 27 will be charged.

The data in this book is getting worse and worse. I hope everyone can read it. Please.