Steampunk: I Am a Witcher in Eastern Europe

The writing of this book is okay, and the dialogue is not trivial. It currently focuses on Eastern European gods of the late Renaissance, fire and swords, plus demon hunters and medieval warhammers to sew monsters, and the sewing is okay. But the current plot is relatively weak, and the introduction to the customs and customs of Eastern Europe is not detailed enough. A very important point is that as the heir of the lord, he has no description of his own territory, but he went to school. As the heir of the lord, and when his father is in poor health, he does not develop the territory well and transfers to the academy stream. This is a bad turn. Since the lord is written, the academy can only be embellishment. After all, you, a lord, can do, contact and understand much more than a student. Generally speaking, the future is promising, especially at this point in time, if you can sew together Fire and Sword, Great Flood, Tsarist Russian Cossacks, Ability God, Demon Hunter, and Medieval Warhammer, your results will not be bad. Seven recommendation votes have been cast, I'm optimistic about you.

There is no place here for the weak-willed and hesitant. Only through determined action and belief can humanity survive. There is no sacrifice too big to bear, and no betrayal too small to tolerate.

It's understandable at first glance, but the plot setting is a bit taken for granted, or a bit forced. Well, an old lord who has only a few years to live has to send his heir to go to college for a few years (what about the transfer of power?) Then there is the golden finger of the protagonist, which is not attractive and cannot give him a sense of expectation (killing the devil, it is the knowledge of the evil god but dare not use it) 18 years old + special kill, originally a golden finger full of expectations appeared in the scene, and then did these things

How is this book? Is there any Shen Nong?

To answer a question that some readers are concerned about, what is the status of the protagonist's father, a military lord stationed in the north of the country in this setting. (Ah, yes, I am not the writer myself, I am the writer trumpet) Since he is a lord, is he a noble? Since he is a noble, he is also a duke, earl, baron, or knight...? Was his family Pietro wealthy in his domain? And why the protagonist can't really spend money, he is obviously the son of a lord. To put it bluntly, he is none of the above. This is because I didn't write down the country's system clearly. We need to know what kind of army the Cossacks are. They are a tribal federation. It can be known from the supreme leader of all Cossacks - Gettman - the "chief" that they are not the generally adopted European five-class nobility system. To put it simply, Pietro is just a little chief under the big chief. He is indeed richer than ordinary rich farmers and estate owners, but he is not much richer. Eastern Europe is already a relatively poor place, and if the protagonist is really the heir of a baron, he will have a title before his name. What examples can you refer to? Yes, it is the Eight Banners of Manchuria. At this time, some people may ask, does the Eight Banners have no money and does the Eight Banners have a low status? Your example does not hold water. To be honest, some of the Eight Banners took the initiative to confront Huang Taiji, and the Eight Kings discussed politics. It cannot be said that their status is not high. But how many people are there in the Eight Banners Army? The Manchurian Banner Master had tens of thousands of elite soldiers at his disposal before entering the customs. It was impossible for Huang Taiji not to unite with them if he wanted to fight. As for our Cossacks, everyone knows the situation in Europe. The entire country combined does not have as many Eight Banners soldiers. Independence also had a reason to unite the Crimean Tatars. (The Russian Cossacks really fought against the Eight Banners. In fact, they were beaten by the Eight Banners, and some of them were demoted to Kangxi.) So Pietro is really just a chief, and there is no such thing as how noble or wealthy the Cossack military leader is. I hope this can answer some book friends' questions. By the way, let's promote the book club group: 632865726. Everyone is welcome to join in. If you have any questions, you can ask the writer in person. Thank you for your support!

The plot of the battle is too sloppy. The protagonist, an ordinary person, fights an ogre and wins after just two moves and stabbing it at its weak point. The same goes for the frost demon, who dies after just one shot. These monsters are not that weak, right?

The protagonist is too immature. He is still the son of a lord in time travel, but he is very immature. He panics about everything wherever he goes. For example, this is still a cruel world. If you want to properly shape the character, you need strong writing and long foreshadowing. I haven't seen the writing yet. The writing is too messy and a bit self-indulgent. The information is too complicated and complicated, which is tiring and meaningless. The long foreshadowing, which has good and bad qualities, is toxic to most people. The evaluation can focus on the fact that the author has great ideas but his understanding of online articles, writing style, and story and character settings are very immature. You can look forward to the next book in advance.

The writing is very good, but why no one said anything? I'm afraid it will suddenly cut off after a while.

Wallachians

Have you ever been a Gothac witcher? Take some things for granted, meow, scribble meow!

The relationship between the memes and the plot is well grasped, and the various memes still obey the background plot of the book (especially the fact that the main reason why the demon hunters are hated and hated by the enemy country is their nationality rather than the nature of their work, which is particularly suitable for the steampunk background, and the authenticity suddenly comes up). There is no situation where the plot is subordinated to the memes like most mystery books. In the age of steam technology, the common behavior of people living in remote and cold areas - silence and coldness more than excitement and enthusiasm - is well written. Faced with the enthusiasm of the Wallachians and the weird landlords, the protagonist adopts unabashed precautions and vigilance to see that the author is careful. Most of the men I met whose grandparents lived in relatively remote areas did not say a word all day long and needed to rely on alcohol to mobilize their emotions and desire to speak.

Everything else is fine, except that the characters are a bit too startled, which wastes a lot of text and slows down the progress of the story.

Just don't make the protagonist a real ghoul, that's a bit too heavy-handed and I can't stand it.

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Orthodox style

Very well written author! ! Come on come on! !

RTRTRT, I don't want to waste time on single female protagonists and stock trading categories that I don't like to watch.

The author's writing style is very interesting and very good.

Come on, author, don't cut it suddenly

Is the author's XP a shameful beautiful girl?)

Why has no one written about Bruce and I's demon hunting adventure until now? It's so cool to wander around the world with one person and one dog.