Naruto: Shikamaru's Counterattack to Become a God

After reading the first two chapters, let me summarize the plot: At the altar on the border of Yuno Country, eight monsters are raging, and Susanoo, the Weasel God (book friends who have not watched Naruto can understand it as the law of heaven and earth) stands in the middle. At the time of crisis, Zetsu, Obito, Shisui and Uchiha Itachi used fusion ninjutsu, and Susanoo entered the four-elephant ecosystem, giving everyone hope. I really didn't understand what happened next. I guessed that there was another monster about to self-destruct, but everything was under the control of Shikamaru (known as Konoha's wise general in the original Naruto). The opening chapter should be about 7 years after the protagonist Gintenno traveled to Shikamaru's body and successfully ended the timeline of the Fourth Ninja War. The next chapter begins seven years ago when the time traveled and the memories were fused. Behind is Gintenno (Shikamaru) who has just traveled through the world, urging Choji and Ino to practice with great bitterness and hatred. Let's talk about the advantages: 1. The author's description skills are very good. He has detailed descriptions of ninjutsu, as well as the characters' demeanor, language, psychological activities, and movements. Some scenes are very exciting. Including the subsequent ones, Choji and Potato Chips, and Ino's temperament as a young lady, all are well depicted. 2. The Shikamaru Mantra designed by the author has the spiritual core of "resolving hatred and turning enemies into friends", which is rare in online works. Let's talk about the areas that can be improved (for reference only): 1. First of all, taking the first paragraph as an example, the description of the battle is too empty. The battle scene is supported by scene description + character description. You do not describe the battle scene enough, and the description of the fighting characters is not enough. The attack of the eight-headed monster, the black flame that annihilated the soul, whose soul was annihilated? How was it annihilated? The ice fog that freezes time, how long has it been frozen? It's like you insist on telling me that these eight monsters are scary, but you don't describe what's scary about them. Such descriptions don't match the effect and have no texture. As for the main character Itachi, the main controller of the Fusion Gundam, you have almost no description of him. What state is he in? What kind of will are you fighting with? The setting of Susanoo is also not explained. Even to the audience who has watched Naruto, this part must be explained, because you are a novel and the original work is a comic. In the novel story, you need to recreate the texture of Susanoo. What does the wooden dragon look like? You don't say who summoned him. Then everyone puts their hands on the red shoulder armor. You can completely explain who everyone is and what role they play in the battle. I only know it after reading your own comments. Put this part that I rewrote and you can feel it: On the border of Tang Country, a tall altar stands, and a monster with eight heads is entrenched in the center of the altar. As it moves, filthy energy and chakra surge, its huge head spits out terrifying black flames and ice mist, and blood flames rage, mercilessly devouring all life around it! The scope of its erosion continues to expand, and the ninja coalition in the distance looks at this scene in despair. "Are you kidding? It's more terrifying than a natural disaster." "Who can stop it?" The shadows also looked at the eight monsters with fear, falling into a situation where they could do nothing. At this time, the monster heads seemed to be attracted by something, and pairs of golden vertical pupils focused on the scorched earth. "What is that?" Naruto Tsunade looked towards Scorched Earth. A ray of flame rose into the sky from the scorched earth and smoke. In an instant, a red skeleton was formed. The next moment, strong muscles grew on its body and it became powerful. In the blink of an eye, a pair of tough armor covered its body, holding a cross flaming sword, like a god of war emerging from the sky. "The Ten Fist Sword in its hand is Uchiha Itachi's Susanoo!" In the Susanoo, Itachi was breathing heavily, his black robe was torn, and there was blood dripping from his eyes, but the pair of Mangekyo Sharingan still stared at the monster without fear. Must... Protect the people behind you. At this time, Zetsu emerged from Itachi's shadow, and he showed a hint of pride: "Successful." Not far away, a terrifying monster was tightly bound by the Wood Release and Wood Dragon Jutsu. A set of Wood Release armor appeared on Susanoo's body. Itachi suddenly felt that the pressure was greatly reduced, and chakra was continuously supplied. "I can use the power of Wood Release to absorb its chakra for you to fight." Then I will write about fusion later. 2. The expression of the content is very confusing. Note that what I am talking about is that your expression is confusing, not necessarily that your conception itself is confusing. When the previous battle scene was so thin, the scene switched to Konoha's underground hospital, which is also a culture tank, a potion, and a chakra circuit. The concept of the fusion of critical value and potion pops up again? There was Susanoo fusion in the front, here is a potion fusion, what is the fusion for? Eh, I don't know, I don't even know after reading this chapter. It's said to be a purifying agent later. What does it purify? Why purify? Have no idea. Then the monster is going to explode? ? The monster beat Susanoo to the ground, and then it was going to self-destruct? Why did you blow yourself up? Have no idea. Then time is running out anyway, and Shikamaru has the wisdom, saying that Itachi will leave the worst choice to himself, and what is that bad choice? I don't know why Weasel's choice can speed up the preparation of potions? Don't know either. Let me complain about the settings of the two monsters again. Although the eight monsters are very sloppy, are they intelligent creatures? I don't know, why do you want to destroy it? I don't know, but at least there are eight heads, which are memory points. Where did the other little monster come from? There's not even a description of what it looks like. To be honest, I read it over and over and combined it with the comments before I saw that the wooden dragon tied up a little monster and connected it with this place. The funniest thing is here, and then it will also self-destruct? ? Finally, we need to do some kind of reverse channeling. It seems to be to send the potion to the monster through the blue crow, I guess. 3. After reading the first chapter, what I want to say to the author is that you can write any kind of plot you want, including what kind of villain to design, what methods the villain has, and how Shikamaru will deal with it. No problem. In fact, I think your imagination is quite good, but you can't make it clear yourself and ask readers to buy your account. Actually, what you want to write is that Uchiha Itachi sacrificed himself for the victory of the Ninja World War, and Shikamaru was able to cope with the huge pressure despite the expectations of his partners. But in your actual work, you keep telling readers that Shikamaru has a high IQ and Shikamaru has a high IQ, but high IQ is not moving enough. What is really moving is the courage and responsibility in the hearts of the characters, which are exactly what is missing in the novel.

After reading this book, I no longer believe that genius relies on talent. Shikamaru told me that genius relies on continuous and tireless deduction. Others write that Shikamaru is a lazy person, but this book writes about the philosophy of lazy people. Effortless victory is the highest level of victory‌. Didn't sign a contract at Qidian? Then it is a "buried masterpiece". It's not that the book is not good, it's that the platform doesn't dare to promote such brain-burning stuff. Kishimoto couldn't draw this kind of mental duel, Shikamaru is the real Shadow Hokage here.

It was my first time to meet each other, and I came here to visit, only to find such a big book. I really can't read such a good article without recommending it myself. I have added it to the bookshelf and will leave plot and chapter reviews. You are welcome to read my Winter Snow League, respect Yuxiang 😁

It can be seen that the author is very good at perseverance, but there is almost no traffic without signing a contract. It is very difficult for the author to think of something like a battle of wits, because the audience is not large, and the editor really does not like it. The author can sign a contract first and then continue to write about wits. Adding cheats does not just mean cheating the protagonist. Adding cheats means adding conflicts to the plot. If the author doesn't like the kind of deus ex machina, he can choose cheats such as death recall, which will not affect the wits. Of course, it is not just death recall, you can follow the cheats that the author likes. The author's writing skills are very good, but some adjectives can only be left one. Secondly, if you are a Naruto fan, this direction is biased. I actually want to say that the author's idea is very good and the concept is correct. There is no need to cater to the market too much, but readers cannot see it this way. Only people who watch Naruto fandoms can search it. What does the author hope for most? ——It would be great if I was seen. I want to be seen too. When people live, they just want to leave something behind. They don't understand when they are young, but they will think when they grow up. This cannot be compared with money. Spiritual richness is very important. I think the author also thinks a lot about spiritual aspects. I like you very much. (Of course, there is no other meaning) So, the primary purpose now is to sign a contract. The plot of the battle of wits can slowly unfold. Now that the contract is signed, there will be storage and trial promotion. Many people will read the novel you wrote. You can write a battle of wits, but as a single buying point, it is still relatively weak. Writer Assistant now allows internal submission. The time is a bit slow, but they will reply. It is not recommended to go to Douyin if it costs money. There are still many good editors. At the same time, I will give you a sentence from the movie Farewell My Concubine. Sometimes, people have to perfect themselves. I really feel that it is not easy for the author to persevere, and some of the things he said may be denying you, but I hope you can sign the contract, get better, be seen by more people, and write a battle of wits that will be popular at Qidian and slap other editors in the face. Signing, signing, signing is very important. And it only takes three chapters to sign the contract. You only need to polish the three chapters (I mean the golden three chapters, polishing is not just about smooth sentences and foreshadowing). You need to control the plot well. What is the selling point? What is the general development? The simpler and easier to understand the plot at the beginning, the better. After three chapters, you start to sketch out the clues, buy foreshadowing, and write the climax. I really like your persistence, so I don't want to see you do this again. I am a more emotional person. Damn it, people who work hard should be seen. But the author... You have to think about it, work hard, and don't keep your head down and work hard. Sometimes you look up at the sky, and you will find that the stars are bright. Look up! Hard work Hajizuo!

The more I write, the more tired I become. Not many people read it. It's even more tiring than a single-player game.

Teacher, in how many chapters will Shikamaru return to Konoha? (with a classic picture)

In fact, there are no plug-ins, and you all rely on yourself to practice. I wonder if everyone will like it? Because there are too many fan fictions that start with invincible cheats, I want to write something different. I hope everyone can give your opinions or support, thank you😊

Let's take a group photo to commemorate it. I hope you all like it.

Although I didn't get the contract, I wanted to prove that the editor-in-chief was seriously mistaken if he didn't sign the contract. My works are not those boring cheat cheats or system flow articles. In the latest game chapter, I want to prove to everyone that without a cheat, you can still defeat enemies with cheats! The enemy has a cheat system, but it does not mean that he is invincible. With Shikamaru's strategy and everyone's joint efforts, no matter how powerful the enemy is, he must go home obediently. Using ordinary power to defeat magic is my original intention in writing this book. I hope everyone can see a different style and bring a new climax to fan works.

This morning's despair, the chances are gone...

*Note: This is adapted from real events. Jhin's prototype comes from the suspect in the XX school murder case. Why did he become like this? Who is responsible for his character distortion? No one is born evil. A person's badness is all caused by nurture (parents divorce, school bullying, social exclusion, government attitude). As the saying goes: In the beginning, human beings are inherently good. I wanted to express the villain's inner world through this novel. Although his crime is unforgivable, in order to avoid history repeating itself, parents, teachers, society and even the country must be cautious and care about the people around them, instead of waiting until something happens before regretting it. Writing the truth is banned. It seems that the current Internet literature is so disappointing. The editor only wants to copy traffic and make money, and has completely forgotten the original intention and significance of writing novels? This kind of philosophical system that resonates with and awakens readers is considered a joke by the editor...

There is no response or failure in the review. In this case, I will not hide the manuscript. I will give it to you all at once. It is enough for you to read. I hope everyone likes it😍. Anyway, if the official doesn't like my work, there is no reason to hide it, right?

Sorry, I'm a little tired and I'm currently dealing with promotion issues.

I would like to give you a piece of advice, this is a pure Naruto fanfic, and the vast majority of readers are here for the ease of reading. After all, the two-dimensional and light novel writing style is more acceptable. Slow heating is not a problem, but the selling point must be advanced. There is no market for non-combat novels. You can take a look at Xiao Cangming's novels, which are mainly about romance. The opening highlights this point and directly distinguishes readers. Brother, if the selling point is strategy, I think we can add a strategy scene at the beginning to show how strong Shikamaru is, such as Madara's famous quote: I, Madara, think you are the strongest in xxx, do you also want to dance, and then recall, I personally feel that the three pages of your first chapter are unnecessary. Then comes the detailed description. Now that AI is in power, this aspect has long caused readers' aesthetic fatigue. The main body should be the plot and character creation, and the description is not enough to make up the number of words. Let's talk about my personal opinion. You can write classic slow-burn stories, but you must not post Naruto fan fiction. There is a way of writing to attract traffic. The image of the original character has been shaped and you don't need to modify it too much. Unless you are original or have changed the plot, you will definitely need to modify the character and length. I think the meaning of fandom is a big framework. It has been completed. If you want to delete it, you can give appropriate reasons. The problem that Naruto fans need golden fingers is Sharingan and bloodline theory. . . . The original work originally relied on Goldfinger. . . How can a character without a golden finger be invincible in that worldview? At this time, you can actually add time travel, for example, go back to the past to obtain part of the power of the fruit of the sacred tree. I feel that you have not understood the market of Naruto players. Layout flow and behind-the-scenes flow are also available. But the protagonist has help beyond the specifications, which is the so-called golden finger. It's like teaching Aizen, Naruto who was influenced by socialism. There is no golden finger in the dark ninja world, but the original protagonist's innate intelligence can also be called a golden finger. Shikamaru's character design has been decided, and if you give him a rebirth setting, it can actually be called a golden finger. Purely my humble opinion, if you don't like it, I'll bother you. The main thing is that I have just written a book, and I see the shadow of the future in my brother, and I feel like I am committed to it. I mainly want to write about the glory of human nature, but my writing style is not that sure. I also like Sword and Sword III. Sedum's personal growth is already very interesting. The climax of the fateful battle between Feipeng and the devil is exciting. The companion's sacrifice at the end, the profound character image, and the glorious greatness of human nature further sublimate the theme. To sum it up, there is also a golden finger, the magic sword at the beginning, there is a spirit in the sword, the eldest lady follows, Feipeng reincarnates, just like good friends from the same hometown, one is a business genius, the other is honest and loyal. It is true that there are many cool article templates, and it is true that it is easy to sign a contract. After all, the formula is fast to complete the questions, but there are too many unfinished eunuchs. For a slow-burning novel, if you want readers to read it, you can only use flashbacks. Just like the beginning of Sword and Sword III, Sedum's dream at the beginning is both a foreshadowing and a hook. Anyway, if it starts with a very bland waiter, I probably won't be able to read it, let alone be attracted by the character.

In fact, my biggest wish is not to make money for signing contracts, I just want to simply share my story with more people. I very much welcome everyone to comment. As long as the comment area is more lively, it will be my motivation to continue writing. Unfortunately, there was only one person guarding the comment section, which made me feel a little sad. If you think it looks good, can you help me share the story? I accept everyone's positive and negative opinions. If you have better ideas of inspiration, I will incorporate them into my novel at the appropriate moment. Although my book has no plug-ins or systems, let alone harems and pretense, I firmly believe that even this ordinary book will have a chance to meet Bole one day. Currently I am writing the Onomiyasu chapter, followed by the Otsutsuki Kamashiki chapter, and I only inserted the Onomiyasu chapter temporarily. Because I want to recycle the foreshadowing of Chapter 99 and Chapter 164. Many times my foreshadowing is not recycled right away, but after hundreds of chapters, it can be triggered at the right time. Maybe everyone doesn't remember the news about Huang Quan and others. However, if you look back at the foreshadowing, I believe you will still remember that there is this thing. This is the surprise I want to give you. At first I only planned to finish it after 300 chapters. Later I found that even if I didn't sign the contract, I still loved this story very much, and I didn't want to give up my child (novel) easily. Later, after Chapter 260, the Shell Organization Chapter, System Chapter, Road to Godhood Chapter, and Huangquan Sect Chapter were added. I prefer to portray the highlight moments of weak supporting characters. My idols are Stephen Chow and Sammo Hung. I want to be like them, using the protagonist to highlight the supporting characters, rather than using a bunch of supporting characters to highlight how powerful the protagonist is. I want every reader to remember the importance of each supporting character. As soon as his name is mentioned, you will remember him, not who he is? Thank you for taking the time to watch me write nonsense. I sincerely wish you good health, all the best, and all your wishes come true.

I hope it works this time, please bless me, thank you๑•́₃•̀๑

I feel like I'm a bit masochistic. I've dug a lot of holes for myself, and now it's a bit nerve-wracking to sort out the follow-up plot (hunting plan). There are too many holes to fill, because it's basically not the same as the original Shippuden😅

"Rebirth of Shikamaru, I Will Never Play Soy Sauce" "Shikamaru's Kumogakure Playing Chess Game" Sorry, because I couldn't attract more readers' attention, I had to change the title of the book again. This time I added new inspiration and set Shikamaru's ultimate goal to become a god. I hope everyone can like it and support it, thank you.

"Suffering from Cancer, Kissing the World with Songs" - Stewing Birds in an Iron Pot This book is the pinnacle of systematic writing. The system is not a prop for plug-ins, but an auxiliary tool. Many writers imitate or plagiarize templates in order to make money from contracts. The system is invincible with plug-ins, and you can become a god without any effort at all, and there must be no gold content. But this novel gave me hope. It is a novel that as an author I am willing to keep reading. I hope you all like it, thank you.

Hope you all like it 😉

The first chapter shows that the memories of two people overlap, Shikamaru is Gintenno, and Gintenno is Shikamaru. Gintenno's subconscious contained Shikamaru's determination to save his teacher and friends. In addition, the end of Yin Tiannuo in his previous life made him unable to ignore death because he didn't want to lose anyone anymore. Whether it's saving strangers or saving one's own, it's still a good thing and can help you accumulate negative virtue. Why can so many people be so cruel and turn a blind eye? Could it be that when a fire broke out at your neighbor's house, you could just ignore him and watch him die in front of you? Just because he's not familiar with you, can he be cold-blooded? Did your school teacher teach you that it was illegal to save people? Don't ask why you have such strong feelings. Please read the content carefully. It's because the memories of two people overlap. It's that simple. Don't make it so complicated. It's really troublesome!

I'm a little curious why the Baidu AI rating for "Naruto: Shikamaru's Counterattack and Becoming a God" is guaranteed to be 8.0, While "The Legend of Mortal Cultivation of Immortality" is at the top of the recommendation list with only 7.5. I really don't understand why the editor-in-chief refuses to sign the contract? You are too lazy to finish reading this book, but AI directly tells you which book is more valuable. It is a pity that no one knows how to appreciate it. What a pity

Can such a good writer not get signed? Where can I find similar topics? There are no cheats, no harem, no pretense, no lowering of IQ, no plagiarism, no watermarks, no pedigree, and even the protagonist is the counterattack of an unpopular character! Today's online literature is too homogeneous, all of it is fast-paced and cool, and it is almost impossible to write without a golden finger. I would like to ask why the editor-in-chief didn't even read this plot, which surpasses almost all Naruto fan fiction? Could it be that the editor-in-chief couldn't watch it without a golden finger? I fantasize about having a golden finger or a harem every day. Can I be down-to-earth as a human being? The value of slow-paced adult writing is dozens of times higher than that of fast-paced refreshing writing, and cannot even be measured in terms of money. Who says slow-paced, long-form stories are worthless? The editor-in-chief is ignorant!

This novel will only be updated to Chapter 260 for the time being, and there is currently no inspiration to write follow-up content: the battles between the Akatsuki Organization, the Shadow Organization, the Shell Organization, Yakushi Kabuto, the Otsutsuki clan, Madara, Kaguya, etc. May take a long time. If you have any suggestions, please tell me and I can consider adding them to the novel to make the story more colorful. Thank you.

Chapter 78 will begin with Shikamaru's chess game, and all plans will be officially laid out to deal with the arrival of the Akatsuki organization.

I want to start a new book. I wonder which book everyone will like? 1 "The Genius Counting Down to Zero" is an original campus realistic novel. It tells the story of a teenager with cancer's final days at school. The male protagonist is a super genius. He got into the worst class of the weakest school and started his new story life. I was inspired by the book "Suffering from Cancer, Kissing the World with Song". #system 2 "The Assistant King Arrives, Everyone Get Out of the Way" This is a novel about the Honor of Kings e-sports game. It tells the story of the male protagonist who went out of his way to study the characteristics and skills of all the heroes in Honor of Kings in order to help the female protagonist make money for her live broadcast. In subsequent live broadcasts, the male protagonist insisted on using assistants to help the female protagonist increase her points. The male protagonist's famous saying is that everything can be assisted, and an assistant is definitely not a bastard. Inspired by "Honor of Kings", I hope everyone can see the auxiliary king in their hearts. #system 3 "The Black Bird Seeks Life: The Shocking Exploration of Bao Zheng and the Seven Heroes and Five Righteousnesses" It is a suspense mystery novel. It tells the story of the male protagonist Bao Zheng and Jianghu heroes solving crimes together. The story has many units, but they are interlocking and ultimately lead to the final mastermind. Each unit has a theme, and there is evidence to guide everyone to explore the murderer's modus operandi. This book refers to "Bao Qingtian's Seven Heroes and Five Righteousness" and incorporates more rivers and lakes battles, collusion between officials and businessmen, and even royal intrigues. How can Bao Zheng insist on finding out the truth under the interference of many parties? #suspense 4 "Star Track Saint" It is an original fantasy novel. The heroine awakens the card ability and begins her journey of growth in a different world. The heroine and her companions become stronger together and defeat various enemies together. The plot is erratic, twisting and turning again and again. I wonder if everyone will adapt to it? This book refers to the growth system and fighting style of "Douluo Dalu". I hope everyone will like it #system

Although many of them are ordinary people, after so many days of hard work, everyone has grown a lot. From the beginning of ignorance and ordinaryness (jounin strength), he has become a super shadow level or even a pseudo-sixth level. I wonder which protagonist are you interested in? -Ying Ce -Liu Li -Bai Xuan -Fei Po -Green Crow -Amber -Bone Ya -Dream Painter -Mohen -Menger

I'm curious if anyone is still following up?

Haiz, the sixth book (Glory of Kings E-Sports Game) failed again... And they suggested that I plagiarize other people's works on the recommended list 😊 I'm curious, why do you think my novel is worthless? He also said that without Golden Finger, it would definitely not be a good novel. I really want to ask, wouldn't you be able to write a novel without a golden finger? My principle is not to plagiarize and stick to original inspiration. Even if I write fan fiction, I will not follow the same template, but create the first step that others dare not take. I really want to write non-fan fiction, but newcomers can only write fan fiction, otherwise no one will read it.

I'm very sorry, I only updated 1-2 chapters in the past week, mainly because I haven't thought about how to shape the story background and subsequent plot. Although there are scattered inspirations, it is not enough for me to update every day. After all, I am currently writing combat chapters, so I need to combine everyone's abilities before analyzing them. Otherwise, it will really become a boring and exciting story where the villain outwits the villain, kills the boss instantly, and the protagonist group is too OP.