Entry: Cultivating Immortality, I Am the True Lord of All Dharmas

I don't understand. The protagonist is so weak that he doesn't choose the green talent to practice for a 50% bonus. Instead, he chooses a white talent that comprehends the fire attribute and adds a 20% bonus. What are you pressing for? If you don't take the elixir that says erysipelas, you don't want the one that speeds up cultivation. Those who don't know think you are a genius. The key point is that what you wrote is useless.

After reading Chapter 11, the reason is as follows: I have only refined Qi on the first level, so I formed a team with others to kill the monsters on the third level. Most of the people in this team are just new acquaintances, and they will not protect you. If the opponent is negligent during the battle, you will be injured even if you don't die, right? You have a golden finger, and no one is targeting you. You are not an old man, and you don't have enough time. You have to fight your way out. You are only eighteen, and you have a lot of time to hit the realm. If you can survive on logistical tasks for a few years, will you die if you have a golden finger?

I feel like the writing is okay, but I see you start to write about contradictions and conflicts as soon as you reach the first level of Qi training. I hope you don't get into the rhythm of being powerful during the Qi training period.

Other people's novels are about being powerful and acting like children. This book is about five levels of Qi training, hunting a pig in the sect's spiritual field, and having a celebration banquet. A few second- and third-level qi practitioners assisted the alchemist in refining elixirs, just like the golden elixir masters and Yuanying old monsters refining elixirs. How should I put it? His strength is obviously rubbish, but he is doing work that is not in line with his level. . .

The author is too young, he has already written the plot of if you play with him and I won't play with you 🤭

They are all mediocre and villain-like! Deliberately highlighting the fact that the protagonist practiced Qi Entraining Art for a few more days! It's like you can't practice qi without going to that mountain!

Two people on the second level of Qi training, do they need to talk like this? The word count is low, right? How many words did you write to practice expanding your writing? It can be said in just a few sentences.

It's boring and routine. I can make up dozens of chapters of the plot in my head, but there's nothing new about it.

He is worthy of being an immortal cultivator. He has mastered the first level of qi cultivation and defeated the third level monsters.

Poor qualifications, not taking elixirs, erysipelas affecting the future, all relying on hard work. 666. People who are highly qualified still take medicine. Taking medicine to break through to a great realm will cause fundamental damage. I think it is not suitable for normal cultivation. After just one level of qi training, he defeated three levels of monsters and held a celebration banquet. Is this what a low-level qi training monk does?

After reading ten chapters, except for Zhou Ruolan, who is a living person in the entire sect, are the others all NPCs from the atmosphere group? Zhou Ruolan spreads sect common sense to the protagonist, takes the protagonist to complete tasks, and also looks up to and gives guidance to the protagonist. Other NPCs in the sect will only mock and look down on the protagonist. What sect is this? A small workshop for two people.

Brothers from the same master call each other Taoist friends? Failure

The subject matter is good, but I have only read the first chapter, or I have not finished the first chapter. It feels very rubbish. It is an old routine from decades ago. It is just pretentious and slaps the loser in the face. It is boring.

You are the bottom among the bottom in cultivation. You don't want to improve your cultivation, but you still go to take combat missions. Is this a spiritual beast that you raise at home? Will you only meet those weaker than you? No wonder I pounced, the average order probably didn't even exceed 100.

I didn't find this entry useful. Even if you form a team, you can win a few chapters.

It's so cool. I was shocked by the comment section before I even read it. There are too many people scolding me.

It's well written, but as for the contradictions, it's just mediocrity.

There is a problem, since practicing one skill can increase the speed of practicing the entire skill with the same attribute. Can't you practice more simple exercises and open more entries?

A novel about the starting point of cultivating immortality, the lowest level of cultivation, and the fastest way to enter the secret realm.