You Valkyrie Is so Sinister.

It's a common problem in domestic novels. Humans are almost extinct and they are still fighting among themselves. If they are not careful, they will be like Muv and end up killing themselves.

There are so many flaws that I can't complain anymore.

If brothers scold me too harshly, I will cry I got up in the middle of the night and changed the two chapters I was scolded You can give me any opinions I will really change them

Dead? Five pages per chapter? Can you still recommend it?

This is a rubbish novel, don't read it, it will get messier as you go to the back.

I'm looking forward to this book. The author writes with confidence. There are some slaps in the face, and the clown riding on the face could be less. The mother's words could be arranged better. She was hugged when she came up, which was very humiliating.

Let's put it this way, newcomers from Qidian are most afraid of being too ambitious. It's basically impossible to think that if I have a good plot and good settings, I can become a god in one book. My words may sound a bit ugly, but that's the truth. It's normal for the first or even second book to be lukewarm or even fall apart. This is the common situation for true newcomers at the starting point. This wave alone can filter out 90% of people, and then you have to persevere and rely on time to sharpen your writing skills (there is nothing to say about this, you can only practice it by yourself. If you improve based on readers' feedback, the effect may be better, but this depends on the individual), and then accumulate readers and reputation in this process. This process can be a year or two quickly, or a slower one can start in five years, and then you can say that you can make a living by writing online articles.

Most newcomers come here thinking about making quick money, and then they are thrown into a trap by life. They feel disheartened by the dismal results and then give up. But this is the truest appearance of newcomers at the starting point. How many people think about making money by writing books every year? I don't know, it's definitely a lot. You can make money by blowing the air conditioner at home and typing on the keyboard. How great is that? But the first signed contract can be exposed to 95% (approximately, it may be a bit exaggerated). Don't believe it, just writing 4,000 words at once can filter out most people, and then you must be creative, have brains, and have commercial value, otherwise you will not be able to sign the contract. And then after the contract is passed, it also depends on the quality of your follow-up. If you can write the first 4,000 words, what about the subsequent millions? Every year new people enter the river, but how many can persevere? Hundreds? There may even be only a few dozen()

It's been a few days since the author updated it, but it hasn't been coded yet.

I'd like to ask the author what the vest is called. I can't remember clearly.

How to say it? The settings and writing are quite satisfactory, at least they won't be points deductions. If the plot is okay, it is indeed okay, and it can be regarded as a good read. But this routine is really too old. First there is the classic annoying mini-boss at the beginning, then there is a dungeon that bullies others and then someone comes to the rescue, then there is the classic virtual game plus competition, and then there is a bunch of inexplicable people who look down on others for no reason. Too many flaws

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Content and introduction are different? The same words are just repeated more verbosely. . .