Can My Fishing Boat Be Upgraded?

The book is not bad, but I suggest you write as little romance as possible. I usually just skip to this chapter...

Author, you are really tough. Many people in the book reviews said that you should write less about women and more about fishing, but you still keep writing about women. If you do this, you will lose readers.

I recently wrote a harem novel, and the reviews were so bad that I almost wanted to give up reading it.

Can you stop using so many dialects? I know that people can't see it, so what's the point of doing translation?

No, there is too little content about fishing🐟 in one chapter, so I like the content about desire... The content and theme deviate too much

As a result, being an Internet celebrity has a relatively high ratio of being emotionally involved, and only a small part of it is what you want to read. However, Qidian novels seem to be written like this now, with a lot of miscellaneous content, so the main axis can be pushed slowly and the number of words can be mixed a little more.

The emotional drama is so shocking that I just want to watch fishing 🙂

The protagonist's mother was teased and she screamed like "Uncle Lin". If she didn't punch and kick the old man to relieve her anger, she would be sorry for his dead father.

Do you think your dialect is as popular as Cantonese? Some people who just write in Cantonese will be criticized. If you write in this dialect, who can understand it?

The fishing plot is good. This aspect should be narrated more. The love plot is a bit too much.

Damn, it's too early. Yeah, yeah, I feel like my confidence is through the roof. No, I have to go out and hit two shots.

It's okay not to write about women. Can you focus on upgrading the boat? After writing about the offshore sea, write about the far sea, and finish fishing for mackerel and tuna.

Is there Popeye's spinach in the mall to improve your physical fitness?

This book is probably the conjecture of the fisherman before his death in the Air Force 🙂

It seems that the author is still describing the cooperation with Ah Shui. As long as the economy is involved, no matter how good the brothers are, they will fall out. I have never seen a cooperative business last three years in my life.

Do you really plan to find a father for the protagonist? It's really awkward to set this up

The field of fishing articles is a bit small, but the readers are stable and the results are good. Your name conflicts with the content. It is not a matter of m content, but the name and introduction.

Will you scold readers? Will comments be deleted? Will I be permanently banned? I just reported an author. He made six comments in a row to personally attack me. He also wrote about fishing boat upgrade golden fingers.

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How many Air Force guys are reading this book? Raise your hand!

I only found out that you had written another book when I went to the second book. Your character's personality and ruthlessness in doing things are very suitable for that era. Only this kind of people can get along in that rough era. However, there is a bit too much about love, and the main plot is not grasped. The writing is too complicated, as if you want to do everything, but you are not good at everything. I still like your plot with Teacher Xiao Wang, where you can do whatever you want and sell it if it threatens you.

The fishing part is quite interesting, but the sex aspect is messy. The girlfriend took the initiative to drag the mistress into bed. After you had a girlfriend for a month, you started a harem. When you bought a fishing boat, the first thing you did was to take the two girls out to sea to have sex instead of fishing. This kind of content is quite long and the frequency is not less than that of fishing. The more you read, the more annoying it becomes.

Write more! Not enough. I finished reading it in two minutes. When will the monthly pass be replenished?

The first thing I read was the fishing boat. Fortunately, I enjoyed watching the various fish catches in the early stage. I don't fish, but the joy of harvesting can be well understood. Too many women later destroyed the integrity of the story. What I read is that fishing is not about watching you have fun, and business is also a failure. Either you can't write about these two points, or you can just mention them. Your main line is fishing, and you can write about it at every turn. The second book "Fishing" actually surprised me, but I still have the old problem of not being able to grasp the main plot. I have to focus on business and write the story sparsely. However, the various descriptions of life in the countryside are really on point. The last one I read, Selling Fish, was quite amazing in the early stage. I couldn't stand it after reading more than a hundred chapters To summarize the advantages and disadvantages: Advantages: The characterization is quite excellent, both the protagonist and the supporting characters have many memory points, and the writing is relatively vivid. The description of fishing is also very emotional, and occasionally some hearsay stories are combined with bragging, which is quite good. The style of the three books has a kind of recklessness and wildness that is rare nowadays. It is indeed suitable for the reform and opening up to the millennium. This style is also suitable for the Republic of China period, but I am not sure whether the author can control it, so I do not recommend it Disadvantages: The theme will go off track as soon as the early stage is over. It may be that the pace is too fast and I can't control it. In addition, the writing is too self-motivated and I write too much. The main plot is not a harem or business. It is not recommended to write in too detail.

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