Sherlock Holmes and Hogwarts

The setting where the original Fu and Shenxia Fu are mixed. Fu came from behind the Reichenbach Falls in the 1890s (original work), Fu has the memory palace skill (Shen Xia), Watson calls Fu "Holmes" instead of "Sherlock" (original work), Mycroft's setting (Shen Xia)... In terms of personality, I personally feel more like Shen Xia. The writing is okay. What is worth recommending is that the simple reasoning part is well written, with the flavor of Shen Xia Fu's casual thoughts. Although no major cases have emerged yet, I look forward to it.

To be honest, it's a bit uncomfortable to see the emergence of the new character Moriarty... Originally it was interesting to add Sherlock Holmes to the Harry Potter world, but suddenly his old rival arrives, and a plot that can be seen at a glance will appear, that is, the protagonist will be frustrated and the old rival will come back and forth. To give a trivial example, if Batman travels to the magical world, to Marvel, or even to the worlds of Ice and Fire, Middle Earth, Naruto, etc., There will be a feeling of anticipation, but after a while, the Joker will also be thrown into that world. It will be disgusting. Although everyone knows that justice will always win, the protagonist will always win, but these two villains are still disgusting and represent a prophecy of a tragic future.

Author, there is no need to let the prison fortune start sucking so early. Just like the whipping of the corpse at the beginning, Holmes will take the initiative to learn knowledge that is beneficial to him as a detective when there is no case. In addition, Laofu is a serious college student, and it was only after graduating from college that he decided to engage in a career as a consulting detective. Learning new things was healthy in itself for Holmes.

Sure enough, it still looks the same, I had this premonition before it was put on the shelves. In terms of combining restored characters with the original plot, this novel can be said to be unparalleled among current Qidian fans. But unfortunately, the better the writing, the harder it will be to write later. It will be even more pity to see the professor appear when it is released. The difficulty of writing these two characters is not 1+1. =2 Level, not only to achieve a high degree of restoration, but also to integrate into the original plot, it is an exponential increase. The linear plot of Hogwarts is incomparable to the fragmented narrative of Marvel Universe, and there are not so many branches, time, and logical ideas. It will only become more and more difficult to write later, which is really a pity.

After reading the two books by Professor Fu next door and the same student Fu, I became even more decisive in thinking that this is the best Sherlock Holmes HP fanfic. Although 80% of the content of this book is character dialogue, and the remaining 20% ​​is narration, scenes, actions and psychological descriptions, the overall style reads like a script (focusing on the main line and rushing through some less important content, not completely following the order of the original). There are already sounds and pictures in my mind, as if I am watching a TV series. Another point that I really want to praise is that the reasoning process of this book is more detailed than the other two books. It can be seen from the owl letter in the first chapter (if it is made into a drama, several freeze-frame scenes will appear when the owl comes in and then the analysis subtitles will begin to appear) The poisonous points that many people complained about in the comment area are not actually poisonous in my opinion after reading them. This Moriarty is not a time traveler and has no memory of past lives. However, he is still a smart kid. His current plot appearances are very few and he is too immature, so I personally suspect that his later development may be that he is recruited into a small group by Sherlock Holmes (it seems that children like Sherlock Holmes quite a lot, and Moriarty seems to be a little interested in Sherlock Holmes, so maybe he will take the initiative to contact Holmes later and be recruited, and use his intelligence and ambition on the right path, and maybe embark on a completely different path from the original work)

It's quite interesting. It's the most comfortable Sherlock Holmes HP fanfic I've ever read so far. It's just too short. I scroll through it a few times every time it's updated🥲

I feel like Moriarty's coming will do more harm than good. What I want to see is Sherlock Holmes investigating and solving crimes in another world. I don't want to see Sherlock Holmes and Moriarty fight each other.

It's really hard for me to follow the author's updates. I don't update every day. Before, I updated twice a day. Now I can't even update once a day. It's really

I am currently reading the third book about Sherlock Holmes traveling through Harry Potter. As of today, I have caught up to the latest progress. This Sherlock Holmes is the most consistent with my image. The protagonist is a middle-aged Sherlock Holmes who travels back to school at the age of 11. The author's description of the details is very good. (Although I don't want to be criticized, the other two books have become less and less in the reasoning and descriptions after they were put on the shelves, and they have gradually become mediocre invincible fans. I hope this will not be the case)

How to survive 😭😭😭

I won't talk about the first pioneering novel. It basically just borrowed Fu's name, but it's not Sherlock Holmes at all. The other one is quite similar to Fu, but the writing is a bit not to my liking. I like this one better

The public chapter is really great. If Moriarty was not written and only Charlie and Mike were included, it would not be unbearable.

I was quite interested, but when I saw Moriarty in the comments, I didn't want to read it.

The layout at the front is very good, with moderate twists and turns but a sense of solid stability. The current chapter has finally written about Lockhart. In the original novel, I have always been very disgusted with Lockhart's hypocrisy. I was very happy to see Sherlock's rejection and disgust for him, and a sense of empathy burst out in my heart. I look forward to the following and hope that the author will add more to the shelves.

I'll give you the ticket.

I haven't finished it yet, but it's one of the few stories that makes people feel that the protagonist is really smart.

Author, have you changed your account number?