The God of Thunder Punishment in Douluo

It's too ordinary. There are no twin martial souls, and the feeling of the martial soul to me is not out of the ordinary. Tang San is taking the life route again. Otherwise, you can arrange the destruction and life gods for Tang San, and add Shura, hahaha

May I ask how the protagonist can unify the continent without plug-ins and divine fighting power? Is it because Wuhundian wanted to unify the protagonist for the sake of his face?

I felt it was a bit too watery. I wrote nearly ten chapters after hunting for a soul ring, and I felt that the characters in the back were not as full as the characters in the front. I felt that it was about to become a running story, which is completely different from the quality you put on the shelves. Only the protagonist is showing off, and everyone else is reduced to a background. I am ready to wait and see.

🙄The plot of the original work has been deeply rooted in the hearts of the people. However, what you wrote seems to be wrong. I have no desire to read it at all.

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Every word of "Blue Electric King Kong Cat Eagle" feels very ordinary, for example, change the name to "Blue Electric Sky Dragon Eagle" or something like that.

My classic book of mountains and seas, blue electric fine steel cat eagle 🙂

The introduction is quite interesting, but the author's homepage seems unreliable, so I'll keep it for now.

The male protagonist was created out of nowhere and even called the original female protagonist. To be honest, do you original female protagonists have some brain problems? When writing original female protagonists, just don't write about Douluo Dalu. Who is disgusting?

The author is really funny. A weak person who can't even solve the problem of his own martial soul's defect, where did he learn the art of alchemy and where did he get all that knowledge?