Rebirth of North America: the Legend Begins with American Iai

After reading Chapter 52, basically as long as the author doesn't explain something, the rhythm of the book is not a big problem in all aspects. But when it comes to explanation, it is too complicated. If these explanations are used in simpler words, it will be more comfortable to read.

The protagonist can directly add points to the plug-in, and there are a lot of additional conditions. It is great to defeat monsters by leapfrogging, but the level rise is too slow. It makes your liver hurt. If you kill ten of the same level to level up by 0.1, And kill 100 to level up by one level, I can see it. But your points added are 0.01, 0.001, Which is so fucking stupid.

It's really outrageous that her mother opened the door to the harem and wanted to take her into the harem. She also made a love point. She really wanted to be her but also wanted to build a memorial arch. Let's not talk about how love is linked to restoring blood volume and increasing lifespan. But love is also related to a woman's appearance? ? ? So what is the logical reason why this love point is so powerful and obtainable? ? ? It's just for the sake of the harem. But it makes me sick no matter how I think about it.

These first-level skills and second-level skills were copied from some game. It would be better to directly use white skills, green skills, and blue skills. The skills themselves have lv. As a result, your skills also have level 1 and level 2 in front of them. It is very uncomfortable to see.

What should I say about this book? It is a cool novel, but it is not a pure novel. The author will suppress the level of the protagonist. The protagonist should be a little genius character who is a little higher than ordinary. He has always been worried about exposing his pure-blood genius character. All the resources are obtained by himself. Obviously, the family can let the protagonist take off directly. But the author directly suppressed it and made the protagonist have a kind of persecution paranoia. No one believed that the family was unreliable, so he could only develop it secretly by himself. It makes readers feel like they are neither good nor bad. I've read more than a hundred chapters, and the protagonist is still dangling at level one. Obviously I didn't think about upgrading quickly, I just went around causing trouble. From the first chapter, you obviously have the ability to kill the second elder, but you just don't force him into the plot! I gave up the book around 300 chapters in the last book. This time around 200 chapters. If the plot is still like this, overpowering the protagonist and squandering various supporting roles, I will give up the book.

The plug-in is to add points to killing people. The protagonist leaves the dungeon monsters with a grudge against him without killing them, and goes about his daily life.

There is too little plot. There are too many descriptors. Various levels of skills used to burn. Half of one page has this description. And it's too repetitive.

Do you think the author is writing some kind of modern fantasy novel about neo-evangelical Protestant Christians with an optimized Chinese thinking setting? The settings are indeed long-winded and cumbersome, but the writing is pretty good, and the content is large and filling. Those who can accept this kind of thinking can give it a try.

I was originally looking forward to this book, but unfortunately after reading ten chapters, I found that there were many problems! The battle at the beginning is not over even after writing ten chapters, which is very dragging. Moreover, the tactical choices failed to reflect the overwhelming combat power of the retired mercenaries, and the actual behavior did not match the setting. The second is the description of the battle details, which is a very serious turn-based system! Even if it is an extraordinary setting, it must follow some logic. For example, the werewolf immediately raised his hand to block after being hit, and still blocked it? The interval between bullets fired continuously will not exceed 0.1 Seconds. Can a werewolf have such reflexes? With this reflex nerve, he won't be hit by bullets! They are contradictory!

There are so many characters in the opening scene that I can't even remember their names. Does a cheater need a family?

There is a problem with adding points. You should add levels first. Skipping levels is meaningless and boring to watch.

There are more than 500 chapters, and this is the only point of discussion? ? There's something wrong with this book

There are too many explanations and settings that affect reading.

This golden finger can extract the talents and skills to kill the enemy. At the beginning, there was a lot later, and it seemed like I didn't write about this at all. They are all leapfrog kills. There are many various families with specific skills, but they are not written down later. It's like the extraction skill was forgotten.

Change the opening name or don't write it at all. It's too easy to hallucinate Li Tianyi 😅

The writing style is very good, but it is too Japanese-style. Invincible Bloodline is not popular in China. It has no sense of expectation and makes people not want to read it.

It feels a bit similar to "My Beauty World"

There are too many settings, so don't be too verbose.

Brother, the written plot is very smooth, but can there be less data and more attributes throughout the story? It can't be so watery.

I just finished reading Chapter 30, and the overall feeling is very smooth. It's just that I discovered this book too early, and it's not enough to read.

How do you plan your progress? I can't wait to read on.

Upgrading is too slow and character dialogue is too formulaic

The pace is refreshing, not sloppy, and the hook is good. Come on, write a book, don't get involved in politics, and update more.

The writing is smooth, the layout is far-reaching, and the skills are profound. It's worth a look. Just ignore the explanation of the settings. The overall story is worth a look. It's just fun.

Is the author considering making ebony and white ivory for the protagonist? It's so cool.

The previous one was much better 😁