I'm Editing Myself into the Ultimate Monster

(Only personal opinion) Let's talk about the advantages first. The story is novel, the plot is compact, and the plot is ups and downs. The puzzle stories follow one another and connect perfectly. It makes people want to keep chasing. From a story perspective alone, this book can be regarded as a god The shortcomings are also obvious. The protagonist seems to have a weakened aura. No matter how powerful the foreshadowing of a force is, once the protagonist joins, everyone will become a pustule. The Black Village is like this, the Red Lampshade is like this, and the Demon-Suppressing Family is still like this. These big forces have written so well before, but in the end, no one is a master who can take action when encountering problems. Everything depends on the protagonist to turn the tide, and it feels like these forces will collapse without the protagonist.               ,, How do you keep this family fortune? Does it all depend on the horoscope?

The golden finger is too slow to work. That's what I came here to read your profile for, but it's so slow.

If humans in the protagonist's world cannot restrain ghosts, then humans should be dead!

I originally thought that Gold Finger would directly solve this problem, but after looking at it for a long time, Gold Finger didn't say it was useful at all, but it didn't have much effect. How many chapters have it been, and we haven't solved the first thing yet, and we haven't left the Novice Village yet. It's such a delay!

The overall story is good, and the creativity is relatively novel. The main character is a bit difficult to comment on. He has the courage to eat pills made from human skin, but he ignores the hostile little head catcher. You say Granny Li is too strong and it's okay to ignore her. You say that people who can't afford a kitchen knife are too weak to ignore her. It's okay. But if a person who is not as strong as you but has a certain status shows hostility to you, you can still keep it. I don't understand here. (Personally, my self-feeling) If you dare to eat human skin, why can't you go over and kill him that night? This happened once or twice. The other time was when you were tortured by ghost blood in the morning and then you were attracted by the sound and made faces. Really, the protagonist is this 👍. I just want to express that this is too blunt, and there is no trouble. Really, it makes the protagonist look like a sha bi

Both irritating and double-standard. In addition, the author has a tendency to be a green slave, that is, being a doormat will cause you to have an orgasm. When you are a doormat, you will have an orgasm. You have traveled through time, and there is a golden finger. Anyone can bully you, but there are still people and things that cannot be put on the stage, and you have no identity. You are already a rich second generation and you can be scolded by a little Karami on the roadside. Do you think this is a doormat? Is he a green slave? A typical author who doesn't look like a prince even if he puts on a dragon robe, and who can't hold up a wall with mud. It's really hard to find a novel that normal people can read among the 28 unknown authors. . Why. I'm still being drugged every day

Although the fusion ghost fetus introduced in the introduction is a bit slow, it's nothing. As long as the updates are in place, you can still see it. It's that female ghost who knows the protagonist's memory and is a little bit poisonous

The writing is good, but it is too delayed. This delay is not a delay in the rhythm, but a delay in the topic. Someone came to you for the title of the book, but the text did not respond at all. To save your life at the beginning, you need a golden finger + catching prisoners + Qi and blood (Yin martial arts + Yang martial arts + Qi and blood pills). Then there is the cycle of practicing martial arts and responding to crises. What is the demonic power of the protagonist? You can get it slowly, but don't write anything at all.

I've read more than twenty chapters, but it's useless.

Let me go, sell a chapter for more than 50 points? Those great books have never sold for more than 30 chapters, so you don't have to do this to make money. I have read books for more than ten years, and I estimate that I have thousands of them. If the books are divided into five levels, in my opinion, your book is at least a little higher in the second level. The fourth and fifth levels are not that expensive.