Immortal Life Begins with the Contracted Dog King Xiasi Inu

Come on

Apart from anything else, the author's mathematics is at a kindergarten level, right? I can't figure out whether LV1 → LV5 is upgraded to level 4 or level 5? I don't understand where the 5 skill points come from, let alone the subsequent upgrade data, it's a mess.

The last book of this type was cut before it was put on the shelves, I hope you can work hard 👍

Taking into account the replenishment of pet team positions in the early stage, I think tanks can start with cows and 🐷, and go for butterflies and bees for treatment. It is easier to obtain and complete the team in the early stage.

There seems to be a book about Yang Jian's template before, but the writing is a bit unclear. This one is just right. I just don't know if I can finish it.

Why are you so slow? Are you ready for TJ?

Grain and grass are edible! Since the author also likes to watch water monkeys, and is also a multi-talented one, he might as well create a group of characters with distinctive and interesting personalities, such as the third prince. Currently, I think the protagonist's subordinates are only well-cast as the tree spirits. After all, they talk a lot, and Shaggy and Eagle basically have no sense of presence. They are pure tool men. Xiao Qing has a lovable appearance, which is a plus for her natural talent. The plot of the black bear licking the tigress is very interesting, and it adds a lot to the image of the black bear. I suggest that this small branch line can be continued. All in all, after catching up on the latest chapter, I haven't found any major flaws. It's the old man who helped the protagonist at the beginning (giving him food, coins, and taxes to persuade him to be more open-minded and not to die because of taxes). I feel that since I have dug a hole, I have to fill it in. Give a good ending, which can also be regarded as a supplement to the profile of the protagonist. Don't be a superintendent, don't overpower the protagonist's strength, and follow the current pace and make full reservations! After I finish speaking, who agrees? Who objects? 🪖

There are no obvious flaws for now, I hope the author has an overall plan. Now the protagonist needs to keep his IQ online and the story coherent, so the novel is considered good. I hope the author will work hard.

I just hope that the protagonist won't be someone's subordinate, and that he can be alone if he has a golden finger.

I would rather have talent than golden fingers or tools. Otherwise, who knows if it is fishing bait.

Among works of the same type, the level of this work is relatively high, no less than that of Fishing! Come on author! Keep it up and write according to your own outline

Not bad, definitely at the grain level. The plot doesn't drag on, it's entertaining enough

I feel pretty good about the rhythm and so on, and the writing is smooth, but some details need to be adjusted. There is no problem signing the contract, just write four thousand words a day 👍

Come on

Huh. There are so few book reviews. The writing is okay.

Let me know what happened to Kangkang.

The writing is pretty good, keep it up 🙂

Not bad, to the taste. No matter what the creativity and plot are, writing is the most important foundation for an author. The author writes fluently, especially the descriptions of the first three contracted spirit beasts are quite vivid and rich, which may be less cute than the fourth and fifth spirit beasts. Wang Mian and Zhou Xiansheng also described distinctive characters. Come on, author!