Qin Shi Mingyue: Lord of Daze Township

Today's Qin Dynasty fans generally have the same problem as the late Xuanji - they can't do without roast chicken and snares and don't know how to write stories. At the beginning, Goldfinger awakens or brings Qin to offer him an olive branch, and then starts to accept girls while hugging the thigh of the charming ancestor. Even if he is a thief, he still wants to catch Yan Dan, who is holding the moral high ground with his fingers. In the end, all the benefits are his, and the harem plot is just a water heater for a long time. I might as well watch a fake eunuch! This book is very interesting starting from the common quarrel between rivers and lakes. Observing the swordsman's calloused sword seems to be a martial arts theme. It is interesting to read.

Since he is already an emperor, there is no need to discuss who will be the heroine, just have them all 🙂.

Qin Shi Tong Ren is indeed so good-looking. He writes his own story based on Qin Shi and the historical background. It is much better than those who follow the plot without thinking.

I don't understand why the outline was changed just for a small flaw that destroyed the combat power? Is the problem the outline? The combat power is changed when the combat power collapses. Why can the author extend a simple opinion from a reader to change the outline? First of all, I didn't think there was any problem with your combat power system until the latest chapter. But I think the latest chapter is broken, only the latest chapter. If you have seen Qin Shi and Tianjiu, you should know that the male protagonist Zhou An is a generation different from Gai Nie and the others. The male protagonist is Tian Guang, a younger generation of the Six-fingered Black Man; Zongheng, Dongjun of the Yin and Yang family, Yueshen, Xiangjun and Mrs. Xiang, Black and White, and Da Si Mingshuang are the second generation; I have to say that Xiao Meng is already the third generation. The protagonist is cheating, and there is an age difference. It has been described before that the internal strength is about to catch up with Tianguang. I think the current strength of the male protagonist is only six fingers and Tian Guang; why do you, the fledgling Dongjun and Yueshen, defeat the old man who is cheating? The six-fingered black man also drags the five elders of the Yin Yang family and the five old men. Furthermore, the male protagonist used to beat Wei Zhuang like a child. Do you think Dong Jun could beat Zong Heng in his youth? Some people say that Dong Jun killed Liuzhi. I laughed. Have you watched the anime? Liuzhi died because of the Six Souls Horror Curse. His internal strength was not up to the level of universal love and non-attack. He was not killed by Concubine Yan, but was killed by evil spirits. Yan Dan married Dongjun to gain trust and cast the spell when Liuzhi was defenseless. The Six Souls Horror Curse anime itself said that the casting conditions are strict, and the curse on Liuzhi must have been done by someone close to him. Anyone who has seen it knows it. Secondly, I don't think I can write a novel like yours (your logic is really good), but I think this small point is really easy to change. It's nothing more than wanting the protagonist to be defeated once. Since Black and White were on the outside at the time, how could you bring them down? For example, "The movement of Soul Xi Longyou was too loud, and the battle took too long. Black and White came in from the outside to lend a helping hand in the hope of a quick victory." "Da Si Ming sent a disciple of the Ministry of Fire, and then changed Gan Luo's memory to treat her as Da Si Ming (since the memory has been changed, change more), Da Si Ming "Si Ming, Hei Bai, Xiangjun, and the sun and the moon surround the male protagonist." This combat power is enough; if defeated, it would be better to arrange it. If there is one more male protagonist, he would have been captured. The whole big Siming traps Bai Hei, or the Moon God traps Dongjun, etc., If the male protagonist catches a flaw and escapes, isn't it possible? Isn't it up to you to return to Daze Mountain to recuperate and give birth to a baby? Finally, the author has a happy New Year and have a good rest

The author doesn't know how to write fighting plots. Every time there is a fight, it should be the climax of the plot, but the author always finishes it in two or three sentences.

He doesn't even have the strength to win a 1v2 match, and he still dares to take a woman out to have sex. Where does the protagonist get the courage? After laying the groundwork for so long, I thought that the protagonist already had the strength to kill quickly in a one-on-one duel, win a sure win in a one-on-two, be evenly matched in a three-on-one, and be able to evacuate at any time no matter how many more people there were, but this is the result? ? ? It is impossible for the fledgling Yan Fei Yueshen to defeat the original central defender Zhuang Gai Nie together. The two of them would be seriously injured when encountering the Six Sword Slaves. The protagonist's current performance is that if he encounters the Six Sword Slaves + Zhao Gao, he will be defeated in an instant. I have written about the Six Sword Slaves many times before, and both sides are moving in the direction of Zhao and Wei. With the strength of the protagonist, how dare he act alone and be the main force against Qin? I really don't understand the author's brain circuit. It's like he's following the water. What's he thinking?

It's getting more and more outdated. It's been slow to update. The content that comes out every day has nothing to do with the protagonist. Just like the Korean chapter, you laid the groundwork so much, but then the protagonist showed up and wrote something else. The protagonist participated in so much, and in the end he just did nothing. Protagonist, protagonist, no matter how good you are at writing general trends, the invisible protagonist is still a failure. After a day, the result will be a chapter, and if you don't lose your grades after a long time, you will lose your grades.

In the latest chapter, the two people who were injured were tortured, which was hilarious. Even with this strength, I dare to cause trouble everywhere.

I mean, why didn't I choose the identity of the king's blood and the identity of the Jianghu? There are many novels in the world of Qin Shi Mingyue that I don't like very much.

Brothers, please feel free to read it, this is a harem story. My wife has Yan Lingji, Zi Nu, Nong Yu, and later I will also have Amazing Salamander, Zi Shao Siming, Xue Nu, Duan Murong, Xiao Meng, and so on. Come on, come on, come on. Brothers, please comment, like, and upvote.

Don't make major changes to your outline at the last minute. Just fix the bad points and it'll be fine Stick to your own ideas. There are so many readers and it's hard to agree with others Don't be led by others.

He was so awesome in the front, but he was kicked to the curb in the back, and he was beaten like a dead dog in the end. He was so oppressive to the protagonist, and he slipped away. Now it's so breathless to watch, and I don't know how to use it as a cushion to write in the back.

Already better than most Qin Shi Mingyue fans

There is no need to change the outline. Just add more reasons for the protagonist's defeat and extend the time. Don't write it as if someone beat him to the curb. Change the previous fighting scene, forget about changing the outline. Once you change it, it may get even worse.

It's time to go. I saw Chapter 53. It's very good-looking, with a smooth development and its own main line. The initial goal should be to establish a foothold in Chu State, and the boss in the early and mid-term should be Chun Shenjun. This Qin Shi follows a developmental route, with history as the bone and Qin Shi as the ink, writing its own story.

，（PS：，）      ，，，，， Even the so-called underpants method: breaking the back and standing up, it is not a counter-attack, but gaining the power to survive and escape, laugh. The author must have done another brain test and found that even if he broke through, he should be unbeatable, so he just followed the plot to achieve the goal of earning people. Let's not talk about your so-called self-assessment of the combat strength of both sides, and then predict the trend. As a novel, do you think all the protagonists are invincible at the beginning? No, it may not even be the case in the end, but why not eat it, because damn he is your protagonist, and eating it will always be one step behind him. This is the case with Han Paopao among mortals. Or like Itachi in Naruto, is he strong? It's not actually top-notch, but has he ever lost? Basically no, he can pull out the restraint force to satisfy anyone he meets. Why is that? Because the author doesn't let him encounter an opponent he can't defeat or a dangerous situation! So the protagonist is abused, author, do you think it is a matter of combat power? There is something wrong with your thinking. When you write the plot, you write yourself into a dead end. It means that you no longer have control over the plot. You follow the outline and can't think of any other means of connection other than being frustrated to achieve your goal. Does the author know Guo Jingming? One of his characteristics is that when the characters are out of his control, he will write them to death. This is a typical literary youth disease. He feels that the characters are alive, and he arbitrarily assumes the role of the characters and feels that the plot trend should be like this (PS: In fact, it is a lack of imagination for the plot, and he blindly follows the derivation process that he thinks is right. If the outline is the questions and answers to math problems, then the plot is a calculation process, and poor students cannot deduce a reasonable process even if they get the answers.)

The author's setting for the protagonist (identity, golden finger, harem, etc.) Is obviously based on Shuangwen's setting. However, during the writing process, the author repeatedly brushed off the highlight moments that the protagonist should have, making the protagonist a background board. Instead, the plot of the protagonist's frustration was described in detail. In a novel, there is a fundamental logical opposition between the setting and the writing. The reader will not feel comfortable reading it, and the author will never feel comfortable writing it. The left brain and the right brain are fighting every day. Except for those authors and readers who love to write and read Bian Lao's novels, most people cannot stand the torture of logical conflicts. Just like movies, there are works that have both box office and literary youth, but they are very few and far between. In the same way, the author writes humorous articles in a sadistic way. It can only be said that the author's skills are not in control. I hope the author can sum up his experience and not give up this hobby.

Fairy grass, it's been a long time since Qin Shi saw someone with this kind of sane mind. At a glance, there are rows of them that don't have any normal YY articles.

It's so hard to hold up. There's a beauty that makes a handsome guy die just after someone said a few words to him when he was young and strong.

Why don't you write anymore? Write about daily life and development. You can carry out reforms or show off the main plot of the anime. If you write another one or two hundred chapters and finish it, it will be considered a beginning and an end. There will be no fuss at the beginning.

If you can't even enjoy the cool writing, you'll know it's over.

It's rare for someone like Qin Shi to have the ability to see, but he died after being raised for two days 😵

I just voted for the monthly vote. The author is not a human being.

I'm here! Ended suddenly,

Why is it finished after just over 200 chapters? When I read Chapter 129, I felt it was very well written. It can be said to be the only Qin Shi fan that I can read in the past year. It has writing style, has its own ideas and routines, and is not cliche. Why not write it again? I feel like it is about to enter the climax! It's over, I still subscribed to it all, but I stopped subscribing 😢

For the first time, I felt stabbed in the back by the author. A book that seemed to be okay was directly cut into a hole. If you write a book in the future, I will avoid lightning and not let you be fooled again.

Author, don't leave. It doesn't matter if you go slower. Who will I eat if you leave?

Come on, author, come back next time. Maybe you can make up for a quicker ending after the tour. Then from now on, you should simply stop reading the readers' opinions (you can listen more to the editors). You can also consider not listening to my opinion. Best wishes!

It's rare that I have a good Qin Shi Mingyue fan, so I dared to see the shelf part. I thought that I would finish reading this time and continue reading, but I didn't expect that it suddenly stopped, which is a pity.

It's well written, but it's a pity it's discontinued. 🔨🔨🔨