Who Made Him Be Such a Brave Man?

1. The plot is okay 2. But the details are messed up, and chapter 31 is not that exciting 3. The heroine is not likable. Although she is a villain, you don't want to write her to be so disgusting. For example, in chapter 31, the male protagonist got the death retrospection item, the upper limit is 5 times, and the heroine gave him a knife to trigger the retrospection. The reason is that the male protagonist did not follow the agreement. He is not a buddy. Is this how a yandere behaves?

The author is a workhorse and is currently working hard to find food to avoid being fed to death. I hope readers will support me. I heard that the recommendation mechanism has been revised. I hope it can be implemented with everyone's support. The new book issue is updated steadily, currently tentatively scheduled to be updated at 9:00 a. M. And 12:00 noon. Updates are on the shelves. I hope it can leave readers with a pleasant reading experience.

It's pretty good, but the princess is a bit weak.

It's not that this book has such a strong sense of déjà vu. I seem to remember reading it there.

It's interesting, the pace is tight, and it's not sloppy at all. Other garbage novels talk about princesses and saints, and can be dragged out to 200 chapters. The male protagonist also has a personality, is charming, and the plot has constant climaxes.

Neither born, nor lustful, just law-abiding

Have you heard that Dewey did not draw the holy sword of the brave yesterday! Hahaha, I knew it! That brave sword is fake! !

Why do I feel like I have read this book somewhere? A sense of immediate vision

You are all a strong person. Solving disasters is your first goal, right? If the maid is not gone and the commander's strength is low, can he be kicked?

Percent liberation, Princess Leia, Blood-Eyed Demon, Brave Demon King

One thing to say, if this is the only result, eunuchs will be the inevitable result. For those of you who are still watching, please take a look and cherish it. Let's talk about the advantages and disadvantages. The advantage is that it has a strong sense of déjà vu. It is very similar to the plot of an RPG game, or the plot of some otherworldly dramas. From this point of view, the plot is undoubtedly good-looking and passable. My first reaction is very similar to Shen Yong or re0 in the first season, and the levels in it are also very similar to the two-dimensional version. Then the shortcomings are obvious. It is not intense enough, not outstanding enough, not powerful enough, not dominant enough, not strong enough, there is no way, the threshold of modern people is too high. It's not that easy to write a good story without following the conventional route of character design. In other words, this is a novel where the focus is not on character design, but on the plot itself. If this is the case, I admire the author very much. So powerful! From what I have seen so far, it is hard to guess which path the author will take in the end (mainly because it is too likely to be a eunuch), so from a personal preference, assuming it can be written for a long time, "Doomsday World Online" is a possible direction (). It involves two aspects: traveling through time and decrypting wits, which test the author's intelligence and writing skills. I won't say much more. Now I want to follow my example and write more about professions, including skills, combos, analysis, combinations, effect comparisons, etc. This is so beautiful The development in this area is really long-lasting.

Has the author ever played with Pascal's Contract?

The author can open a character introduction column, which is convenient. People who click in for the first time can see the male protagonist and female protagonist.

Have you ever been a brave man? Some things are written randomly and taken for granted.

The monthly vote has been cast. The plot is well written so far. The protagonist has a plan and is flexible and flexible. The heroine is very innocent and interesting. I look forward to updates 🤓

You're invincible, brother. You exploded so much in one breath. I won't support you with my monthly vote.

Calm down, let me think--

Judging from the current setting, the amount of power given by the gods determines the combat effectiveness. The same is true for defiling the gods to obtain the power of the gods. Demon kings, brave men, and hierarchical professions are crushed in the face of the power of the gods. A group of people go crazy and explode. Fighting power, you are stronger, I am stronger, everyone saves the energy bar, and presses the space to open unparalleled. Now the plot is about who can get more god's power.

Thank you to the author. Another investment book is finished.

After all, the maid is the original real heroine. The male protagonist should train her well to be of great use against these darkened female protagonists.

It's a pity that I, the author, am incompatible with your book because it is not abstract enough. Although this book is very abstract, it is also very interesting. But I really can't put it into context because I'm not abstract enough. So sorry and goodbye author.

How many monthly tickets can the author give you to get more tickets? (Innocence. Jpg)

The writing is very good. You can tell that he has been a brave man. He knows how to take risks. The writing is well-founded and reasonable.