No Longer Human! All Heavens Play, Invincible at the Beginning!

I didn't sign the first book, but I had to finish it. It's almost the end. More than two million words. It is meaningful when you insist on completing it. You can see your own abilities and see if you can do better in the next book. I knew I had made great progress in the second book.

It is said that I did not recommend it because I read too many books at once, which means that my book seems to be alive, but in fact it is dead. How should I put it? It's a pity that after thinking of so many ideas, it ended up in the dust. The dispute over novels has always been like this. I will still finish writing this book. There are still 400,000 manuscripts left. I will briefly optimize it before publishing it. But forget about continuing it. Isn't it sad to entertain yourself when no one is watching? I read a lot of fan fiction, so I had my own ideas, but now it seems like those ideas were wasted. Obviously I have been researching the original work for so long... Currently, I have finished writing the part about the spell return battle, and Pirate Hokage will not be able to write it. Also, thanks to the support of more than 10 robots, my collection will definitely be uglier without you. Let's generate electricity for love. This book, after all, I have no money and can't keep generating electricity. If anyone later sees this novel, I hope you can support my new works in the future. It's not in vain that I generated more than 500,000 words. No matter what I do, I can't seem to do it well... Sigh...

It's nothing, just use the Purcell elves to become a Pokémon master. In the first Pano system of the Purcell, the elves here are generally similar to Pokémon, and there are no supermodels. So only elves from the Pano system are used. Of course, he is the protagonist after all, and he uses the Pano Galaxy boost elves. Delu, the demon lion with 30 million blood, Tias with 35% dodge probability, Aksia with 100% instant kill, Rios with 150 power with no side effects, Yunas who cannot break defense, Renaldo and Nadore with attribute copy and inversion. Of course, forget about the five mushroom monsters and steel tooth sharks.

It's a pity that I don't know who they are, otherwise I could put their names in my next novel 😆

There are about 300,000 words left in the manuscript, written under another account of mine. It is very troublesome to exchange the two numbers, and I am too lazy to do it. I hope my inspiration can help some people, I don't want to read bland fanfics anymore. Want to see something abstract and strange 😳

Can the author play the role of Huangtian Emperor?

The Arrogant Emperor of Eternity

Like the title, to be honest, I'm not sure when and why I started to pay attention to the author. . Now I am in a driving school, and when I was changing cars with someone for practice, I suddenly found the author's comment to me. . So here we are. . I am also planning to write a novel, but I have only managed to write two chapters. While I am editing and saving the manuscript in a haphazard manner, I feel a little emotional when I see the author's plight. . Let's take a look first to respect...

Well, today is the second one. Regarding the requirements for signing a novel, and some of the author's own issues, I thought about it and decided to talk about it here. Small problems, such as unfamiliar descriptions, a few typos, and the repetition of some paragraphs, are not harmful. They must be corrected and practiced. Watch The biggest problem lies in the overall grasp and arrangement of the plot. In my opinion, the plot of this novel is roughly about a standard old-fashioned time traveler "adhering to the indigenous theory" and a classic mission system "mixed with some other systems", using the power of the system and props to kill indiscriminately in the universe. An abstract and funny journey. The protagonist's purpose is to go home and change the tragedy. The main attraction is that the character cards given by the system can cause various misunderstandings and surprise the locals. Generally speaking, it is a somewhat old novel with some new stuff mixed in. But the problem arises here. Let's put it this way, writing novels must have its own advantages, either the conditions are strong enough, the writing is excellent, and all kinds of real, humorous, or abstract descriptions are readily available, so that people can find their own point of immersion. Like the abstraction of the Dimension Corroder and the reality of the Doomsday Cockroach, as for humor, it may be a required course. With such writing style, even if it is a clichéd story, some people will happily accept it. It is also a story about a brave man fighting the devil. Some are just fairy tales, while others are immortal epics. The difference is that when they describe the wonderful places in the world, they use childish writing style to describe it, which of course will be as boring as a primary school student's composition. If they use excellent writing style to describe it, they will have an epic feeling. The writing style is not just a description of one or two paragraphs, but also a natural smoothness, and there is a subtle and close connection between the contexts.                                                                                           Describe the huge body of the dragon with great pains, and the following part, when describing the brave man, you can highlight the thinness of the wind and the cold water. When the two fight, if this sense of contrast is continued, the victory of the brave man in the end will appear precious. Do you want to see it? Old stories are not old. Readers who are tired of seeing new things will sometimes try old stories. However, there are too many people writing old stories, which means you need your own strengths to stand out, and writing is one of them. If the writing is not good, then you have to start with the arrangement of the story. Taking your novel as an example, I and others have pointed out various mistakes in the beginning one by one. I will briefly summarize them. Abrupt emotions, weird system, and slow understanding of the world. At the beginning, the old woman who arranged to take him in died at the speed of light, and the protagonist saved people and faced the evil ghost without showing anything. The reader only learned that half a year had passed, the system had not moved, and the world was suspected to be the "hair color of ordinary people" in the two-dimensional world. This information is very complicated and superficial. The protagonist has traveled through time for half a year, and his understanding of the world is no different from the information he could recognize shortly after traveling through time. This will make the protagonist appear to be a bit like a human machine, without subjective initiative. Hey, you might say that you are not familiar with the place, you don't understand the language, and you want to search for information, but the local area is backward and the information is not accessible... Then you have to summarize these limitations in a few paragraphs. For example, the protagonist tried but failed. The readers can also understand the protagonist. If it is well written, it can also introduce the background of the world. I can't say anything about the system shutdown. Let's just treat it as a plot requirement, but this will inevitably make readers feel that the system is unreliable. I can only say that maybe someone can write it well, but I can't think of a good way to deal with it for a while. If the revenge for the old woman is well written, it can be a plot that makes readers empathize with the protagonist. If it is not well written, then there is no need to say more. I and others have said that because the importance of the old woman to the protagonist is not reflected, this revenge seems childish. The importance reflected here is not a simple sentence: She is my savior, she is very important to me. That's it. Think about it, in reality, how would you feel if a friend introduced his important person to you like this? But that's not necessarily the case, if that friend's face is full of memories when he says this, and his tone is heavy and thankful. Does it indirectly reflect the importance of that person? What you lack is a description of just the right details, whether it's memories, dialogues, monologues, expressions and movements, you have to write them down. However, does this involve a problem of writing style? So, let's lengthen the story. Since we can't write all this in one chapter, we can move the time forward and describe the daily life of the world they lived in the day before the old woman was injured. Or pull back and cut in directly at the moment the revenge is completed, and the system will just start. But it all depends on how you write to be most comfortable and smooth. There is no need to force it, just let it take its own course. You can try to expand the details to be described, and then delete the expanded content. After practicing for a period of time, you will probably be able to write it naturally. In fact, I originally thought that I could use my own experience in writing novels as an example, but when I thought that I was a lazy dog ​​and had only written a few novels so far, I gave up. . In fact, I still have a lot to say, but I forgot about it as I wrote it, so I will stop here. The author of this book probably has no time to change it. If it really needs to be changed, it will be another troublesome project. I look forward to the next book being better. . Sorry for any typos. I have written more than 1,700 words here and I am too lazy to correct them. . "ps: I feel like I work harder writing this than I do writing my own novels"

The writing is very good, why don't you recommend it? It's a pity that this book is recommended by a whole bunch of books about bad characters.