Er Zhoumu, Why Are They Not Human?

Have you ever been an immortal? Some things are scribbled and taken for granted.

1. There are many female protagonists in this book. Everyone who has read my first two books on Xianyu knows that I write about multiple female protagonists, and this book is no exception. It must be a story with multiple female protagonists, no stock trading, and no weird stomachache plot. 2. The pace of this book is slow. The addition of spiritual energy recovery elements in this book is just to avoid writing love plots all the time, which leads to boring and monotonous plots. In essence, it is still a daily love story, but relatively, the pace will be slower. 3. Collect responses to negative reviews. If you have any questions related to this book, you can comment below and I will reply if you see it.

I beg you to read it, readers. There are too few to read at the moment, and it cannot be put on the shelves, nor can it be updated. I beg you to read it, just click on it, and then turn directly to the last page of the book! Please, everyone!

The plot is quite formulaic, but with the experience of the previous books, the description and connection seem very comfortable, the sense of substitution is average, and the atmosphere is maintained well, which is very good 😁

The author quickly wrote to me😍😍😍

If the brother doesn't want to update, just say so. Why bother to deal with the sister like this? It seems that the sister is being sentimental. That's right, my brother is weak, so he just needs to rest more. The younger sister is urging her brother so much, but it's her fault. It hurts her brother's body, which also makes her feel distressed! Unfortunately, what does it have to do with whether her brother hurts her body or not? Hurry up and add more chapters! Brother!

After raising it for two weeks, what happened? Incense

If you haven't cut it yet, what are you waiting for? ? ? There were only a few people watching. Do you still want to trick readers after it is put on the shelves? Another eunuch? The results are not good, so cut it quickly before putting it on the shelves. Don't trick readers. . . What is originality? The creative one. If you don't have creativity, don't be original. No one is watching.

Why are there so many tricks like this recently, such as Rebirth of Shura Field, Bai Yueguang, etc., Boring.

I knew from the beginning that this book was not as attractive as the previous one. First of all, there was the character Lin Xi. The male protagonist paid special attention to her from the beginning, and it seemed that the male protagonist was very affectionate. Then, at first glance, it was a harem story. There is no way out for a harem novel to have an affectionate male protagonist, and to create a clear eldest heroine. This routine makes me feel like I have seen a novel from 10 years ago, with no new ideas I thought that the author could come up with many novel ideas in the last book, and thought that this book would also have them. Unexpectedly, Lin Xi came up, the heroine from ten years ago, and there was no copy of the previous book as a foreshadowing. It was too thin to establish the character.

Let me talk about the conclusion first. This book can be regarded as food and fodder. This book has indeed improved compared to the previous one, but it is not very obvious. Personally, I think the plot is relatively bland, probably equivalent to sweet water mixed with a little sugar. The author probably borrowed from "The Immortal Just Wants to Lie Down", which is reflected in both the plot and the character of the male protagonist. The male protagonist's personality is somewhat similar, but not enough, and it looks a bit awkward. The characters in this book still need to be carefully portrayed. The other characters are okay, but the character of the sister needs to be refined. I can't say I hate it, but I can't say I like it either. I have read Chapter 35 so far, let's wait and see. Of course, I also hope that this book will get better and better

It can solve the book shortage, but overall it is mediocre. There is nothing outstanding, but it still has the motivation to read. What worries me most is the performance of this book. I am afraid that it will be cut in half halfway. You haven't even put it on the shelf yet. The risk is indeed a bit high, and I don't eat meat before it is put on the shelf. The overall world view is okay. There are no clichés like overwhelming combat power, disgusting villains, and stuck-second rescues. There are no poisonous points that make people feel uncomfortable. Overall, it is good.

Hurry up, brother, I'm really afraid you'll die

It was Shen Yi who ate it first🙂

I haven't read it yet, so I clicked on it to catch up and ask if it's any toxic?

Come on, it's a lot better than before.

I just added it to the bookshelf and haven't read it yet. I just found out that the monthly tickets are about to expire, so I went to vote for them one by one. As a result, I accidentally clicked on the wrong 😠😠 and directly voted for this book for two months, so I had to read it.

It's really about food, writing style, and plot.

Come on, wait until you are on the shelves, you have to survive

The problem is that the subject matter is not written well For example, 1. The background is very big, so you can add a few supporting characters with stories to fill in the background, and you can study some such books 2. Then the settings explained are a bit messy in the middle, too fast, and some readers don't want to read it. It is better to let readers understand through things. 3. I think there are some interesting things that can be put later, such as the story of the male protagonist and his sister 4. I saw a woman who had an abortion and fell from the building here. I don't know how you wrote it later. But you can definitely write a copy, such as what you came into contact with, etc.