Douluo Dragon King: Light and Dark Dragon King

Current questions in this article 1. The protagonist's father's surname is Tang, his younger brother is also surnamed Tang, but the protagonist's surname is Mu. The author does not give you an explanation. 2. After awakening the twin holy dragon martial spirits, the twin holy dragon martial spirits cannot be compared to the gold and silver dragon king. Whether the author wants to introduce Dou Si, whether to introduce all of them or unilaterally introduce the setting of Dragon King. 3. The heroine, to be honest, the only thing I see in The Dragon King is that the heroine is Gu Yuena. If she doesn't accept Gu Yuena, she'll be a loser. 4. In the apprenticeship session, Leng Yaozhu forces the protagonist to become an apprentice. If it doesn't fit her character, she won't be afraid of the protagonist backstabbing him in the future. This alone has dissuaded many people. 5. The author has not explained whether he wants to follow the Shrek route or whether he is going against the Tang Dynasty. 6. The protagonist said that he would give Yun Ming a level 1 god status in the future. However, Yun Ming, as the master of the Poseidon Pavilion and the helmsman of Shrek Academy, and the author as a member of the Spirit Transferring Pagoda, actually wanted to give him a level 1 god status. If the author wanted to go against the Tang Dynasty, he would never cooperate with the author. I hope the author can give a reasonable explanation.

Looking at this introduction, it's not about licking Tang San's son, right? , This is definitely a poisonous point. If this point is not changed, not many people will read it 😅 Moreover, Gu Yuena is not accepted and they are allowed to be together. This is also a poisonous point. If these two poisonous points are not changed, this book will be dead 😅

There are many poisonous points. The protagonist's biological parents are level 98 Douluo, but after their death, the protagonist was sent to Tang Wulin's parents to be raised. This is not logical at all, and it is placed in such an ordinary family. I understand that the author wants to take advantage of the plot, so why not just set the protagonist to be Tang Ziran's biological child?

You can either plot the bloodline of the Golden Dragon King or go to Devil's Island to get the source of destruction and life. Otherwise, you can't play. The suppression is too strong. You don't even need the Golden and Silver Dragon King to suppress you. The Dragon Leap in the book can suppress you.

If you don't love the original heroine written by a fan, who will? Who would come to read the original heroine, and the whole descendants of Yan Shaozhe 😊, very poisonous

Aren't these two spirits suppressed by blood? Then what else is the protagonist going to do?

I didn't expect that Gu Yuena could give the child to Tang Wulin's parents. I didn't expect that there would be a super Douluo. Also, the main character's family is the Holy Dragon Family. They were targeted by the Holy Spirit Cult and both of their parents died. Please, the Angel Family is not dead yet. Why is your family targeted by the Holy Spirit Cult? There's also a new female protagonist. What's the point of being Tang Wulin's eldest brother? Just kneel down and see that the Tang family is your father. There will never be a new routine, so why not use your own martial arts to cooperate with Gu Yuena? The spirit of the plane and the golden book are both confronting Tang San's parents. You are afraid of the stupid Old Tang. Moreover, Old Tang woke up after Tang Wulin broke his first bloodline. Of course, it is not ruled out that he woke up long ago. This book can't be read even if you don't use your brain to read it.

If you don't understand, brother, just compare and contrast the original works. Since when was the Holy Dragon of Light the product of martial soul fusion skills? It was the Holy Dragon of Gold. Do you really think that ultimate attributes are some shitty thing? Even the Phoenix of Light can be called ultimate attributes? It would be understandable if you write that the protagonist is a Holy Dragon of Light with the ultimate light attribute, and has the bloodline of the Dragon King of Light, but it would be outrageous if you write that an ordinary Holy Dragon of Light is the ultimate light

The Holy Dragon of Light and the Phoenix of Light have the ultimate light. Dou Er said that Shrek has only developed three ultimate attributes in ten thousand years, and Huo Yuhao has only one ultimate attribute in his generation.

The original heroine of the fanfic is given away a popular female character from the original work. Isn't this asking for death? Anyone who can achieve results like this will never write a fanfic.

Don't let me see the story of you becoming a disciple of that old fairy Long Yeyue

The setting feels strange. Why would a super Douluo give his child to a Tang family? It's pure and unreasonable, and the soul skill design is terrible. It's useless. The blue electric tyrannosaurus has pure amplification soul skills. Your soul skills are not as useful as your own combat skills.

The original heroine has never been successful in any of the fan novels, and she chose a wrong path.

The dialogue is a bit awkward, and the part about recruiting a disciple is even more discouraging. I hope you won't level up later. It would be funny if the innate level 20 plus top-level resources can't match the upgrade speed of the original character.

In Dou San, is there an old fairy named Long Yeyue whose title is Light and Dark Douluo? She is also the martial spirit of Light and Dark Dragon.

You also gave 🍬50 a nanny, and you also gave the Silver Dragon King to 🍬50. Didn't you have no idea what kind of martial spirit you awakened? You don't need the Silver Dragon King, but you definitely can't give it away, even if you kill him. Do you want to wait for 🍬3 to come back?

Too poisonous. Let's ignore the relationship between the protagonist and Tang Wulin and Gu Yuena. 1. As a descendant of a strong man, even if he died suddenly and suddenly, he would either be properly handled by the people around his parents, or no one would handle it. How could he be raised by Tang 50's parents? Neither of them are mid-level soul masters. Even if they have a relationship with the protagonist's parents, they cannot be placed with them for the development of the protagonist. 2. Ignore the pressure of the Gold and Silver Dragon King. He, a century-old soul, can ignore me on his own, and he can barely tolerate it if he can lead others to ignore it. It is abstract to be able to bring the dragon clan martial spirit and ignore it. Even the Dragon God, the son of Emperor Tianlong King and his son, cannot teach him the skills. 3. Without God's handiwork, the innate soul power is only 10. Don't forget that Long Yeyue shares the same martial spirit as the protagonist. 4. The original heroine Yan Shaozhe's descendants are in the Spirit Transferring Pagoda? Even if there is foreshadowing, it means Shrek has a problem, and he won't let the heroine have a problem, right? There is a problem with Shrek, but looking at the introduction, it doesn't look like he's being negative. 5. The character design cannot jump without foreshadowing, it is too abrupt. The same goes for setting, stick to one version and try to be as logical as possible. Even if the original work was so heavy on settings, it was only for the needs of the plot at the time, although the follow-up was not taken into account.

I have written three Douluo Dalu fanfics, all three were written when I was in college. Due to various reasons, the writing in the three books was not particularly ideal. I have always wanted to write a book of about 2 million words, and I hope this book can fulfill my dream. This book "Duluo Dragon King: Light and Dark Dragon King". In fact, the original idea was to make up for the lack of strength of the Light and Dark Douluo in the original work. Leaving aside the protagonist and the Silver Dragon King, the Holy Dragon Spirits of Light and Darkness are really very powerful. If they can be developed to the limit and have powerful self-spirit fusion skills, they will definitely become the best among quasi-gods, even the strongest. However, there is the protagonist who is cheating, and the Silver Dragon King is pressing on it, so the twin holy dragon spirits do not seem to be that strong in Douluo Continent, so later in the book, it is planned to evolve the twin holy dragon spirits into the twin dragon king spirits. , According to the settings of Douluo Four, the Bright Dragon King is the head of the ten dragon kings. Even the prince of the dragon clan calls him big brother. Together with the first-generation Shura God, he is the two law-enforcement gods of the original God Realm. He is a god-king-level powerhouse, which is considered very powerful. The Golden Dragon King and the Silver Dragon King were formed after the Supreme God King split. Although they have the blood of the Dragon God, after the split, their strength is only half a step of the God King. In terms of realm, they are not as high as the nine dragon kings of the first generation. What's more, the Bright Dragon King is still the leader of the ten dragon kings. I feel that after the Dragon God split, the Nine Dragon Kings may not necessarily recognize the Golden Dragon King and the Silver Dragon King. After all, the Gold and Silver Dragon Kings have their own consciousness after the split. Strictly speaking, they can no longer represent the Dragon God. They are already another person. The first generation of the Nine Dragon Kings, powerful men in the God King Realm, were active for a longer period than the Gold and Silver Dragon Kings. As for the setting of the protagonist, in order to save the fate of the dragon clan, the Light Dragon King captured the breath of the protagonist when he traveled through time, and then left the inheritance of the Light Dragon King on the protagonist. The Dark Dragon King is the wife of the Light Dragon King, and they are one, so the protagonist also has the inheritance of the Dark Dragon King. The protagonist's martial soul was given by the Bright Dragon King, so he has innate soul power of level 20. The protagonist's image is exactly the same as the human form of the Bright Dragon King. They also have a certain connection. According to the parallel universe, maybe in this universe, the protagonist is just an ordinary person, but in another universe, the protagonist is very likely to be the Bright Dragon King, the leader of the ten dragon kings. The protagonist's talent is very high. There is no doubt that his level breakthrough will be very fast. The current setting is that he can break through to Titled Douluo at the age of eighteen, and to Ultimate Douluo at the age of twenty-five. After reaching Ultimate Douluo, he began to slowly sort himself out and began to walk on the road to becoming a god. The protagonist possesses the inheritance of the Dragon King of Light and the Dragon King of Darkness, and finally merges the origins of light and darkness to create the God Realm of Light and Darkness, becoming the God King of Light and Darkness, and controlling the most original light and dark attributes of the universe. The protagonist is Tang Wulin's eldest brother, so this book should not abuse the protagonist. Regarding Tang San, I can only say that the protagonist is not the same kind of person as him, and there will not be many interactions with him later. The protagonist creates his own divine world and has his own team. He may bring some well-known figures from Douluo III into the divine realm, such as Qingtian Douluo Yunming, Tianfeng Douluo Leng Yaozhu, etc. Yun Ming directly gave him the status of a first-level god, and Tianfeng Douluo was also a first-level god, and so on. As for the heroine, I actually don't have a particular feeling for Gu Yuena. Gu Yuena is a tragic character and I might give her a happy ending. As for who the protagonist will be with, it's still to be decided, I haven't decided yet.

Poison Poison Those who are sensitive to the setting of the original work should not read it. The author has added a lot of self-made plots and there are big problems. Is the threat from the apprenticeship at the beginning real? Is the protagonist a trained dog? He has no temper at all. When Leng Yaozhu came to Donghai City, he also forcefully explained that which super Douluo wanted to find a genius and came to Donghai City to look for it. Later, it was also explained that the highest soul power in Donghai City in previous years did not exceed level seven. Knowing that, he still came to Donghai City to find a genius? The Bright Phoenix and Munn's Bright Holy Dragon later have inexplicably ultimate attributes 😒😒😒

A lot of poison, the author is so stubborn...

Sure enough, it's g, hahahaha. Dousan's poisonous points were all touched. Even if Gu Yuena refuses to accept it, she will give it to Tang Wulin. Even if you kill her, it would be better than giving it away. I really don't know why readers watch Dousan. Secondly, the martial spirit is a dragon. I have never seen a good one written (Dousan) as a beast martial spirit. The answer to Dou San's martial arts version is obviously weapon martial arts

No one wants to see this. The protagonist is permanently suppressed. Maybe you can avoid this in the later stage, but who will persist? Moreover, in the example you gave, the martial spirit is not strong. In addition to the protagonist's extraordinary talent, your protagonist can still survive in Dou 1 and 2. In Dou 3, except for the deus ex machina to force the protagonist to evolve and make the readers uncomfortable, you will never be able to compare with Tang Wulin.

My mother-in-law recommended me to write about Siheyuan

A book written by Tang San, Tang San's grandson, and Tang Wulin's son

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Guys, if this book can be a trap, please give me some advice 🙏🙏🙏

The author is great, he has collected Ma Xiaotao, Zhang Ruoxuan, Ling Ruochen, Han Ruoruo, and the two emperors of ice and snow.

If you have any good ideas, please mention them and discuss the plot of this book together.