Shuhan Sanatorium

The book is okay, but it's a bit too offbeat.

1. The protagonist's behavior is logically confusing. I really don't understand why the protagonist is so high-profile in the modern world. Take Liu Bei and Zhuge Liang to visit Wuhou Temple, and buy a hospital to give high-level physical examinations to Ji Han. These are understandable, considered normal operations, and satisfy everyone's feelings. But why does the protagonist let the ancients run around without anyone accompanying them? What is the purpose of the protagonist carrying a machine to film a short play? Even if you and your buddies time travel, what's the point of recruiting business partners to time travel? I just wrote about the conflict between the protagonist and the old man. The protagonist doesn't want to hand it over for the time being and wants to make money. Can you tell me which of the above behaviors is not about making more money and doing more things? 2. The aid projects are weird. The second one follows the previous one. The logic is confusing and the type of assistance is very awkward. From the perspective of maximizing profits, not being discovered, and trying not to provide material assistance (this is in line with the protagonist's ideas): The first wave of assistance should be historical books. Ancient times are bound to be changed. If you don't give history books a period of time, their value will begin to decrease. The second wave is the so-called traveler's guide, those outdated technologies that can be found casually on the Internet. It allows the ancients to climb the technological tree and lay a solid foundation. Look at what is written now? Tractors, drones, helicopters... Do you have a power plant or an oil well? Which one can Ji Han play well by himself? The only one that looks pretty good is the bicycle, but the materials science hasn't kept up. It is already foreseeable that the protagonist is a porter. 3. Historical figures have low abilities. In a few months, Liu Bei, Zhuge Liang and others traveled back and forth to modern times several times. Except for the supplies provided by the protagonist, there were almost no changes in other aspects. Are there any political measures? Are there institutional changes? The technical department must be reformed or a new one established, right? There was nothing but a group of people making gunpowder. The aristocratic family spent a lot of time writing, but they didn't write anything. Who is willing to represent advanced productive forces, support new technologies, and prepare to start reforms with Liu Bei and Zhuge Liang? Who has become a staunch opposition because of the damage caused by new technologies? Generally, time-travel novels only have one protagonist. Now that you have a world behind you, you have to write about the old and new parties, not the geographically divided Jingzhou and Yizhou factions. Conclusion: It is full of thoughts about showing the saints in front of people, and a lot of space is wasted on the reactions of modern people, but it does not write about the changes in ancient times.

Let's make a complaint: When writing about the Three Kingdoms period, you must visit Wuhou Temple. Do you not need ID cards to go to scenic spots? Can anyone from other provinces tell me? Several scenic spots I visited in Guangdong required ID cards to buy tickets, and the real-name system was speechless. No need for those from other provinces?

Whether it is the core of people-oriented thinking, various modern views of tolerance and tolerance, and the logic of various characters' behaviors, they are all quite reasonable, and at least they have corresponding explanations. It is quite good and worth a look.

In order to make the protagonist reasonably greedy for money, I really found all kinds of excuses.

There is no systematic way to rationalize the people of the Three Kingdoms. In reality, the sense of existence is so strong, and the country has no reaction at all.

It's only Chapter 33. The protagonist has already revealed to his brother and girlfriend the secret of traveling through time and space and bringing ancient people to the present. How many more people do he want to know? If such a huge secret can be known to others, does it have to test human nature?

This book has gone far. I write this probably because the author thought the book was blocked because of poor grades.

It's very novel, but Zhuge Liang is not the prime minister yet, so it needs to be changed.

From the north, to Jingzhou, and then to Bashu. Followers along the way. This group of people grew old and died, and Shu Han died. In addition, the death of Shu Han was not the time for Liu Chan to surrender. But the time of Jiang Wei's death. Why do future generations want to engage in floating officials instead of letting locals become local officials? He was frightened by the powerful landlord family. Cao Cao had the largest population and usable land in the three countries, but he was forced to farm and harvest 40%-50% of the harvest, which became a benevolent policy. There was nothing Cao Cao could do about the aristocratic landowners and powerful people in the north hiding their population and land.

Very good work! It makes people want to read it all. Don't be discouraged, author, keep up the good work! Give you a reward. As for monthly passes, we don't have them either. But what you wrote is really great! Don't care about other people's opinions. As a bookworm, I have to say that your work is really good.

The creativity is okay, and some chapters may be a bit drooling, but from time to time, a superhuman behavior will appear. How can one person cook twenty dishes in one hour, which is enough for 9 people? It can be said that the detail polishing ability is so bad that he slaps his head and writes without considering the rationality at all. However, the protagonist acts in a high-profile manner. It is inevitable that he will be noticed by the government departments of the main world later. It is conceivable that it is only a matter of time before the official deception appears.

The update is too slow, the words are too few, and it is not interesting.

Reluctantly vote for criticism 😃

Not bad. I've finished reading it. Good luck to the author 🙂

There has been no update for six days. It seems that he is about to enter the palace.

I stayed up late to read it, I think it's okay, I have some brains