Bianjing Fresh Restaurant

There are quite a few mistakes, serious ones such as Chapter 3: "The old lady is no longer seventy" and "After all, she is eighty years old" - Seventy is seventy, is the old lady seventy or eighty? And how can "ancient" be preceded by "but"? Is it a common thing to be "old and rare"... The average age of many dynasties in ancient times was thirty... If nothing else, the heroine has a father who is a doctor, so she should be given a normal name, but her name is still "Guo'er", a name given to a real little maid... Female video authors generally have obvious gender bias in naming.

I won't talk about the content first, but it's really embarrassing to praise the heroine's refined temperament at the beginning. A heroine, who grew up as a maid between the ages of 7 and 17 and had no chance to read or read, insists on her extraordinary temperament. Are the other ladies in the Duke's mansion raised as beggars? I guess if you give the heroine a nail, she can rub a nuclear bomb with her hands.

Oh, it's beautiful, it's fireworks in the world, it's ordinary and tasteful

I think it's ok! ! ! Update soon! ! !

Is it too funny to set the identity of the heroine as the maid of the first wife? How can she go out to open a shop with such an identity, and how can she redeem herself? It is simply a hell of a difficulty.