Cultivation of Immortality: Start by Deducing Ten Thousand Dharma

The protagonist gives people a sense of deja vu as a low-level bachelor who desperately saves Xu Jiayin and then gets involved in a vendetta against a wealthy family. There should be less of a plot where the protagonist saves the family genius. The protagonist has a problem, has no shortage of skills, and can earn spiritual stones by himself, so he can develop it by himself. Being involved in a vendetta between wealthy families will only lead to the plot of killing the younger one, bringing in the older one, suppressing the master and torturing the master, and endless matryoshka dolls.

There are a huge amount of resources every day, even a pig can fly, but a dead waste like pig's feet that has never been seen in thousands of years is still struggling in boredom.

Let's briefly talk about a few points First, the protagonist's harvesting process is not described in detail. He harvests for the sake of harvesting. The description of the environment has no sense of substitution and cannot highlight the hardships of the protagonist's harvest. Second, if the harvest is robbed and the emotions are not enough, you can add a few plots of the handyman disciples being bullied and killed mercilessly, so that you can see that the handyman disciples are not treated as human beings. Third, in order to insert the golden finger, it is too blunt to arrange for the protagonist's life to be threatened and obtain the golden finger. There is absolutely no need to do this, just simply harvest the golden fingers, and there is no need to threaten lives. Fourthly, the character design of the protagonist is still a little tasteless. Just remember that the two villains are useless. You need to make the protagonist have the thoughts and actions to kill them. Again, the emotions are not pulled enough, the character of the protagonist is not established quickly, and you abandon some necessary plots, resulting in the plot being empty and looking a bit dull.

At the beginning, the author saw that the protagonist has a low IQ and is like a fool.

This book starts with AI stuff, and then I revised it myself. Don't ask me why I know that.

The author's background is not enough, and the plot structure, setting, character fighting, etc. Are all deficient. Come on.

The golden finger is too powerful. Why should I wait for the sect to die passively if there is such a thing? It can be better than this anywhere. It is only like this if there is a problem with IQ.

In the first 30 chapters, while talking about poor spiritual roots, I still have the energy to prepare additional elixirs, talismans, and formations, and there should be weapon refining later on.

Are you confused about spells and martial arts? The art of observing the phenomena of heaven and earth, such as thunder, wind, fire, water, etc... What about the concepts?

Halfway through the first chapter, I don't want to read anymore. I need to have some brains, or force my life to hang by a thread and awaken the golden finger.

You are no longer a noob, you are completely brainless!

To be honest, just judging from the introductions of these sessions, I can still read it! Author, I support you 😡

Another book that uses the writing method of fantasy novels to write fairy tales

Has fantasy been changed to the fairy tale category?

What a classic fantasy novel about immortality. It reminds me of the first time I read the novel. There are no flaws in the writing. The story is very interesting and can be read by new readers.

Come on, author! I saw you on Douyin. As a newbie, just try your best to finish writing your first book. I wish you a book explosion as soon as possible!

It's worse than God's reward for hard work.

No logic at all, no need to think about it

I once read a book in which the protagonist spends spiritual stones to deduce martial arts and magical powers. The protagonist first spends money to deduce talismans, and then relies on the talismans to make money to deduce spells and magical powers, and then deduce the magical powers of clones. Use the puppet to combine with the clone to make the clone, and then practice elixirs and draw talismans with the main body. I used clones to sell them, and in this cycle, I finally got myself a set of magical powers, including the magical power of swordsmanship for attack, and the magical power of Five Elements Escape for escape, which can adapt to every environment. There are magical powers for defense, magical powers for trapping people, and magical powers for breaking formations. In the middle and late stages, there are magical powers of space, magical powers of time, and magical powers of cause and effect. In the later stages, even fate and luck are controlled by the protagonist.

😎😎😎

I think the writing is okay, and it doesn't look like AI. It's just that the results are not good. There is a high possibility of being a eunuch.