Naruto: Power Animals

Advantages: The writing is smooth, the angle is novel, the plot dares to change boldly and it is relatively logical. I really like this kind of work that dares to break through. I can tell you that it is an old author at first glance Disadvantages: 1. The pace is fast, from genin to elite jounin, to Uchiha in half a year It took off from there, because the pace was too fast and the plot was contradictory. For example, after the Sannin defeated Hanzo, the three Nagatos without Jiraiya's guidance joined the rain ninja and became jounin in half a year. In the meantime, they had to find connections, complete tasks, etc., And finally they were able to compete with the protagonist of the elite jounin. Totally unreasonable 2. The system is too deliberate. When drowsiness comes, the system sends pillows. It always gives you what you need. If you need vision, you give the Sharingan. The protagonist can even know what the next reward will be. For example, if the protagonist knows that he has made an Uchiha, he will give him a kaleidoscope. Also, he will become proficient in all the things given by the system, but the protagonist does not think of ways to upgrade the system to get rewards, but instead studies on his own with books, and the description is that the knowledge of books is extremely high. The protagonist had the brain of a technician in his previous life, and now he is studying the stuff of a doctor? Isn't it much better to have this time to work on the system 3. There are too many private settings, and shadow-level experts can set them up casually, and they also promote curses. How strong is the riddle curse? The third generation Mizukage was also cursing when he died. Is it consistent with the original work? The curse is so powerful that it has been fighting for thousands of years without becoming a genre? There is also the ability of the kaleidoscope, which is perpetual motion and has no solution. It can directly reverse the bloodline to the completion of the ancestor of Otsutsuki 4. Emotions, I won't talk about it. You don't have to write it if you don't know how to write it. In the original work, how long does it take to fall in love and kill each other to become a couple. You have just become a teacher. There is no long-term interaction and no common experience of adversity. The two of them have not even communicated a few times. They just confessed and won. Isn't this a good article? Finally, I hope that there are really no books to read in the Naruto section. Since the author has the ability, he should write well, dare to change the plot and be logical, so that the protagonist can have a growth experience. Come on!

What is the nature of rights? It's violence. After all, you still have to master the most powerful violence in the world to have the greatest rights.

It would be nice if there was no system. Earn power by yourself. Even if there is no system, we should still strive for it. Instead of using the system to kidnap power. The protagonist is an ordinary civilian ninja. Then give a system. Since the protagonist's effort is ridiculous, the system must be full of bugs. It would be better to write that the protagonist is a genius civilian. Or big businessmen and nobles. This allows for direct participation in the structure of power. Because the third generation needs support, whether it is money, influence, or political propaganda work. The serialized story promotes the will of the Hokage, a mercenary military organization. Moreover, it has its own strength and is difficult to overthrow. Brainwashing is also very powerful. As a time traveler, it is easy to overthrow. Cooperate with Orochimaru to channel the first and second generations. With the third generation of urine, he can be forced to step down directly. As long as I can take over, that's fine. The best way to become Hokage, if not as a ninja as a noble or a big businessman. To become Tsunade's lover, start with political propaganda work instead of fighting on the front line. Create profits and exert management capabilities to unite a group of people with the will of Hokage. After the first generation and second generation are channeled, the ruler who clears out the third generation can directly ascend to the throne based on Tsunade's relationship and his own achievements.

The book is not bad. It's just that some of the dialogue is like that of college roommates, jumping out of the characters' identity and habits of their time, which is very bad.

This book is okay. I am Shennong. It is non-toxic.

Have you ever been a ninja? Some things are written randomly, taken for granted References:

A name like Chen Lai is very funny in Naruto

There is no way, your senior time traveler starts with the Six Paths template, or the orthodox bloodline of Otsutsuki. Even if you don't understand the knowledge, chakra can only be food to them. Do you care about how much bread you have eaten? After all, chakra is almost the same as fantasy aura. Can aura kill the seniors?

No, according to the timeline, Minato and Kushina were almost together when they graduated, so Minato should have learned the sealing technique. It is normal for Minato to be included in the Mito family reunion dinner.

It seems that the outline has collapsed😰😰😰

It's quite interesting, and it's not a book that follows the plot. I've read more than sixty chapters so far. Nagato died suddenly when Hanzo was still alive. The author has his own ideas.

It just collapsed. I stopped watching when I saw Payne and the bug.

I can only say that there is still a problem with proportion. When you narrate, you can write it however you want. But when you write the dialogue between characters, you can't say that you write it all yourself, or do you have to write it according to the way the characters speak in the plot?

Why did it suddenly cut when it was fine?

Such an interesting book. Is it an extraterrestrial demon? Still the old author's vest?

Great idea. The conversation at the beginning of Chapter 11 was too dramatic.

Fugaku opening his eyes was too much of a joke, and he fell apart from then on.

The pace is too fast... It feels like we are fighting three battles now

It's a bit interesting. First of all, the subject matter is novel, and there's not so much inexplicable hatred. It's more comfortable to read. At least it's good to read as an entertainment article.