Travel Through Countless Worlds at the Same Time, Starting from Dafeng!

Oh, forget it, it's not to your liking. If you want to kill Ye Qingmei, then kill her. If not, why are you writing so much, and you want to stop it? I'm really speechless. People have already shot at you, and you look like this. I don't like it.

Don't copy poems without thinking. Many poems are not suitable for the occasion.

In the first world, Qing Yu Nian, the protagonist knew that Ye Qingmei wanted to kill his father, but he refused to kill Ye Qingmei when he had the chance. He held off until his father was killed, and he himself was sniped by Ye Qingmei, and then he still forcibly refused to kill. After reading this, 90% of the readers have been eliminated.

Hey, there are eight or nine mysterious skills, but I don't practice the Splitting Heaven Palm 🤫🤫🤫

At first glance, it looks like a licking of a dog, with no brainer.

Don't insult AI, okay? This article is even worse than AI.

I just finished reading the first chapter, it was stiff and awkward. If I use a tree metaphor, I only see bare branches, and these branches are still dry. More work needs to be done on the writing.

It is so poisonous that an enemy like Ye Qingmei, who killed his father, can lick it. These three views are crooked to the bottom. Why can't I write without a woman?

Author, you must know that shallow waters don't support dragons. The small population of Dafeng cannot raise very strong people. If the realm is deliberately raised, only nuclear bomb saints and ten-step giants can appear. Alas, another fantasy floor tiles.

Your father was killed by Ye Qingmei, and you did go to be Ye Qingmei's licking dog

Pure AI text copied and pasted, many sentences are not fluent, have been tested! ! ! !

I don't have a nice way to put it, this is shit

In the previous scene, the left brain attacked the right brain, saying that Ye Qingmei didn't care enough not to kill others when they were alone, and at the same time, he was jealous of Ye Qingmei. I tolerated this. Then came the story where everyone knew that the protagonist became the first grand master. You also know that he was the first grand master. Did people in the past know what a grand master was? There wasn't any great master in Qingyu years before Ye Qingmei appeared, right? Strictly speaking, all the grand masters were created by Ye Qingmei. To be honest, I guess this thing is completely different from Qing Yunian's local martial arts system. Otherwise, why can't anyone else become a grand master? There is also Beiqi. If I remember correctly, Beiqi became Beiqi after being severely beaten, right? It should be the Northern Wei Dynasty now? Cloud readers just come here to write fan fiction? At least check the information?

You have to be careful when copying novels. I didn't change the name. It appeared many times.

I'm speechless. This book is hopeless, and so is the author.

This novel is written in a messy way, here and there.

Traveling at the same time is full of amnesiacs

Jun Yituo's defense😤😤😤