Simultaneous Time Travel: Starting from the Bad Guys

In the latest chapter, the interaction between the protagonist and the empress is a bit witty. This is also the reason why so many people like to watch movies without female protagonists. The protagonist starts to lose his mind when he meets a woman. How can this be done? If you don't know how to write about a female protagonist, just don't write it at all, or just get out of here. The female protagonist has no sense of existence and avoid the poisonous points. The protagonist captured the empress and her men, ran over to ask for money and food, and was still taken advantage of? ? ? Suddenly, there was something like watching a female video. The general held an army of millions, and the prince casually killed the general's entire family.

The protagonist mainly attacks the left brain and attacks the right brain. At the beginning (bad people), many countries sent a lot of money and food to the protagonist in order to curry favor with the protagonist. The protagonist pretended to be aloof and did not want to do anything. Later, he suddenly (yes, it is so outrageous) found that he had no money and food and immediately became a licking dog and was manipulated by the empress. In the beginning, I didn't want the emperor (Li Xingyun) to let you go as soon as you ascended the throne (I really let you go). Then later I realized something was wrong and needed the emperor for something, so I immediately went all over the world to find Li Xingyun.

I've only read a few chapters, but I feel like it's a rubbish book. The first three chapters are okay. I feel that the protagonist has the image of a generation of heroes. The protagonist in the beginning gives the impression that he is domineering, wise, and good at strategizing. He is decisive in killing and has mastered a large power. His troops are strong and strong. They are all elites, and some are the elites among the elites. Is this a generation of heroes? After Yuan Tiangang came out, it turned out to be a piece of shit. The author directly changed Yuan Tiangang's character. Yuan Tiangang only lives for his own ideas. He has been used to being domineering for so many years. As long as he wants to achieve it, he must do it. Either he beats others to death or he is beaten to death. From the original anime, this is such a character. This kind of person will force you to rely on him like old friends? Moreover, the protagonist's cultivation level is already very good, and his physique has been super strengthened, but he cannot defeat Yuan Tiangang. Also, the protagonist has managed such a large piece of land as his own. After so many years, the crops have not improved at all? Doubling the food production on your own territory? And this kind of extraordinary world is full of energy. Isn't it easy to improve? After so many years, there is still a shortage of food. Don't you usually stock up on food? What followed was a series of suffocation operations that left people speechless.

Anyone who writes about one person always praises Lao Tianshi, as if Lao Tianshi is considered strong in all major worlds, but the expressiveness of one person is there, so what's the use of forcing it? Or maybe some books have traveled through time and still don't dare to have a stronger heart than the Heavenly Master, and they are judged as rake ears and thoughts into the brain, and this will be the case in this life.

The first few photos were okay, but the later ones were especially good after meeting the Empress. The writing is really unbearable, and the maggots in the cesspit are stronger than the protagonist. What are you writing about? A master of power can conquer the world and himself. Play child's play. The current dog-licking losers are better than you.

It's not good-looking, and there are all kinds of settings. If you can't write a female protagonist, don't write a female protagonist. Is this Heavenly Master so powerful? You tell me that you have superimposed so many worlds and you still can't beat the Heavenly Master. Stop living. Haven't you seen Nathan's Island? My evaluation is that this novel is all YY

To be honest, I'm just pointing out the bad guy in the title. Bringing out the Dead Sea Fire is really a price drop. It feels like you're changing the Hokage into Xia Lan, the Death God into Zhenhun Street, etc., All in the same system.

Bad Guys is well written, as is Death. Under one person, they are pure garbage. Pirates is too bland.

It looks good, I suggest you, Douluo is just a piece of shit, don't even touch it, The Dragon Clan is a bit boring, by the way.

If a man kills a beautiful woman and is reluctant to kill her, if you want to stop, just say so. After all, your character is that of a general. It makes you uncomfortable to look at her, or you should be hard-hearted and kill her. You can't find such a beautiful woman with such a powerful force in the world? The plot is a bit too intellectual, and the writing at the beginning is actually okay. In this case, there should be less emotional drama later on. . . Otherwise, it will affect the perception very much.

Li Cunxiao was written as a love brain on a female channel. Kneeling and licking the empress Song Yunji simply made the image of the powerful and invincible character into a mess. Fortunately, the poisonous points were exposed before it was released. I didn't have time to subscribe.

I was disgusted by the bad guy in the second half and started to complain, so I asked the author what he learned from the squid, right? Have you watched Mystery 2? Do you think you can find a so-called "reasonable" reason and everything will be fine? How dare you imitate even the cuttlefish himself was sprayed in the same way? 🤣Think about how to write it so that it is enjoyable and not disgusting. The bad guy was pretty good before he became a licking dog. After he started to be a licking dog, he stretched his hips all the way and pressed the protagonist like crazy. What serious injury cannot be cured in a long time, the space is useless, and so on. You are forced to let your enemies run away time and time again for various "reasonable" reasons. You brag about how awesome you are, but you still let them run after you can't kill them for a long time. In the end, you even sneak away with the ball inexplicably. Don't you think this arrangement of yours is very funny? Also, "Wow, my writing is so reasonable and you can't criticize me." It's funny. Why are you so happy when you write about mainstream abuse? Why do you write about time travel at the same time? The cheats are better than yours.

I won't talk about other complaints because it's too abstract, so I'll just talk about one: a overlord is short of money because of a war? ? ? He was the overlord who had won the battle and regained a large area of ​​land. . .

Don't listen to other people's opinions at all and start enjoying yourself? I'm still writing about my feelings, but it's still so awkward. Say goodbye.

Chapter 59 The author knelt down when he saw the beautiful woman and ran away

Although Jiujiu is basically a 💩, I still hope to find gold in the pit, even if there is no gold or silver.

The emperor was given a posthumous title while he was still alive. I can't tell the title of his reign and country. The author should change it.

Master Tian first passed the middle heaven position, Zhang Zifan, and then touched the rest

Why do all the gods have to write "Naruto" and "One Piece"? Why?

Traveling simultaneously is all about amnesia

Will Li Cunxiao become more beautiful? It would be too abstract to remain the same as in the drama.

Can we add a "Jianlai" world?

When will it resume? It's been a long time since I stopped working