Rebirth and Knowing the Young Generation, Plowing the Fields

In the 1960s and 1970s, farming could only be said to be starving to death. When faced with famines, a large number of people died. People who really thought that farming was just about enjoying some pastoral scenery were the rich and idle people in the city. When there were no good seeds and fertilizers, farming was really tiring. People were so busy all year round that they could only survive from starvation.

What about your writing? It's a long nonsense description, but there's not much actual content. Have you gone to the wrong place when you play literary youth? ?

I really dislike the character development of the protagonist. He is not like the kind of outgoing, optimistic, cheerful and enthusiastic person, but more like the kind of virgin bitch who does not consider the good or bad of others. He has no bottom line and no filter and rushes to teach others. He shares selflessly and will definitely fail.

I want to write a chronicle, but I can't express that feeling. The character is a person who has returned from the peak of Jin Dan, and his experience is like just entering the qi training in the immortal world, which is too out of the ordinary. Holy Mother, in the article written about that era, I caught two fish weighing 30 kilograms each, and everyone ate them together. The reason was that they couldn't handle it, which was nonsense. The eggs that were lent out were returned by others and many people saw them. They contributed them and ate them together, which was outrageous. Didn't watch it later. At the beginning of the article, I also paid attention to a detail. I used the remaining energy from the time-travel to heal the soul-piercing body. I was originally hopeful, but then it became abstract, especially the interaction with the woman, and the protagonist looked abstract. . .

The protagonist's temper is too rubbish, what kind of expression is the Tengu?

Chapter 107, it feels like they are all traveling in the countryside. They have beautiful farmhouses, meat and grain that can be eaten secretly, entertainment activities, ambiguity between men and women, and occasionally some contemporary taboo activities, such as reading pornographic books. Are you writing about educated youth? Are you sure you are not writing about the life you long for?

Plowing the land, why aren't you exhausted? Have you ever farmed? Do you know why rural people age quickly and have short life spans?

I can't continue reading, it's too urban. The author could try a poultry farm instead of something down-to-earth like going to the countryside.

One day, just one day, if you don't ask for mercy, you will be considered a great man.

I don't have any objections to farming or writing style. The key lies in plot design and character description. If I have objections based solely on farming and writing style, then there must be something wrong. It's just that the world of immortality has traveled to modern times, and this theme is very ancient.