Naruto: I Am Minato, Back from the Fourth War!

Isn't Minato's teacher Jiraiya? Why did he become the third generation? And where did the council members in Hokage come from?

The subject matter is very good, and the casting is OK. The first chapter is OOC. I have no experience in choosing sentence fragments and the long paragraphs are a bit too much. I am a novice. The article can be further polished Tell me about the OOC part The dirty earth body of the original four battles with Minato is yin and yang There are two concepts to be introduced here in Escape and Interruption. One is that the Reincarnation of the Earth is a type of psychic art, and the other is that the Yin Yang Escape and the Ball Dojo can be immune to the art and interrupt the art. When Minato returned to the underworld, he showed a broken arm and looked very much like a soul. The arm was also broken up, but this concept is not rigorous The concept of using Yin-Yang Escape to interrupt the connection between the arm and the spiritism [Reincarnation in the Dirty Land + Underworld] is more rigorous than the interruption of the soul In the first chapter, the author wants to write a picture of a loving father and a filial son. Face, but did not delve into the relationship between their father and son First determine the character Naruto; a ninja who is nervous, careless and occasionally delicate, and the most unexpected, famous saying [I do what I say, this is my nindo (playing Neji the Hedgehog, ashes belt) Earth, Hyuga Liberation Stalks (Move to ps1 for details)] Resentment towards his father in the early stage, and a look of pride on his debut in the later four battles Emotionally, he understood what his father should complain about, and in the end, only the sadness of his father's departure was left. Minato; Naturally stupid, honest to the outside, serious and dark to the outside, he is absolutely the best in the world to Kushina, responsible and responsible, famous quote "Because I don't want to lose you" Trust/guilt towards Naruto, the reason for his early death was that Kushina said she wanted to look at Naruto When he grows up [Kushina's timeline will turn into Minato's tyranny, high pressure and pathological protection if she doesn't say this sentence. For details, please refer to the Limited Tsukuyomi Minato chapter], and then uses the corpse seal + four elephants and eight trigrams seal to seal the chakra of the two people in Naruto's body to prepare him for future strength. Inheritance and violence guarantee, guilt is not participating in Naruto's life Now let's talk about the author's ooc, Minato does not have dirty earth body arms, and secondly, Naruto's emotions for Minato are complicated, and he will not embrace Minato, not to mention the dirty earth reincarnation solution After the removal, the soul ascended to heaven, the dirty earth body produced a lot of dust, and white Zetsu leaked out (you don't want to see Naruto hugging a white Zetsu, right?) In the plot, Naruto responded to everything Kushina cared about, from eating to friends to everything about himself. The current state It's Shuangshou resting on the back of the head, showing a very open-minded attitude, rather than directly expressing the childish mentality of being reluctant to let go of Minato The three golden chapters still need to be rewritten, at least not OOC [ps1: Let's talk about Neji the Hedgehog, Neji the Hedgehog belongs to Japan's Kishimoto is at fault. The most popular heroine on the Internet is determined to be Hinata, but in Japanese customs Neji and Hinata can be... And there are not many emotional lines. Kishimoto wanted to draw a symmetrical state with one with Rin and one without Rin, but no one died and it didn't look like Obito. Despair, and then painted Neji to death Tell me about the Ashes of a Hundred Battles/Ashes Obito, Don't take it out of context, Don't take it out of context, Don't take it out of context, Say important things three times, Why Naruto Saying that you are not allowed to laugh at Obito makes so many people think you are a clown. Naruto has changed. Anyone who says this will be labeled as Cloud Shadow Before Naruto said the words "Don't laugh at Obito", Obito had rescued Naruto twice, and once snatched back the Kyuubi and transported it to Naruto. , The second time was to kill Ash Bones together at the moment. If the person who resisted the knife with Naruto's character died and was ridiculed by the other party without scolding him, then this person is not Naruto at all At this moment, there are "people" who say that good people do one bad thing in their lives and let Mi Tai ~ bad people do it before they die. It's a good thing to make this publicity~ This will introduce the second concept [Binding Sasuke] After Kaguya's invasion, Sasuke had a fight with Naruto in order to achieve high-pressure tyranny. Most of the subsequent plots were Naruto and others, and Sasuke The scene of Suke only lasts less than 30 seconds. His eyes are covered by a blindfold attached to the sealing technique, and his whole body is tied up like a silkworm chrysalis and locked up in a prison. Sasuke, one of the saviors of the ninja world, is treated this way. Do you think Obito will be locked up for the rest of his life if he returns alive after being lost? ，，，，                           ------------ ，，

This writing is okay, and it does not fall into the category of venting anger common in Qidian. Com nor does it fall into the category of fun writing. A bit serious.

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