JOJO: Lao Ma Shi Tu
JOJO：老马食途
- Status
- Ongoing
- Length
- 103k Words
- Genre
- Light Novel
- Audience
- Male
- Subgenre
- Fan Fiction
- Updated
- 1mo ago
- Source
- Qidian
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58Chapters
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Come on! Came here from Writer's Assistant.
Can't read. Strange stand-in ability, strange stand-in name, strange plot. The feeling of writing whatever comes to mind.
The characters in front can add some expressions and psychological activities, but it is too dry and lacks a sense of immersion. The punctuation marks can be checked again. I found that some symbols are wrong. The plot is a bit confusing, and I'm still confused after watching it several times. A small section can be divided into smaller pieces, it is a bit too long. If you have time, can you help me read my book? I can't find the problem myself and I need others to criticize me severely. I also wish you can sign the contract as soon as possible.