Mortal, the Second Head of the Hehuan Sect, with a Little Bit of Cultivation

There is also a famous saying: Your cultivation is achieved through practice, and your realm is vain. My state is to add points to the system and work steadily 🙂

As a member of the devil's path, he doesn't even take supplements. He is still a member of the Hehuan Sect. Is this also called a devil? , The type wearing a devil's coat

The protagonist sees one taking a concubine, would you like to take Han Li? 😳

At the beginning of the game, the protagonist is in the middle stage of Yuanying. He is 249 years old and Han Li is 21 years old. The protagonist saves Chen Qiaoqian Then the invasion of the demonic way and the invasion of the Mulan people were written. About 30 years later, the nephew of Mu Wuya in the middle appeared directly. The scene is about the Nascent Soul stage. The original work is about the Nascent Soul stage after more than 200 years. The timeline is written randomly The advanced Nascent Soul stage is written 70 years later, but it turns out that the panel of the Nascent Soul stage shows 322 years old Then after More than a year later, Han Li formed an elixir and entered the Void Palace. In the original work, it took 20 years for Han Li to form an elixir before entering the Void Palace The transformation period of the god broke through at 352 years old, and it took more than 100 years to break through the Yuan Dynasty, but he transformed into a god in 30 years Jin The finger said that it is to add some cultivation to immortality. Anyway, the author can break through wherever he wants, and there is no feeling of improvement at all. The latest incarnation is 376 years old. I don't want to read it. Recently, it has become more and more perfunctory. There are too many typos.

Is it better to watch a mortal cultivating an immortal or the anime version?

Your opponent's realm is divided into late stage, early stage and mid stage. Can you please take a look and write it down?

It's almost finished Advantages: Invincible feeling, you can do whatever you want Disadvantages include too much hang-up, and you can kill someone with just a few moves in a fight. There is no emotional foreshadowing in the aspect of acquiring a daughter. Of course, you are too strong and you don't need foreshadowing. There is no follow-up after acquiring a daughter. The whole thing is bland and the author hasn't read the original work for a long time. Then when you watch the anime, you can see that the plot of the original anime has been copied, and the plot is all Han Li's plot. As for fandoms, apart from accepting girls to watch emotional dramas, they just have to come up with their own style. Otherwise, why would you watch a fanfic? It's a pity that the setting is quite good.

I really don't understand the author's brain circuit. No wonder many book friends advise, Shen Nong

Ah? Why did a fight suddenly break out? I didn't offend you and invited you to sit down. How could you kill someone when you were having a discussion with a gun?

I can't write well when I go to the spiritual world. I know the danger of Mahayana is to wander. This is a common problem of many people. It's more comfortable and reasonable to write in the human world. Once you go to the spiritual world, you won't be able to write well. If you don't go to the human world, you will rarely encounter the transformed gods. At most, you will encounter Xiang Zhili, who doesn't have much malice. This is not the case in the spiritual world. Go up there. At most, it is almost the same as in the late stage of refining the void, and at most it has been done in the early stage of integration, but in the end, it is necessary to go to places full of Mahayana to find death. Why don't you keep a low profile? It is not the original Han Li. Han Li survived several times by luck. The protagonist went even though he knew there was danger, and even took his family with him. How can the Mahayana attack not kill the whole family? If you continue to write that it can be out of tune or even repulsed by Mahayana's hand, it will be over, and the combat power will collapse. When you write that the main character goes out to wander around in the early Mahayana period, he's pretty good (╥ω╥`)

Author, are you ready to be a eunuch? If this is the case, we should close the network early. I just finished three or four chapters and saw you asking for leave... I was very panicked. 🙂 There are many authors, and the eunuch started by asking for leave...

Main plot: Collect all the women Han Li met as a mortal

Hasn't the author read the original work? I guess I haven't even finished the novel yet.

The timeline is in chaos, and the plots of hundreds of years in the early days of mortals are put together in a matter of months.

This kind of book can be used as a starting point, and it is invincible.

Didn't you go to the dungeon of the Bloody Forbidden Land and ignore a gift of transformation? Human-turned-gods can more or less see something, right?

You have too many typos. . .

Why are there two female cultivators in the Nascent Soul Stage missing from Xiaoji Palace? One is the palace master, and the other is her sister from the Bai family. The author doesn't know how to write the plot, so it's mainly based on animation. As for the plot of the novel, it's basically impossible to forget these two people. It's a bit outrageous.

The protagonist is really hungry, even the red Buddha accepts it

I suggest the author become a moderator. Anyway, this fanfic has so many chapters and the results are not good enough to make any money. To generate electricity for love, it is better to go to the moderator

This book can definitely be called "The Young Master's Biography of Immortality", hahaha

There are so many mortal colleagues, and the only one I can read is yours

You kid coded words phonetically. After you finished coding, you didn't even check for typos.

Just start copying the original work, right?

Has the protagonist ever practiced double cultivation with Yunlu Laomo?

You should update two more chapters to be worthy of my monthly ticket

Mortal: Start from the game store

I read it back and forth four times. Every time I get to about ten chapters, I can't stand it anymore. I don't know what's going on.

The quality is similar to that of Da Jin Lei Xiu. The writing is good and the plot is not awkward. It must be finished!

Come and recommend a similar book, Mortal: The system is an infrastructure mini-game