Longevity Starts from Reaching the Highest Level of Baiyi

Dear Taoist friends, when you are pursuing your studies, you must go to the last page and see your ranking of your pursuits, otherwise it will not count as your pursuits! ! ! Please🙏please🙏, I'm kneeling here! ! !

Fellow Taoists, please comment more. If you have any suggestions for each chapter, I will consider and adjust them as appropriate in the subsequent plots! Thank you fellow Taoists for your support! ! ! 🙏🙏🙏 I wish all fellow Taoists to be rich and loved, and have good luck all the way! ! !

The writing is okay. I originally wanted to find faults, but considering that you are a newcomer, I think it is definitely of a good standard for a newcomer's first book and can be read. However, it is recommended not to be too clichéd, especially the kind where everyone who meets the protagonist has to be greedy twice. Don't show too many characters.

As a newcomer, the author's writing style is good, the main line is very clear, and it has great potential. Come on

Fellow Taoists, please leave more comments! 🙏

Well written, please keep updating the author

After reading four chapters, I feel like it's a pretentious and slap-in-the-face novel disguised as a cultivator, and the level of pretentiousness is relatively low.

It was well written, I read it in one sitting, and there was nothing uncomfortable about it.

The writing is pretty good, and the pace of strength improvement is okay. I read this book, and it was similar to yours. It has more than 70 chapters and covers the third level of Qi training.

At the same time, planting, drawing talismans, refining elixirs, setting up formations, constantly consuming and accumulating, and then the output can't guarantee a safer life, what on earth do you want to do?

Dear Taoist friends, this is your first time to create immortal literature, and you are filled with apprehension and expectation every day. I know that ordinary people pay attention to long-term flow and accumulation, but as a newcomer, there will inevitably be omissions in my writing, and there may even be "little poisonous spots" that affect your reading experience. I urge you all to give me your advice, whether it is rhythm, plot, or characters, any suggestions can be a step forward for me to improve. I will also learn humbly, polish it repeatedly, avoid shortcomings in subsequent stories, and strive to present more exciting stories to everyone. I also hope that all fellow Taoists will support me and join me on this journey of immortality!

Okay, okay, don't stop writing, buddy.

Are all new authors this miserable?

The story gets better and better from now on, getting better and better!

The author's writing is really good. I hope you can go further and further on the road of writing without being led by anyone.

It seems to be very simple, so I only think that someone who has barely read it can be immersed in it. It is indeed written by a newcomer. The latest chapter has the feeling of Han Tianzun meeting Mo Caihuan. Keep up the good work

Encouragement

Innovatively introduces the proficiency ≈ success rate mode, and then the success rate of the protagonist at the beginning is not 0️⃣ except for one talisman, the others are all 0️⃣, and the skills are all 0️⃣. How to calculate the skills? As long as it works, can you say it's a failure? Excuse me, have you never learned magic since you were so old? As long as it can be performed successfully once, why do you say that the chance is 0️⃣? And according to the current settings, quality improvement requires learning new knowledge. It is better to copy the public settings and work on the plot.

Seeing as you went out of your way to modify the plot, I'll take a look again.

I left in Chapter 4, pretending to be a slap in the face, can I survive?

It is low-key and knows how to endure the essence of Gou Dao Gan Dao, but it is also timid and knows to put away its fangs before losing strength. The slow pace at the beginning may make people watch it. I think the main character is weak and the plot is weak, but the writing becomes better and better later on. It is not bad. If you like Gou Dao Liu and Gan Dao Liu, you can watch it.

They all say that immortality is precious, but why are they all written in the underworld's hard-pressed style?

Don't write about things that are insignificant, such as the foundation-building battle. You have no idea what the point of writing is? Does it have anything to do with the protagonist? It took two or three chapters to set up a temporary female supporting role, which is meaningless. It can be covered in a hundred words.

There are too many meaningless descriptions in recent chapters and there are many plot holes.

After reading a few chapters, I felt it was too oppressive and the villain wasn't too outstanding.

This author is so perseverant, something must have happened, otherwise he would not have entered the palace so suddenly.