
If I Can't Practice Fighting Spirit, Then I Will Become an Immortal Emperor!
不能修炼斗气,那我成仙帝了!
- Status
- Completed
- Length
- 234k Words
- Genre
- Eastern Fantasy
- Audience
- Male
- Subgenre
- Eastern Xuanhuan
- Updated
- 1y ago
- Source
- Qidian
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Well, I have a little idea.
I just feel like, the author, your description of the character of the protagonist is too cold and impersonal. I can probably understand that I mainly want to write about the feeling of not eating beef, but I don't grasp the feeling very well. It's a bit too much. How to describe it? It's like the three emperors Cang, Yu, and Hong in the perfect world have a sense of annihilation of humanity. Well, then I can't take on the role of the protagonist very well and it doesn't feel very satisfying. Well, I have a little suggestion. Well, for example, when writing characters, the author can refer to the overbearing feeling of the overbearing body in Zhetian without extinguishing humanity. Or the majestic and domineering attitude of the great emperor of the human race, who is aloof and dominates the inner world and respects the inner world. Or like Shi Hao's domineering attitude of "Who is invincible and who dares to say that he is invincible?" And now I feel that the protagonist is a bit too underworld. If you don't eat beef, you don't eat beef, but you still feel that you should have a bit of a human taste, and at least be able to distinguish right from wrong. Then when I become stronger, I won't ask for humility. After all, if I were so awesome, I would also be arrogant. But it just feels like the author made the protagonist look like a "nouveau riche". Well, one last thing. Author. I say all this because I read your novel earlier and I really liked it. I also like this type of novel very much. The subject matter feels very novel and has great potential. But recently, as mentioned above, the character description feels a little bit wrong, so I will briefly say a few words. I really like this novel and hope he can keep updating it. I also wish the author another great success. 😁😁😁🤭🤭
It's so supermodelto break with the perfect method
The author comes out
You're a bit of a supermodel. You won't be able to become a big master in the end with the Immortal Emperor. If you weaken it, please tell me earlier. I'd like to read the next book.
The writing is very good. Keep up the good work, the author
The author writes very well, keep up the good work