Kryptonite Cultivation: from Grass Cultivation to Immortal Emperor

Loose cultivators are just casual cultivators. We have to create a new word called cao cultivators 🤔

The sense of immersion in the writing itself is okay, and Goldfinger is a bit interesting, but there are too many fantasy movies, and there is no reason to watch them. Until I saw the third chapter, what, are you a fan? You told me so early! Who the hell can see this! I didn't realize who Qi Xiu was in the introduction at first! Don't let the free traffic go in vain It is recommended to put the five words "Crossing the Master's Road" in the title, because fantasy cultivation is common but well-written fandom is rare.

The previous chapters are really important for retaining readers, especially the first three chapters. My evaluation is that the writing style is acceptable. The scratch-off theme is very novel, but it is not engaging enough. The writing style of a single sentence is okay, but when connected together, it feels very disconnected and cannot be read. It is recommended that the words be used as concisely as possible. The unnecessary piling of words can be reduced, and the coherence between sentences can be increased as much as possible, and the explanations can be jumped out. The explanation is a bit stiff, but it's not a big problem, but this is the biggest problem. Now I want to write articles that are good, or the subject matter is particularly novel and creates a genre, or it is purely refreshing. Your ordinary and dark articles are no longer popular. There are too many. It is recommended to write more articles from scratch games and create some program effects. Novices generally write white articles. It is important to make people smile and read easily.

He scolded and walked away. I really don't understand how this book can only be written by people after meeting each other and chatting for a few words. Then they knelt down and bowed, shouting: Big brother, second brother, saving one's life.

The writing is not good First of all, the title of your book is Krypton Pill, but Goldfinger is about information Furthermore, your opening plot is not good Nowadays novels are all formulaic questions The protagonist is named as a time traveler at the beginning → clarify the current situation → encounter difficulties → activate the cheat , with a solution to the current predicament → start executing, pretending, and spreading the network of interpersonal relationships After that, the cycle of cheating on the career line continues I read the first three pictures, and I just finished my work and roughly turned to the sixth picture. I was confused. What is the golden finger? ! ! I read the title of the book, and I just wanted to see Krypton Pills to Cultivation to Immortality I was rambling here and there, I thought what you wrote seemed to be about mortals, and I was more insistent, so I was going to read it so I could vote, but I read the sixth one very irritably. Why would others stay and continue reading (I have dozens of mortal books on my bookshelf, and I can read them even if they are boring, but I can't finish any of them) You seem to be a fan of the master cultivator or something? I'm not very familiar with that book. I've read it several times and I haven't had time to read it Anyway, this book is very strange. In the first few pictures, I don't know what the protagonist is going to do You seem to be going to the giant turtle island, Goldfinger's tip But this hook is too far Readers can't expect that long at all Unless you want to write a fanfic about the leader, then I am not the audience I also read your last chapter in the afternoon, 120 Chapter, I am the ninth to read It means you have 500 collections now, and you only read more than ten in 24 hours. This is the reason I am in the fifth chapter. One person said that this is the same as Robinson Crusoe. You are right The reply is that it is the real world of cultivating immortals. The novel must have a plot to attract readers As for other examples of fire books: Slaying demons and demons, at the end of the first chapter, let the system help him fill up, kill the dog demon, and there will be no follow-up. Endless demon-killing pretense Dafeng, the case is solved in the first few chapters, and the motive is very clear There are other things, they are all activated by the golden finger, starting the way of pretense If you want to change this, for example, the protagonist buys (Task reward) A low-grade cultivation elixir was snatched away by an enemy. The system reminded that someone else's mid-grade cultivation elixir was buried under a tree a few miles away. The protagonist took it and achieved a breakthrough. The enemy also came to cause trouble for you. You took advantage of it... The follow-up is what you get. Information, so that the protagonist can use it immediately Or get three pieces of information, short-term (within three chapters), medium-term (within ten pictures), long-term use (within twenty or so pictures, or as foreshadowing) or resource information, character information, etc. The information given is the reader's expectation. If you are not satisfied immediately, and there is no interesting plot, the reader will definitely run [I have never read this kind of article, I know the daily hexagram] Let me just say it, you are the author! ! ! I feel like you are really a new author Really, you can't write like this There are too many mortal stories I wrote more than a dozen mortal story beginnings In the end, I didn't write any of them, I felt like I couldn't write them There should be more than 200,000 words of scrapped manuscripts Let me just say it casually, you are the author! ! ! Let me just say it casually, you are the author! ! ! Let me just say it casually, you are the author! ! ! So since you can write so long, I will give you all the monthly tickets. Come on, read more and write more, there is no harm in it The next book will definitely have better results

No, let's change it to an abstract name.

Fan fiction is similar to that of some master or something. It's a pity that writing fan fiction drowns out your own characteristics.

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I thought they were the same people as Zhe Tian

Come on, it's not easy for newbies. Persevere in a million words and surpass Wang Yu.

The first few chapters are pretty good, but the following chapters become increasingly ugly. The plot, fighting, and dialogue are a mess.

I can't stand it anymore. The setting of the blind chicken is that ordinary soil can grow spiritual plants. Why do you need those spiritual soil and spiritual veins?

All the handsome and charming male Taoist friends and the endlessly charming female Taoist friends in your collection, please help Xiao Xiu. This is a new book for a newbie. There are many shortcomings. I hope everyone will forgive me. New book seedlings, every step of their growth cannot be separated from everyone's care. The reading data of the new book issue is very important, very important. Daily recommendations are issued based on the reading data. Xiao Xiu currently only has 10 items that he can read 24 hours a day, but he has collected more than 350 items. The performance of this book is ridiculously poor, and it is extremely disappointing. Xiao Xiu feels scratchy and restless every day when he writes. Dear handsome male Taoist friends and endlessly charming female Taoist friends who want to read books and want to wait and see, Xiao Xiu understands and supports them. But please also help Xiaoxiu and click on the book to read. When Xiaoxiu posts a new chapter, just click on the book to the last page of the latest chapter. The system will also send you a follow-up picture. Dear handsome male Taoist friends and endlessly charming female Taoist friends, you must have collected this book because you think it is good, and you must also hope that this book will continue to grow well. Xiao Xiu would like to thank you all in advance. I bow and express my deep support. Thank you all, thank you very much! ! ! !

The lottery system in this book is relatively abstract when used in cultivating immortality!

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After looking at it, I thought it was okay. I thought about checking how much it had been updated and found out why it didn't continue to be updated.

I just saw your comment. Last month's one must have expired, but this month there are only three. I haven't read the book, I don't like watching the flow of mortals, I'm tired from reading it.