Korean Entertainment: Intertwined Time and Space

There must be a lot of traffic recently for books about second-generation groups Crown and SNSD, right? Why didn't He Suna pass the test when he was so sleepy?

I feel pretty good about women and so on, but I didn't understand it after watching 3 pictures.

Dude, yours is a Korean entertainment novel, not a suspense mystery novel, nor an essay. There is no need to write it in such a literary way, especially the first three chapters, which will easily drive away a group of readers.

I haven't read the book, and I can't even place the name of the male protagonist...

The name is too dramatic, I can't stand it

The writing is so good and worth learning. It's a pity that I didn't sign the contract. When I give you a suggestion, you can divide it into descending lines when writing. It is best not to exceed four sentences in a paragraph, and the wording can be a little less. The recommendation vote is given to you!

Does the author like metaphors so much? There is one metaphor in each paragraph, which is a bit too cumbersome. Various metaphors such as "like" and "like" are used together. After reading this paragraph one by one, there will be another one in the next paragraph. If you delete all the metaphors, the whole text will be much more concise. This is not prose. Except for the necessary prominence, the novel does not have so much space for metaphors.

Ha, second generation, support, come on~

I graduated from elementary school. What you wrote looks a bit like poetry. I can't understand it.

Very tired to watch

It was irritating to watch, there were too many modifiers, and even though there was a dream involved, it still felt very abrupt.

🙂Cut?

I was impressed by the delicate writing, but as soon as I thought of the male protagonist's name, the romantic atmosphere disappeared. It was too catchy.

🙂Cut?

It's very well written, but it's a pity that it was cut. I feel that the most important thing is that the first three chapters were a bit confusing for me to read 😴😰