
Star Sea Mecha Master!
星海机甲师!
- Status
- Ongoing
- Length
- 37k Words
- Genre
- Gaming
- Audience
- Male
- Subgenre
- Game Otherworld
- Updated
- 1y ago
- Source
- Qidian
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97Recommends
3Fans
17Chapters
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Common problem
Let's settle down a little bit. Although Super Mechanic has sacrificed logic and details to a large extent for the sake of fun, it's not like this... I hope the author can settle down a little.
When I saw the mecha route, I thought, I can write whatever I want in the early stage, but in the later stage, I still have to go back to the route of Great Technician Han. No matter how I do the side missions, it won't affect the main plot.
I thought Pippi Shrimp was back, so keep writing. If you're not good at emotional lines, just avoid them first.
This book adopts the setting of a super god mechanic, so everyone feels that the setting is normal.
Isn't that the guy who wrote all those Mechanic fanfics? This introduction to Taima basically copies Leather Armor 🙂
Small tips
It must have an outline, and it cannot be updated before it is put on the shelves, so it will be less recommended It is best to have a female protagonist, unless you write the main plot to surpass Pippi Shrimp; now readers like to read books with female protagonists or harems Don't plagiarize, otherwise they will be banned Don't follow Technician Han too much as a follower, it's best to be both an enemy and a friend. Species, otherwise it would be too boring But the pain point for Mechanic fandom is that it is difficult to marginalize Han Xiao. Similarly, no one writes soul travel to replace Han Xiao, because readers have a high degree of recognition of Black Star You haven't changed the cover For the mechanical department, don't switch to the virtual department and then join the legion? ) You can consider weapons/energy or gunners/mechanical warriors I haven't read your book yet, so that's what I'll do for the time being.
Goshawk Mecha
Yo, yo, not bad, but too few. It might look better if I have a hundred or so.