They Promised to Make Some Money, but What the Hell Is a Literary Giant in Hong Kong?

The topic at the beginning has been talked about for more than a hundred episodes. The more I listen to it, the more speechless and boring it becomes.

All kinds of licking Jin Yong's dog licking articles! 😤😤

Well, the people close to the protagonist make me feel very uncomfortable. They feel more or less like pig teammates and disgusting people, especially the best friend's mother and Ni Laogui. What is especially unimaginable to me is that after 25 years, people still describe the traitor Ni as cute and cute, and even seems to have a tendency to become the protagonist's good friend. What a waste of my time reading.

He wrote The Eight Parts of the Dragon using the pen name Duan Xiaozhu. I wrote Chu Liuxiang and used the pseudonym Chu Liuxiang. I said earlier that I was not famous because of the price, but in the end, I changed my pen names one by one. Is it interesting? ?

I got addicted to Chapter 4 and wrote 10,000 words by hand in one hour. I really want to curse people. Did the author rush to reincarnate? Why did he write such a silly plot? I don't understand. Is he afraid that the readers won't have anything to complain about?

Let's talk about the identity and background of the protagonist. His family had money to send him to study at the University of Hong Kong at that time. Not to mention that his family earned his money and refused to let him go to school. As a middle school student, he could not be poor and live in a pigeon cage. There were relatively few intellectuals in that era, not to mention that the University of Hong Kong taught exclusively in English. You can work as a translator, salesperson, hotel waiter, etc. People will definitely want you if you show your identity and background as a Hong Kong University, because in that era, it was common to be illiterate, not only in mainland China but also in Hong Kong. In addition, at that time, many newspapers and government announcements were all in English. The boss did not even bother to translate the information and did not know what the government tender information was.

There are three big problems. One is the background of the protagonist. Although he has not graduated from Xiangjiang University, he can still work part-time to make money and continue to complete his studies. He will not be reduced to a small gangster. At that time, high school graduates could join companies as managers! ! The second is that it is too procrastinating. It just publishes novels, which are all kinds of nonsense without any plot advancement. Even if you skip chapters, it will not affect your reading. ! Third, even if you are rich, you don't rent a house on the island so that you can deliver manuscripts at any time. Living in a slum is not only unsafe, but the environment is also bad. Why do you do this when you are rich?

I have read about ten chapters, and the main problem is the background of the protagonist. A college student, even if he did not finish his studies, was a high-class person in the 1950s and 1960s. He entered any company and started as a management, and he actually became a gangster? ? ? Dear author, you haven't written much yet, so you can make some changes. If you keep writing, I'll see if you can get more subscriptions!

The Legend of Chu Liuxiang: The Fragrance of the Blood Sea, this title appears fourteen or five times in one chapter. To be honest, if the novel is really painful to listen to, the title of the book is opened and closed. Can the author not write the full name in the novels in the future when referring to the copied novels? For example, this one just uses Chu Liuxiang. I like this kind of novels, but if the author has always written in this way, I probably won't subscribe.

The gold coat is so tight that he even has two pen names 😰

With Ni Kuang's exquisite and self-interested character (when he was in the mainland, he even tore down the wooden planks on the bridge in order to keep warm, causing a passing car to crash, causing a tragic death), do you still expect him to repay his kindness and be grateful to the protagonist? In order to obtain greater benefits, sooner or later he will bite the protagonist back.

I thought it was a bit new, but I didn't expect that the whole article was too concise and loose in structure. There was a hammer here and there, and the most important thing was that there was no sense of substitution. I felt that the pig's feet written by the author were narcissistic and stupid. It was a complete Long Aotian. It was really hard to swallow and I gave up the book.

When I read Chapter 9, I saw another big loophole. That newspaper would serialize other people's works without the author's consent, even if it was a verbal agreement. If they raised the price, you would be in big trouble. Either I'm looking for trouble or I think it's an obvious mistake that shouldn't be made.

Ming Pao had a circulation of 13,600 copies in 1961 and 22,000 copies in 1962. If you have a 1,000-word manuscript fee, you don't have to show off. You have to pay 6 yuan for 1,000 words plus 1 yuan for every additional 1,000 copies in circulation. How do you think that you can significantly increase the circulation just by writing novels? There is indeed enough rubbish to slip away without any brain.

Why did the author choose these two people to be the heroines? Isn't the eldest princess Xia Meng bad?

I don't even know what the author was thinking. The heroine suddenly hangs on the wall, why? Do you want to change the heroine, or does the author suddenly have a cerebral hemorrhage and prepare to go home and move bricks to make money for treatment?

Shennong: The timeline is too far away. I'm not familiar with the characters in the article, nor the female stars, so I'm not naturally very attractive. It's best to start Hong Kong entertainment in the 1980s, when those flower-like female stars began to appear.

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The hand speed thing is too weird. I can write tens of thousands or tens of thousands a day. It's really fake. Even a computer can't keep typing so fast for several hours. Even if you copy it, it's impossible. At the Times Entertainment Bar, hand speed is the most criticized thing. They are all about fast food culture that relies on the industry and not on hand speed. Only represents personal opinion.

Although she is a star, her appearance is completely inconsistent with modern people's aesthetics, and some are even ugly. There is no need to force an obvious setting to be the heroine.

The protagonist has no personality, he's just a good guy. After reading dozens of chapters, I haven't seen anything interesting.

Mainly because it's too confusing and I don't even know what the subject is.

As bland as water, well... The author may not be able to read negative comments

The author is a person with serious literary youth disease, and his illness is not serious.

You can start your own training class, start your own class, create a Kung Fu universe series, a supernatural zombie universe series, a tomb robbing series, a funny horse series, a Dabaisha, Transformers, and a dinosaur series. There are so many that you will be weak in writing, and get a World Film Award! . Write more about daily life, and match more heroines!

Can we save Guo Yonghuai and create a branch plot?

I've seen a lot of comments comparing the author's IQ to that of the author, so I'm not optimistic about this book.

Is this a harem story? I read the synopsis and saw a lot of female protagonists. When I read the first chapter, the male protagonist's mother died, the male protagonist's father married a new love, and the male protagonist had to sever the relationship between father and son. If you write a harem novel about such a male protagonist, will it fit the character?