Lu Mingfei, How Did You Get the Chu Zihang Template?

Have you ever been a dragon? Some things are scribbled and taken for granted.

I don't understand, why did Old Tang become a student? Also, I feel that the author of this book is in his late literary youth.

If Lu Mingfei had a bad start, he would have made a fortune.

Lu Mingfei was stunned. If he didn't write about his love history in high school, he would always think about fighting and killing.

Susie put on some of Nono's skin, which felt a little strange. Also, Zero isn't quite right, it's so weird and doesn't quite match the original work. Yuan Jisheng's role as the director of the Japanese branch's executive bureau was not reflected. The girl control attribute was a bit too prominent, covering up other characteristics.

There isn't much to watch among Dragon Clan fans. 9 Out of 10 books. It's all about writing. Mud cannot hold up a wall. Lu Mingfei showed no interest at all.

The timeline is a mess and the narrative rhythm is a mess.

It feels like Lu Mingfei's version of Chu Zihang and Old Tang's version of Shai Zai

This writing style, this literary youthful taste, it's so right bro, this is the feeling I want. I looked at it, and I guess there are many people who should be paired with Lu Mingfei on the relationship line. It doesn't matter, but I hope that the couple in the original book will not be broken up.

Shennong is here and I have read Chapter 20 so far. The progress is very fast, from writing directly in high school to the end of the first day of freedom. The writing style is okay. I found that anyone who dares to write about Dragon Clan fandom basically has two brushes in terms of writing style, but the transitions are not smooth enough. At the same time, due to the rapid progress, the author finished the plot that should have been described in two or three chapters in half a chapter. As a result, the "literary youth disease ending" that should be placed after a plot, he appeared twice in one chapter. It seems that the writing is very good, a running account? Spoilers begin below, but it's only 20 chapters. It doesn't really matter, but be more rigorous.

Let me write about the bad points of this book first, because I like this book so much that I'm afraid I won't be able to stop talking about the good points 1. The narrative rhythm is a bit confusing, but once you sort it out, it won't be a problem 2. The characters are OOC, but I personally don't feel that it is stiff, more like it completes the original work. There are character parts described 3. It has a system, which is a matter of opinion. I don't like system writing, but the system has very few scenes and can basically be ignored, so it's not a big problem The following are the advantages 1. The writing is good, I think it is at least T1 level. In fact, the writing is not very similar to Jiangnan. I have always believed that for a book, the writing is more important than the plot than the details. Only when the writing is sufficient can people be motivated to start reading, only when the plot is good can people be motivated to read it, and only with details can there be motivation to read it again. The writing style is other On the basis of the book, here are two well-known fan novels in Dragon Clan: Back to Seventeen and Shen Yin to This Day. The two can be said to be similar, but the writing style of Back to Seventeen made me feel bored reading it, while Shen Yin is very enjoyable to read The plot is not written. I won't comment too much after finishing it, but I feel that the plot progress is a bit too slow, maybe it can be speeded up appropriately As for the details, I am not a detail person, and I am not qualified to comment. 2. This book is about daily campus love (?), So you can read it if you get tired of it. Three years after Lu Mingfei returned from the heavens, I hope readers who are young and poor should change their taste 3. The author has many settings that I think are quite interesting. I have never seen them before, such as Zero replacing Lu Mingze and Su Xiaoqiang's origin Okay, I'm going to bed, that's it.

I got Chu Zihang's script. Is Liu Miaomiao secretly in love with Lu Mingfei? Will there be a plot like Chu Zihang helping Lu Mingfei make a restaurant reservation, and Lu Mingfei helping Old Tang make a restaurant reservation? Is this the main story of daily love or dragon slaying?

I really think I can put it on the shelf. It's very well written. If I don't put it on the shelf, not many people will see it.

Put on the character card, single or multiple, you have to mark which ones you accept and which ones you don't accept.

Where is Shennong?

I've been quite busy recently. I'll catch up when I have time. I'll give you the monthly pass first.

I have a question, why don't you just write about senior brother?