War in the Late Tang Dynasty

The author must be a novice. So far, the whole novel has been about salt. No joke. This novel should be renamed "Salt in the Late Tang Dynasty", just like writing a composition. I know salt is important, but don't focus on it in every chapter. Overall it's okay, I can read it, and there are free chapters.

There are too many and cumbersome descriptions of environment, psychology, eyes, etc., And some reduction should be made appropriately.

Make salt, yell, do other things, don't jump up and fly up, the writing style is impetuous and exaggerated, imitating literature, but there is too much written, just focus on the description and describe it more, there is so much. For other things, just write more straightforwardly. Why show off so much? It feels like someone who wrote literature came to write novels. Gao Yue I have been writing for so many years but still have no breakthrough. . From the beginning to the end, there were almost no people farming. I am tired from hard work. The writing technique is also quite good, but there are too many cuts.

I should say tell Ohno Shiming that the Lee family of the Ohno family is dead.

The writing is quite good, but not popular enough. There should be more daily background introduction, and the writing is a bit magical.

I feel that a novel author with good writing style can really bring resonance to the readers through the text, express the immersive environment in the text, and describe the appearance of the characters, allowing us to independently imagine the emotions of the characters, and we will also bring in independent joy, anger, sorrow, and joy to follow the protagonist. "When talking about joy, words and laughter are combined, and when discussing sorrow, we cry together." I don't know whether this sentence is appropriate or not. A good article can really make people feel stuck and unable to get out. Often when they see that the reality is the same as the scene described in the text, they will feel like their memories are coming back.