Life Is About Cultivating Immortals, but the World of Martial Arts

Looking at it now, it's my favorite type, so it's on the bookshelf! Save a few more pictures, I can't bear to look at them👀!

Not bad, please update quickly. The plot is well laid out. Let's start practicing.

Well, it's okay, I can watch it. Somewhat cool. But you can almost do it, but it won't look good if you suppress the protagonist. Because there was no cognition in the past, it was not necessary to recognize one's own power. If you continue to do this later, you will be overpowering the protagonist, which will not look good. And you also said in your article that the emperor has opinions about this place. In this case, there is no way to deal with a powerless child of destiny.

The writing is good, and the first few chapters don't seem to have major problems. However, as the plot unfolds and more and more characters appear on the scene, something very bad appears. The protagonist is like a silly son of a landlord. He lives in the bustling city with money, and everyone has to come to kidnap or prostitute him for free. The protagonist has too little knowledge. His sister claims to want him to live a normal life, but she is so big-hearted that she still comes to this place of right and wrong to play games. It is illogical. Even if she insists on taking her with her for the great opportunity in this city, she cannot look down on the protagonist every time. Don't say that everyone is afraid that killing the protagonist will lead to a violent death. There are always people who are not afraid of death who can do it. It is not difficult to catch him and run away and put him under house arrest. What's also frustrating is that his sister has raised the protagonist too poor, and can pull him around with just a few grains of silver at a time. This way of writing is really unpleasant. The protagonist of Xia Ke Xing is silly, but it is fun. The protagonist has had bad luck for so many years, but he has not promoted his loved ones around him to become super masters. It is unreasonable. I read Chapter 20 directly without reading other comments. It can be said that I did not read and write comments under the influence of the comment area.

If you want to make money, you should make more by suing the production team than you can by writing novels now.

I really accepted it.

The protagonist, who has been through two lifetimes, is also troubled and looks like a native idiot. It's really not my cup of tea, so I slipped away. . . . . .

Looks weird, female author?

There's not much else except that the main character is also a time traveler. His character is too childish, like an ignorant child.

Sword coming? If the protagonist is a native, I won't say anything, but if the protagonist is a time traveler, it would be a bit poisonous.

It's so toxic that the comment section is filled with humans and machines, right?

As mentioned above, the protagonist transforms into a mortal. He comes to the old dragon city to hang a dragon, and after catching it, he returns to the sect, settles the matter with his sister, and quickly introduces him to the sect. I think it looks better. Is it a chivalrous person or a martial artist? Damn it, if you can't read a novel and enjoy it, why bother? Right? Reality is boring enough in the first place, but reading novels is even more annoying. Those useless things are all useless things, with nothing new at all. Pretending to be a pig and eating a tiger is too much.

The protagonist is a pure fool, and reading a few chapters is like teasing a fool. It's so difficult.

How can I put it this way? This is not a time traveler. This is the stupid son of an indigenous landowner. He is the kind who happily helps others count their money after being sold. It's really hard to put into words.

Is this a fucking injustice?

How should I put it? It's too procrastinating. Just those words over and over again. Moreover, the plot and character relationships are too scattered.

I feel like this title is not quite right with the content of this book. When I saw the title of this book, I thought it was a story about cultivating immortality in the martial arts world. Later I saw that this was not a martial arts world. It's a fairy! It was okay at first, but the more I watched it, the more weird it became.

I thought it was a martial arts world when I read the title. But when I read the introduction, I saw another dragon coming out. What, is it a martial arts world like Fengyun?

It feels quite strange. Why doesn't the protagonist do the main quest? ? Don't you have a plug-in? Just finish the main mission. As for other things, why do you have so many settings? It's simply a women's nest. This is something a male channel can write about. Is it the wrong place? Shouldn't it be a women's dormitory?

Can you please stop writing that the streets smell like chicken manure? I've seen this scene several times in the fifth chapter, and it's almost like a slum cultivator.

It's just a waste of money to start a new book, right? We agreed to give the ending to the previous book.

I wish Dada a book to become a god, and I will take advantage of the treasure to push down the book "Golden Crow Chasing Beauty". I wish you a happy path to immortality, mysteries of all kinds of magic, laughter, and beauties. I hope it can bring happiness to everyone.

I finished it in one go yesterday, I was very happy, but I don't want to watch it today, Come to think of it, yesterday I saw the protagonist open his eyes to see where the dragon energy is, what he saw was that there is something wrong with people in the mountains, but the protagonist knew it, but it felt boring after seeing it, It's a pity, I like the writing style, and the description is particularly thoughtful.

I think it's okay. The writing and the story are okay. After learning how to be honest, I started to be inconsistent. The previous writing is really good. Also, I can't call the protagonist a prostitute for free. After all, he paid for something. Otherwise, he would be like an old Taoist priest and he wouldn't be able to get anything.

The title is good and the concept is quite novel. Come on.

I read it in one go, so cool! ! Very engaging

Do you want to ask first and then write? And then start again from which chapter? I just read Chapter 3 now.