Two Realms: I Have an Extraordinary Career in Reality

I feel like the more I write, the more biased I get, and I continue to upgrade my ability. Why do you need such a large amount of money-making content? In the face of extraordinary abilities, making money is nothing... A waste of time...

The theme setting is okay, but the writing style is not. To put it simply, it is a bit intellectually depressing. A top-notch intelligent machine control program that is at least 5 years ahead of the world only sells for 10 million. It's ridiculous.

I feel like the robot part should be changed. First of all, robots like this have built-in numbers. You made such a big fuss because you want to sell the program. The origin of the robot cannot be explained, and you can't fool it out with special effects. Second, if you are a programmer upgrading, it is more important to use the original robot. It is best to add an unboxing video to show the robot's effect. If you complain about this program, it is not good. In fact, I can program, and then install your program on the robot to show your programming ability as a programmer. Otherwise, if you decide on the impact first, people will think it is a special effect.

I can't stand it without even using my brain.

What to do after a Sequence 9 has so many abilities? Create something out of nothing? Modify reality? Storage space? To cut

The setting is what I like, but the writing is terrible and the plot is retarded🥵

The book "Telling the Truth" has a good idea, but the writing is terrible and the setting is brainless. You can tell it's a novice author at a glance.

The subject matter is very good, but the author writes that the sequence of potion rituals requires population, but he cannot just write how many people are needed. In the later sequences, it is recommended to improve the world view, and the rituals gradually become bigger, such as what special conditions need to be completed to advance to the next potion, like the digestion of a special star in the Stars series, which requires the legendary degree recognized by the world and all living beings. Complain about the protagonist's opening live broadcast. If someone is interested in checking later, it will be easily exposed. Although the exposure has no big impact, it can easily make readers feel that the protagonist is not intelligent enough.

It is indeed possible to write, but how do you solve practical problems? Why do you, an ordinary person, suddenly become so naughty? Is satellite surveillance just a decoration? Do high-tech talents not know if it is a special effect? How do you want it to be round?

The setting is okay, but the details cannot withstand scrutiny. 1. It is okay for a painter to live-stream painting, but in the end it is very speechless when it comes to magic special effects, because in the end most of the audience recognizes your identity as a special effects artist rather than the painter. 2. The program is very important in robot fighting, but the hardware technology and materials of the robot itself are also important. To demonstrate your ability, it is better to create an anonymous hacker to attack major international websites, and go one step further to take advantage of both black and white. Ontology plays the role of a hacker, and creates a hacker vest, and plays the role of the whole world. 3. Authoritarian soldier = commanding fans is a bit too far-fetched. Putting the three words "authoritarian", "power" and "soldier" together represents the strong control over subordinates. For groups like fans, you can only guide but cannot forcefully control them.

As for the content, haha, the author just treats the reader's IQ as garbage and flushes it down the toilet. If he is willing to polish it a little, it will definitely be a very eye-catching novel. After all, what is the subject matter? But now it is not much different from other ordinary novels.

Author, find a class and stop writing novels. Writing novels is not suitable for you. You can't open a Meituan crowdsourcing company to run food delivery. You can earn more than you can by writing novels.

The ability of the 9th sequence is no different from that of a god. . . That's outrageous. Void creations tamper with reality and distort reality

I just put the book in the bookshelf and it's cut?

Friendly reminder, put your mind aside before reading.

This book is very creative. But seeing the protagonist unscrupulously transforming into a J-10C triggered my first poisonous point, and transforming into a new game character triggered the second poisonous point. When I saw the natives of the wasteland world directly guessing that the protagonist came from other planets (hell, this is the wasteland world), I was immediately poisoned and died. Isn't this a poisonous point that can be avoided by spending more time?

It's too funny to insist on the whole country of China in reality.

The first chapter is just a piece of shit, what are the good things?

It depends on what you need the power sequence. There won't be any sequence 8 in the last 20 or so sequence 9s. The abilities are too mixed and readers will be confused. It feels like three sequences are overwhelming. Moreover, it is difficult for you to play the role of a soldier in the urban world. Even if you become a soldier, you don't have many opportunities to fight, and you can't take advantage of the network. It is better to take an administrative route such as a mayor. In reality, the local power route brings much more convenience than the army, but it is not easy to write, easy to coordinate, and the ability is not the main attack. Now two auxiliary abilities require one to focus on combat.

Cut it? ? No updates for two days

The setting is novel, from a modern loser to a doomsday resource tycoon, just double wear it once. 1. The birth of a bad guy: when system space meets resource gap Traveling through the apocalypse, using the system backpack, the resource gap between the two worlds is converted into capital: - The apocalyptic wasteland turns into gold: the gold that no one cares about can achieve a class jump instantly when it returns to reality; and the cheap compressed biscuits in the real world can be exchanged for supernatural abilities in the apocalypse. - Power is productivity: modern food and electronic products have become hard currency in the doomsday base. - Professional magic modification and evolution: novel professional setting and evolution. 2. Career setting: a novel illustrated book that breaks through the tradition Needs recognition from others, a bit like wishing to become a god😎

The writing is unsatisfactory, but the introduction is a mess and I can't even focus on the key points.

Does this make sense? 😥

Dear writer, your new book is very good. I have joined the new book investment group. Please update~

Has it been blocked? The author screams loudly!

It's okay, I didn't trick anyone into subscribing, I just G-ed it before it was put on the shelves 😁

Are you still opening a new book? I think the sequence you wrote is interesting.

A unique story with an interesting beginning