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Cn dota hope
I have been playing Dota for fifteen years I still remember reading on the forum that I was the hope of Chinese Dota The sense of immersion is strong The author's writing is very good The plot and game description are also very good The most important thing is that the people can stand up The courage and brotherhood of the male protagonist to overcome obstacles Come on! Keep writing! Rewrite the chronicle of cndota!
Thank you for your support! Signed!
I originally thought that the subject of Dota would not be able to attract enough attention at all, and I was ready to generate energy for my love. Unexpectedly, I signed a contract today. I am still very grateful for everyone's support. I will try my best to write this book well. I hope everyone can experience the joy of DOTA in the past. Finally, I hope that everyone will continue to support me in the future. I would be very happy if you can give me some recommendations to continue reading! ps: It's important to read new books!
I've been following it for a few days. Let me share my feelings. A brief and critical review.
1. The wording is too cliche. I keep using the same few words back and forth. Please change the way of writing. 2. Like ruru, there are too many dramas in the land and it is like a big boss. It feels like you are writing it purely for the plot. Look at the Old Man Cup or the real world, there are not so many bullshit. 3. The sense of excitement is obviously lacking. To be honest, the protagonist's rebirth does not feel like a dimension reduction attack at all. The technical requirements of the current Dota are much higher than those of a few years ago. You can't beat this one and that one, and you have to lay the groundwork for a long time. There is no chemical reaction at all in forming a team. You have to know that the novel you write is not reality. You don't dare to write a protagonist who is too supermodel in a novel. The mid lane calculator next door is the third place in TI. After that, I won the major championship in various major and small competitions and won the TI7 championship. You should learn how to write and feel comfortable. Moreover, the writing in that book is more rigorous than yours. At least the skills and equipment are correct in the previous version. But there are still people in Dota who are willing to write novels, so we can't ask too much, come on.
Thoughts after viewing
First of all, I would like to emphasize that if you write about Dota, I will most likely continue to read it Then, first of all, as a reborn person, I know the changes in the version, and I know which heroes and playing styles are strong, so I don't have to worry about the ace's targeting at all, just practice my own, or in other words, the impact of ace's targeting is not that big. Of course, you can also go to Europe Second, as mentioned earlier, y ang and others, they have some small mental problems and then overcome them, which is a bit too formulaic. Problems should appear little by little, and then find ways to solve them little by little, instead of suddenly appearing in the last game and suddenly solving them in the next game. There is no sense of satisfaction at all Thirdly, I posted a post earlier and said that it was written like a female video. Is it really the case that the single in your team has an accident at home and doesn't have a mouth? Don't know what to say? If something has to be so uncomfortable with just one sentence, you can just say that your family has had a car accident and you can go back first and communicate later. Also, if something happens to the mid laner at home, as teammates and friends, you should at least bring something to the hospital for a check-up? They told me not to continue the fight. After you confirmed it with them, did you find a new mid laner? I understand that you want to change people, but this kind of team, to be honest, is too impersonal in writing. No one wants to stay in this kind of team. I might just take a vacation and be T-rated when I come back In the end, you chose nisha. There is no problem with this, then you already know n Isha is very strong. Should we unify the language? Either Nisha learns some commonly used Chinese, or everyone communicates in English. You are worse than the passers-by in this training match. Yang's writing is too brainless. You don't understand the language. What is there to be angry about? Can't you tell them in advance? Just like fy in the book, start with some simple communication. One mark means going up, two marks means withdrawing, etc. The team needs to be adjusted. How many teams can have five people playing like one person as soon as they start up, especially this kind of international team My personal suggestion above is to hope I hope the author can consider that the problem needs to be solved slowly, instead of suddenly having an epiphany or solving it suddenly and inexplicably. There must be a process. The personal strength of the five people is basically top level, and the protagonist has foresight. If he knows the answer to the version, it is still easy to solve.
The protagonist's fame is a bit tricky
Wings has already won the championship, even after TI6. How come the protagonist's No. 4 Naga is still so amazing? ? ? Isn't AUI2000 the one with the unique skills of No. 4 Naga and Bomberman, who helped EG win the TI5 championship?
Female channel?
It's like a girl's video. If something goes wrong with your family's business or a relative is sick, just say no. I can't explain it to you.
Make complaints
Seeing now, I really have so many things I want to vomit. I suddenly remembered a previous statement about Gao Xiaosong, saying that he brags all day long on the show and no one else can expose him. Until one day, he mentioned my professional field. I feel similar to these now. If you want to write other games, I can't understand it well, so I can get by. But what you wrote is do Ta, there are so many flaws First of all, first of all, Yang is too brainless and like a big fool when you write him. I don't know if it is Zhou Haiyang's usual bad mouth that led you to write him like this, but I think he will definitely scold you after reading your book. Also, as a high-level and professional player, Zhou Haiyang can't see the situation clearly? Which hero has what equipment to reach a strong stage, and which hero is relatively weak at the current time. I, a player with a 3000-point ancestral score, probably know it in my mind. Can he know? Also, I seriously doubt that this book was written by AI. There are many words that appear repeatedly in it, such as so-and-so showing a sneer, so-and-so flipping the chessboard (lifting the chessboard with puopy, until now it is 8, you can do nothing but flipping the chessboard, right), and when the team was ganking, the commentator was saying, so-and-so is done now, no one can save it, etc. Suddenly a certain hero jumped out to hit a backhand and controlled a few people for the opponent. Don't you know that the commentator is from a God's perspective? Why should he be surprised? He can see everyone's every move One more thing, I remember that the protagonist should be Little Naga's debut, when she reached TI7, alchemy, electric dog, nisha's dog head, why are the BPs in recent novels all centered around elves? Everyone is saying that the elves in the protagonist team cannot be released. Do the elves have any highlight moments in the protagonist team? Why can't it be released? Why didn't you take your unique skill Naga when no one banned it? If the Alchemy Electric Dog could still be cheated, why didn't you take the Soy Sauce Naga? Last point, in your latest game, the legion's jumping knife directly changed the situation. The legion's ultimate move is called a duel, not destruction, nor a black hole. It is a control similar to a bat to pull people. He also used the jumping knife alone to grab the opponent's No. 1 Withdrawal. I am also a legion's unique skill. When the legion first jumped, if you didn't cooperate with your teammates, how could you get a kill in the few seconds of the duel? I just mentioned the opponent's big brother. After getting a head, he scared the opponent so much that they didn't dare to go out. It was too natural to write. You also wrote somewhere before that you go to the opponent's tower to gank, and the opponent's tp comes down with the shock wave to counterattack. Have you ever thought about how long it takes for the tp of the opponent to add the shock wave? Is it enough to counterattack In addition, I hope that your next book can get rid of the flaws I wrote, so go for it!
After ti lost, I suddenly found this book. I was thinking about whether I would win the championship in another timeline. I have read more than half of this book. I can only read this book to realize my dream. There are many shortcomings, but I also hope that the author will become better and better like cndota Let me talk about the shortcomings I think 1. The protagonist is reborn but there is no bright spot so far. If the 5th position is only BP, there is nothing wrong with 8bp. Which hero you want to choose for any team depends more on the player's skills and the team's suitability. Take this xg as an example. Timbersaw Sand King. No matter how bp has ideas but no strength, it's just empty talk, so your article is very empty 2. The key game details are not described enough. The article wants to make some people who don't play understand the circle, and take care of newbies and veterans. Newbies may not know what you are talking about when reading your article, and veterans sometimes think that the description is very simple. There is an author next door who writes his own animated pictures every time. This can really be used as a reference. However, although Dota is not a game that relies on operations, it is also a game that relies on operations. One is instantaneous operation, and the other is imagination in operation. If you want to write well, you need to write more executable content. 3. Female team leader. People who read Dota books don't care about this kind of content at all, and it can easily be counterproductive. The audience reading this book may be cloud players who want cn to win the championship. What they need is more exciting game content and more realistic competitions. This book lacks that kind of soul. I hope the author can work hard. After all, you should be the only one writing Dota now. Please write more wishes for the whole village, I hope to see cn win the championship.
Did Mammoth get upset in 2017?
Did the author really check the information?
2025-09-15 Xg lost in the final
It is now 4.48 In the morning. XG, which carries the hope of cn dota, has lost the finals. Ame missed what may be the last chance to lift the shield in his life More than an hour after losing the game, I tried to fall asleep. I tried to convince myself that I would have to go to work later, but the anger in my heart could not subside for a long time After trying to no avail, I arrived downstairs at the company inexplicably 5.
Well. . . The schedule is still too tight, let's fight again next year. See you in Shanghai next year. Jia you a chun yu
Author, please think carefully about who the protagonist is?
After reading a few chapters, is the main character a street kid? There is no sense of presence at all. If you write it like this, it will become a group drama.
Go to lgd? How reluctant are you to live under that old woman?
It's well written, I took it seriously, and I'm going to summon the soul of Wings again soon.
Everything else is fine. You ruru is just as outrageous as the heroine.
Rt, it gives me the feeling that the author has a pure crush
Yang has hyperthyroidism. When speaking, he either steps on a stool or hammers the table. Fy has kidney deficiency, either lazily or yawning
The writing is so disgusting. I knew that LGD was not a clean contract team but got drunk. I basically know this from watching Dota games and anchors. Either Brother Yang's team, or OB's team VG would also be fine. If you can't form an early stage Yb by yourself, you can still pick up cigarette butts like a dog brother no matter how hard it is. If you can't, you can still make some money by leveling up.
I have evil thoughts!
Originally, the top 4 would be fine. As a result, XG won completely! Is it possible? Evil thoughts arise!
Not happy without vomiting
It is acceptable to suppress the desire first, and there is nothing wrong with entering the loser's bracket. But this is such a nonsense for you to lose. 1. Second Jiu Xian did not think of buying life. Not to mention that the protagonist is from the future. He is a normal professional player or even a high-scoring passerby. Is it difficult to judge whether there is buy life based on the opponent's equipment? 2. Take a step back and say, I don't know if I have paid for it, so why are you allin for a second? Shouldn't the correct approach be to maintain your own formation and find a way to kill the wine master? Allin at every turn. How many points does this protagonist have? 3. I have been exaggerating that the protagonist is commanding nb, so nb that I don't know how to play the lineup of Prophet Visage? Bring the line to distract the other side, and force buying after catching the order. Just wait for the next wave. 4. The protagonist has been described many times as saying that the med on the opposite side is a hidden danger, and he still needs to continue to fight the front, right? In the mid-game, after the outer tower is removed and the shield is expanded, the med is no longer a hidden danger in an instant? Now that we understand that med is a hidden danger, we should use this shield to infinitely suppress the opponent's money production space. Or is it that the advantage is allin? For such a clumsy hero like med, he can only stay at home when he is in a disadvantageous situation, and he doesn't understand why he should fight head-on. 5. This means that the protagonist has no picture of team fighting or winning the game in his mind, and he does not know how to win the lineup he chose. Although I'm not that great, I'm just a champion. I only play in the middle. I've also played the mid laner Prophet. This hero is prone to weakness in the later stage and cannot be easily connected to the front. I really didn't expect the protagonist to be so well rendered, and after playing for a long time, there was no picture in my mind. Post a picture of Fangyun
I just finished reading Petroleum Cup and I had mixed feelings when I saw this book.
Every time I put a yang on my head and then pour cold water on it
Every time, I yang my head and pour cold water on it. I don't know how many times. It's getting boring to watch. The latest chapters come almost once in every chapter. I'm tired of seeing the same routine again and again. Bother
I haven't watched it very much in the past month and a half, for a few reasons. Maybe the writing is not as exciting as it was at the beginning. The most important thing is that the pace is too slow. If we continue at this pace, it will take enough time to finish an offline game until the opening of TI next year. . .
Two questions
The first one is called ultra kill in the Dota. It is not a P kill. Secondly, Lotus is a rebound directional skill and cannot solve the big silence. You should use bkb or clone in the void.
This isn't the first time you've had this problem
Dota does not have quadrakill, triple kill, ultrakill or rampage.
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Come on, author, stop being a eunuch.
Support a wave
Rare dota2 e-sports article, cheers to the author.
Has the protagonist turned 2? It is recommended that the protagonist turn 2 😁
I haven't ordered these chapters recently, mainly because the pace feels too slow. The previous plots and rhythms were quite good, but the last few chapters feel like they don't serve the main line, are draggy, and are very disappointing Just a personal opinion
There is no way. In fact, the main reason is that there is no full-time data analyst. In the fourth game, the players are a little overwhelmed. The opponent's data analyst has already interpreted our vision in the first three games. The opponent made adjustments and selected an advantageous lineup to suppress it. In addition, the old 8 has gambling on BP, and the 5th BP was exploded. Failure is inevitable.