Football: Start with Full Potential

Don't write about Liu Yifei, brother, your subscription is not high to begin with. Why did the protagonist write 85 flowers in 1995? Although I also think about China Entertainment, she has nothing to do with football. Chen Duling is quite suitable. His father named him after watching football.

I haven't watched the Chinese Super League and Chinese National Football League for many years. I always skip relevant news when I encounter it. The author is not very optimistic when writing this.

No. The protagonist went to play football abroad and found a domestic guy who was almost ten years older? ? ? You're not writing about China Entertainment, so you can't get her traffic. Will only be disgusted

The most important aspect of the novel is the sense of substitution. The author does it poorly and always changes the reality.

You can have the butterfly effect, but don't make it too much, and you won't be able to get a normal start. The text of football is just a fantasy within a fantasy, and then you create a reality within the fantasy, and you also mess around with parallel worlds. What else are you looking at?

Liu becomes the heroine directly and wants to give up

The character of the protagonist is not written well. To put it simply, the protagonist has no charm. Even though he is so strong, he still licks someone who has some potential in his previous life. The family is also written in a mess. Your protagonist is still a loser with a mentality! It's okay to read the first dozen or so chapters in the refined version, but unfortunately, the rest becomes a mess! My teammates are all tool men. Dong Fangzhuo is very impressive. Even if he declines, he is still a strong player in the Chinese Super League. Do you want to read what you wrote? Whether Chinese football is popular or not is another matter. But your book is going to be useless because it is not interesting to read. Forgive me for telling the truth, because basically everyone who watches football is like me.

I only want to say that there are status skills and active skills. If you like to see them, look at them first. If I don't like to see them, I'll dodge them first.

When you reach full potential, you still need to use restored energy cards. Otherwise, you will be directly judged as the winner. Then what is the difference between energy cards and stimulants?

I've read 20 chapters, and overall it's pretty good. The biggest shortcoming is still a common problem with online novels (it used to be a bad problem among young literary writers, but now it has spread to cool writers), and they don't like to write about the protagonist's progress, gains, and achievements. The protagonist has been training for two months, but there is still no progress at 110? Why don't you quickly add the attribute points rewarded by the protagonist's competition? Where to add it? You won't write about the issues that readers are most concerned about! Why? What is the cool thing about online writing? Pretending to be a pig and eating a tiger, pretending to be cool and getting slapped in the face? Big mistake! The biggest joy of online writing is the sense of gain, and there is no other one The second place is the sense of control (only "Soul of the Team" among football articles has passed) The third place is the stimulation and satisfaction of curiosity (such as "Zhetian", a legendary text) The fourth place is change and compensation …………

But I really hate Liu Yifei. I lose the desire to read when I see the name...

If there is no heroine, don't write about it. The entertainment industry is all about Liu Yifei, and the sports circle is writing about her again. If the cultivator becomes an immortal, will he travel back to Earth to marry her?

The main character has maxed out his talents and yet he still engages in drug addiction. How is this written ten years ago?

Isn't this value invincible in FM? It's still two-speed green, shooting yellow A Werner of the same type can be a bad guy in the five major leagues You still eat beef in the Chinese League. Just go in if you want to.

Just writing about Liu Yifei, I just like my sister, come on, these people really don't understand how good my sister is, she is considerate, sensible, and rich. This is no better than a little girl, she's not sensible, and she still needs you to spend money on her

I originally wanted to add it to the bookshelf, but I saw that I hadn't finished writing the domestic ones before putting them on the shelf, so I said goodbye to you.

If you make random changes again, prepare to rush into the street.

It has nothing to do with football, you might as well write an original heroine

Setting this attribute at the start of fm, only 55 kicks and 18 double speeds account for a huge amount of ca, only 110ca, and other key attributes are also over 12. This tm can be directly used as the main force in my Premier League 😥😥😥 The forward, midfielder, and left and right sides can also be played

I feel that after it was put on the shelves, the author wanted to speed up the pace of the Chinese Super League so that he could quickly get ideas abroad, disrupting the writing rhythm, and then it would become a running account. No matter how fast you go, a year of your Chinese Super League career will not be skipped at once, which means there will be a long running schedule. How many readers have made it to that stage, and even if the author is used to this way of writing, can it return to normal later? And readers who can read the author's book, because the protagonist starts in China, will not be in a hurry to think that the protagonist will jump abroad all of a sudden. There are many foreign countries. It is the author's characteristic to make this book at this stage when the country starts. We want to see the growth of different protagonists and the subtle influence of the protagonist on the Chinese Super League during the growth process, and the different Chinese football ecology. Don't lose your characteristics. My previous book on Basketball started in China. I liked the domestic part and the growth part very much. However, I couldn't stand it after the main character came to the NBA. I wanted to watch it again several times but couldn't stand it at that stage of the NBA. Personal feelings...

I can't figure it out, why would you write about the national football team?

Put it this way, if you write like this, it is basically impossible to compete with Melo at his peak. As far as the protagonist's current timeline is concerned, starting from 2012, it takes at least two years from the Chinese League One to the European League. This is unjustifiable, because it takes at least half a season to cultivate a tacit understanding with teammates, and then it takes two years to achieve results in the second half of the season. Well, it takes at least two years to play in the European League. The first half of the season is to get used to teammates, and the second half of the season is to produce results. Then in the second season, he proves that he is not a short-lived player, but a genius, but his ability is not enough to support him as a starting player in a wealthy club. This requires playing in the five major leagues. Just like the European leagues, it still takes two years. After the second year, you will be able to join a wealthy team. By this time, it has been almost six years and it is almost 18 years. In this way, Melo's peak period has passed. At this time, he is basically competing with the new generation. If you haven't played against the peak Melo, how can you prove that the protagonist is better than Melo?

When I saw the article about national football and domestic football, I just gave up. Even if Maradona came, he wouldn't be able to play in the national team.

It feels a bit fantasy. It feels like the main character is just a dozen of 21, I'm speechless

It's all written in a running account style, and the competition is written with no sense of immersion, tension or satisfaction.

A long pass, a shot, a turn, all based on calculation, remove one, and 20,000 words are gone.

Come on author, I am a semi-football fan and I think your writing is very good ✊✊

I like to listen to books, but I hate the letters that appear in my speech from time to time. I either use Chinese or English. It sounds awkward to use letters. Are you trying to make up the number of words by using vs? You can't use a certain team versus a certain team. Don't use letters anymore.

Domestic plain-cut chicken, I'm not interested in watching it

Eighty percent of it is nonsense, like popular science articles