Traveling Through the Kyuubi: Naruto, Defect to Konoha!

Naruto's transformation is a bit out of line with his pretending to be brainwashed. The psychological transformation can be attributed to Kyuubi's negative emotional influence. But you, a little brat who has never been on the battlefield, can pretend to deceive Lao Jianghu? And the kind that manages espionage? 😒

Weakened, a Naruto who had no interference from Kyuubi and still fully supported him was weak. Naruto is equivalent to a semi-perfect Jinchuuriki (the seal is still there). A "semi-perfect" Jinchuuriki, without the interference of the will of the Nine-Tails, can at least activate eight tails (the fourth generation and Kushina came out with the full activation of the Nine-Tails).

In fact, Naruto's dark story is very contradictory. On the one hand, it bullies Naruto too much. On the other hand, it bullies Naruto to the miscellaneous side. It completely ignores moral ethics and hurts some good people miserably. On the other hand, it is not completely dark and is too good to some of the original beasts. I like this book very much. It handles both aspects very well♥

Well written, it belongs to a new track. It was unexpected and reasonable for Hiruzen to hand Naruto over to Danzo. After all, his old image really looks like a cowardly politician who can compromise on anything.

Have you ever entered Naruto's body? Some things are scribbled and taken for granted.

Do you really think that the third generation is a good thing?

Have you ever been a Kyuubi? Just write it. I take it for granted.

Abuse the main article, you can't pretend to be cool but you will be fooled. In the end, you are dormant. Dormant is not scary. What is scary is the time traveler Kyuubi. You said you deliberately led the situation, forget it, but the result is that you are a dick, and you failed. To put it bluntly, you are here to bash Naruto, good guy, the suffering is all Naruto's and it has nothing to do with you Kyuubi, right? Still, the protagonist of the time traveler is too out of character. Two systems, stretching the hips, and you fit the personality of the anime character. This does not mean that you can't be depressed or happy. The writing of the protagonist of the nine tails of the time traveler is too bad. What I can't stand the most is when I've lost my temper, I'll just scream and scream from now on. I'm so speechless. If I've lost my temper, I've just lost my temper. I have to write down where to call, but the character suddenly disappears. Is this the character of the time traveler Kyuubi? What's wrong is your author's talent.

The third generation was eliminated and Danzo strengthened. Danzo in this book is the most awesome fan I have ever read, not counting the one dressed as Danzo.

Lu Yuan, this name is equivalent to X Haoran in the class in the Internet literary world

Dumbfounded Eunuch?

It's really good. The author has made it clear to you about the new direction 👍

I just wanted to criticize the author for writing nonsense, but I didn't expect that the Taki ninja invasion of the mountains behind Konoha is really the original plot 😂😂😂

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The change of mind is too blunt. I should write more chapters. I plant seeds for him when he encounters injustice, plant the seeds of doubt little by little, and take him to see the darkness. Asura's chakra is the kind of darkness that has seen the world and still loves the world. The change is too blunt, just pure revenge. It's cool and a bit embarrassing to watch.

Many authors regard the paper people as real people, which is too nonsense. They are just tools for time-travelers.

Not bad. The most exciting thing about this book is its grasp of the fan characters. It is much better than many fans. It is obviously very familiar with the character of Naruto. There were a few points where I didn't feel like Naruto's character, but it turned out to be original.

Cut? The changes are too big, I won't be able to compile them later 😰 Why don't you try going back?

I am Shennong and the author is Eunuch. It's a pity. The book is still good 😒

I felt that the writing was good at the beginning, but in the middle I started to lose interest again. The meaning of forcing Naruto to show off in front of Team 7 is unclear, and it is fine for the ANBU to observe Konoha, but it does not focus on describing the process of Naruto becoming stronger under the guidance of the protagonist. I can understand that to rebel against Konoha requires a process of accumulating strength, but since your protagonist is Kyuubi, gaining strength should also be related to Kyuubi, or the protagonist's thorough understanding of the plot. Not to mention that a lot of the content about becoming stronger was not written with emphasis, and it felt like it was just a show. Since you want the protagonist to be the Nine-Tails to guide Naruto, the protagonist should prefer a father-like character, but the protagonist's performance sometimes makes it difficult to give this impression. The summary is that the previous writing was good, but it didn't feel right until the part about escaping from the roots and fighting Danzo. The description is too slow in terms of unclear meaning. Naruto said that he wanted to understand the darkness of Konoha, but in fact, the greatest darkness of Konoha has been buried in the roots. It is no longer a good choice for him to stay in Konoha. He should have run away long ago after getting something truly valuable under the guidance of the protagonist. (For example, the Flying Thunder God is also very difficult to obtain for Naruto who controls Danzo himself) At that time, you can guide Naruto outside to let him know what true peace is.

What the hell is this, to forcefully suppress the combat power💩

I haven't seen the new version, it's interesting.

Very well written, keep it up 💪 Update soon

It's interesting. Please give me a recommendation vote. Don't be a jerk.

It's awesome, it's a different fan, the author is more and more

This book is like having a poop in a hurry but can't come out, and suddenly holding it back

This writing is too funny, and some plots are forced to be added The tailed beast doesn't want to give power, and the jinchuriki is not proficient in sealing or illusion. How can he force the power of the tailed beast?