Improving Martial Arts: Starting from Cows, Horses and Miners

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The pattern of the first chapter uses the shortest length and the most concise language to explain the time, place, characters and events to complete the task of attracting readers and leaving suspense. In short, it is to give readers reasons to continue reading in the shortest possible length. Your Chapter 1 contains: The protagonist is relatively useless, the Golden Finger routine is too ancient, the writing is not long and boring, and it does not absorb my points. The current mainstream of Xuanxuan is Leziwen and imagination. The imagination is like folk culture and reflection. Routines, such as the aggregation of mysterious extraordinary systems, chat groups, Gu Zhenren's Gu, Xuanjian's Zifu, etc. The first chapter of "Xiangong Kaiwu" includes: the secret treasure of the Immortal Palace, the mysterious boy of the cultivating immortal family, and the wonderful mechanism. The first chapter already contains three plots of an incident, and introduces the protagonist's appearance, while leaving suspense. The background includes the secrets of the Lava Immortal Palace, the political operations of the Immortal Cultivation family, and the settings of the Cultivation World institutions. The events include the Xiuxian family's recruitment of mechanics, black market transactions, and ambush battles. The time, place, characters, and events are clearly explained, and the protagonist is also described to a certain extent: with an evil sect style The killing is decisive and mysterious. The worst situation for a web article is that perhaps the reader has no expectations at the beginning, or doesn't know what to expect. Attracting readers, starts from the title of the novel, the introduction of the novel, and the first chapter of the novel. What information settings should be displayed and what information should be hidden for the purpose of narrative techniques or plot foreshadowing all need to be considered. We can discuss the novel together, and I can give you some suggestions. It depends on whether I have time The writing is still good, the writing style is good, I can give 30 points, and I can sign the contract, but I still lack some ability to express the story, >Don't look at me, I'm lazy. Although I haven't created a masterpiece, I have read thousands of online articles and have been a bookworm for ten years.

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If the level is not enough, it will continue to settle.

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To be honest, it doesn't look good, or there is nothing interesting to watch. If you are not a master, don't try to write such a low spawn point. The previous explanations of the plot are like chewing wax. You should just skip the opening process, and then blow up the mine in a few chapters, and escape accidentally. I really can't stand this kind of development inside.