I'm in Sunagakure, so My Understanding Is a Bit Strong

This kind of enlightenment article feels meaningless. Is that your understanding? It is obviously a system that rewards you. Although it is impossible to describe the feeling of enlightenment. After all, if you really realize it, you will not be able to write a novel. You must at least abide by the underlying logic. I didn't even learn the basic knowledge of this world when I first started traveling through time travel. My understanding jumped out at a glance. Why not just send him a system?

Personally, I feel that there are some stains. The main character can be sleazy first and then come out when he can beat them, or he can directly use the strength of the heroine. As a result, the main character secretly helps them, and then refuses to accept it. They are really speechless. I really don't like these main characters. Someone slaps you, and you go over to help him after someone slaps you, and then finally change him. I really feel that these main characters have IQ problems.

Chapter 12, the protagonist Gaara feels that he is stronger than Rasa in all aspects except that he has too little chakra. As long as the chakra is improved, he can defeat Rasa. He also feels that he is slow to extract chakra. The question is, Gaara is a jinchuriki. Will jinchuriki still worry about the amount of chakra?

Your understanding still has a notification sound, right? You might as well be called the system. All your understanding is given to you by the system. You are completely taking advantage of yourself. Your IQ is worrying.

The pig's feet are a bit long-winded and not interesting.

So where is the understanding? Why can't I see that the protagonist has any understanding?

So boring, not as good as a running account

Elementary school birthday note

Your book has no sense of expectation, substitution, or urgency. It gives the impression that Long Aotian is just a few years old. The timeline selection is too poor. You choose to travel through the timeline before the third war. At least there is a sense of urgency that Konoha Iwagakure is about to overwhelm me. Gaara as a boy in the high school entrance examination is also OK. It is more exciting to save his father, Konoha collapse, etc... But look at your timeline for yourself. What can you write about Gaara as a child? All the way to the 4th battle with Long Aotian?

What is popular now is family fun, comedy and fun, but there is no market for bitterness and hatred. Just watch Chinese movies and you will know what has the market.

After learning Thunder Escape, the electromagnetic force is already invincible. 😎

Comprehension article, go and see whether you defected at the age of three or five at the beginning, Tomato's, people's brains are bigger than yours. The body of direct information, you can read all the past ninjutsu and intelligence history of the ninja world by looking at space.

It's worthy of 300,000 words but less than 5,000 collections. It's so boring... It's like pretending to be a slap in the face and accepting the little brother.

It's really boring, it's another invincible cheat cheat. Can't you write a story about ordinary people trying to become stronger? There is a system for dreaming every day, and every novel is the same, so uncreative! I get tired of reading it too much, copying it over and over again, changing the soup without changing the medicine. Is this the so-called market value?